#2 - AsYa/KaBhi : A Hidden Love... CHAP.10-P.128 ! COMPLETED ! (24/12) - Page 94

Nice update dear
Beautiful story with perfect ending.
Asad confession was good. They settle their business in both places. Zoya found the family which she always wanted. I understand ur pov regarding wrapping up & I wish u all the best for ur studies & future. Thanks for wonderful story & pm

It was a cute and wonderful story..

Salaam Bano...,
Well first of all iam happy for you that you have taken this decision regarding your career...and i would support you in that...ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR CAREER Dear...
Well coming to the story...well by reading this update i feel that it wasn't rushed...because you have covered almost all front from confession , to the immagration test success , then Asad's success in hotels...,then his wish to go back to Bhopal and meeting his family...everything...and keeping that aside...a very beautiful and adorable confession by both of them...
From starting only you were ready to kill ApPY...
Totally in love with this chapter...but alas it ended...i am not sad about it...but the thing is that we will miss some more cute ASYA moments and updates in this..


The confession part was brilliantly penned ApPy...like how Zoya realised that she can't force Asad to love her...and she put a facade...so she can avoid rejection...but suprisingly she was in for a amazing confession...
Asad very well understood that Zoya is going away from him so he without wasting anymore time and waiting for perfect moment...made that moment special for both of them by confessing...and he didn't missed to tell her that he was hurt that she took it casually but nevertheless...
Zoya's reaction and then her rightful demand for that ' KISS '...was very special Bano...
Ohh God so going to miss this story a lot...and this iamm telling very sincerely dear...
So take care Bano..
And ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR FUTURE ALSO..
I know we have a another story to say almost a goodbye...but here at this story it is a last...

Hi lovely story 👏 n ending also but u r quting 😭 we will miss u n u r storys n always be happy 😃

that was really a good update...

story ended 😭
beautiful and happy ending 😊 😉
will you please give an epilogue 😉
write more...😊

i m more than glad Bano that u atleast wrapped it up in a proper way... gave us an ending...
i really feel bad when writers leave their work n keep us waiting forever 😔
so thanks a lot...
n wish u all the best fr ua future
Good luck dear

Lovely ending... They confessed 😳...

Didn't expect them to settle in India...but that was great!

Omg..story khatam hogaya...