Rishbala OS: A kiss of love (narrative poem)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey friends.. So I got this strange idea of writing a narrative poem on Rishbala. Its not on their whole journey.. I wish i could do that.. but its a scene that I have created in a form of poem.
Usually i like to explain the background through the story itself but here I was not able to bring out the background as I didnt want to use anyone else's name in the poem except for Madhubala and RK. So this is a scene I created on the track when Madhu had left RK, after Riya's fiasco. I didnt watch the whole Riya track but saw later on that Madhu had left RK in front of his eyes but he did the least to stop her at that time. Well needless to say I hated him that time.

Okay!! Coming back to my OS. So here Madhu and RK have met after 2 years after that night as Madhu had disappeared somewhere. And needless to say RK suffered each day without her and yearned for her.


A kiss of Love

He stood there in wait for the lift to stop,
An important meeting he had, which he couldn't drop.

The lift halted and out he had to go,
When he saw her enter in all her glow.

She looked at him too and they both froze,
Before they realized, the doors had closed.

Packed in the lift with strangers all around,
She moved closer to him as she still felt safe with him deep down.

Words left their tongues and their heartbeats did the talking,
They didnt even realize when the memories came to them flocking.

Facing his chest, she remembered the time she used to rest on it,
He smelled her hair and wished to play with them, the way he always did.

She couldn't look up to his face, fearing to break her dream,
He wanted to look in those eyes and cherish again that beam.

Unable to fight her urge anymore, she looked up to meet his eyes,
Pain and tears peeked through them, despite all his tries.

She had the same beauty though now mature,
But he was still that evilly handsome for sure.

He felt a push and they jerked out of their trance,
And he decided not to loose again this chance.

Before he could understand further she had walked away,
The people around, also came in his way.

He ran out of the lift and looked all around,
But his Madhubala was nowhere to be found.

His mind would say it was just a dream,
No! She was here! His heart would scream.

Only if he could apologize just for once,
Or maybe he should accept her absence.

But he couldn't live anymore without her,
She has to be with him whatever the reasons were.

As these thoughts created in him a storm,
He saw someone hiding behind a vase, of her form.

Somehow he knew it was her, scared to face him again,
That idea itself sent in him waves of pain.

He went closer to her only to hear her sob,
He was a source of pain for her, his heart started to throb.

In a shaking voice he called out, "Madhu.."
Her name from his mouth made her turn to statue.

The storm of emotions started building in her heart,
She wanted to cry, to laugh, to scold and to taunt.

But its her RK! Her heart screamed.
Didnt you want his arms? Isnt that all you need?

Her innocent heart was too joyed to understand her situation,
But her mind knew she couldnt give in on anny condition.

She wiped her tears and came forward stern,
Strict was her demeanor, her eyes had a burn.


"Do you want to break me more?" She asked,
"I am not the same, who was silly and chaste,
You wont be able to break the pieces that are already shattered,
Go away! I am not the one to whom you mattered"


He stared at her for a little while,
His eyes had a hurt but his lips smirked in his usual style.


"I know you still love me, the way you always have,
I can hear my name in your beats" he said in his suave


Her nose flared in anger, her eyes had a glare,
She still had accusations for him was very clear.

But he was RK, not any random loser,
He had lost her once, but that wouldn't be the usual.

Closer to her he came, she got aware of his allure,
Much she wanted to control, but was to loose herself soon for sure.


"You have been on my mind since the day you went away,
Though I tried alot, but couldn't forget you in any way.

Dont tell me you forgot those days and nights,
Dont tell me you didnt think that I loved you with all my might.

One mistake, One blunder it was for sure,
But my love should have been enough to have you rest assured."



"You blame me for what you destroyed,
You are asking me to have saved, with which you toyed.

I was left broken, too scared to trust again,
I thought all my attempts, all our love just went in vain."


They stared at each other as their complaints were now bared,
It was the same pain, they realized, that they both shared.


"I want to start once again,
Undo what had given us both pain."



"I want you to suffer and bear this hurt,
Know how I felt when you broke my trust."


"It isn't what you think,
Except for you, I never had any link.

The pain I have felt for years now,
The suffering you say, has become my part somehow."



She decided to ignore and turned around,
But in his arms, the next second she was bound.

She looked up to his face, trying to scold,
But his eyes had another story that was yet to be told.


"Dont destroy what we can still save Madhu,
I would mend everything, we will start anew".


She felt weak in her knees nd in her guts,
She wanted to give in and be his, with no ifs and buts.

With him she had the most beautiful days of life,
With him she wanted to be even after they died.

One mistake was for sure smaller than the love they shared,
But has he really changed? Did he really cared?


Sensing her fear, he pulled her close,
A kiss of love was the way he chose.

Their lips met and their fears washed away,
His kiss spoke of promises which were once made.

Her heart was filled with his love once again,
The kiss made her feel the only one in his heaven.

He poured all his pain and longing through his lips,
His words couldn't have spoke what screamed in his kiss.

When they parted she had her smile back on her face,
She had revived the same vigour, the former grace.


"I missed you RK" she said with a tear,
"That wont happen again coz I would always keep you near."


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So pleassseee friends.. do tell if you liked it or not.. and sorry already if it was a failed attempt.. 😆
Thanks al for your time..
Love you all.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yayyy first one to comment
It was beautiful 😊
Edited by v.p.joshi - 10 years ago
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The idea is so unique. 1st tym I have read something here..so beautifully narrated dear. The way you depicted their emotions..the words went through my heart. I could sense what they feel.. their pain washed away with a Kiss of Love.. 😳 awesome. Thanks for PM Maryum.
Yayy I came second ⭐️
Edited by Miss_uliuli - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful poetic os, yammy!!👏
loved it!!⭐️
a very different attempt!! & U have written it brilliantly.👏

few fun questions,
when did madhu rest her head on rk's chest in serial?? There was always a pillow wall right??🤣
when did rk played with madhu's hair??🤣
when did they kiss in serial?? Thst too in public?? We got only camera angle kiss right??🤣
when did rk stole madhu's line?? I ll mend everything - Mein sab teek kardoongi (in hindi)🤣
when did rk had tears in serial?? When he became Mr.glycerin??🤣
when did they become chipku?? They were clinging to each other, smelling eachother in elevator??🤣
answerme yammy?? Answer me?? The nation wants to know??🤣

A kiss of love kicked their past sufferings & Kissed their bright future!! So lovely!!😛

i m so glad u gave me my right kameena's Trade mark smirk!!😉

really loved d os & Also its so colorful😃

thanks for d pm dear😳

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG .. what a beautiful poem! You write so well! Loved it.
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Originally posted by: madhurish

Beautiful poetic os, yammy!!👏

loved it!!⭐️
a very different attempt!! & U have written it brilliantly.👏

few fun questions,
when did madhu rest her head on rk's chest in serial?? There was always a pillow wall right??🤣
when did rk played with madhu's hair??🤣
when did they kiss in serial?? Thst too in public?? We got only camera angle kiss right??🤣
when did rk stole madhu's line?? I ll mend everything - Mein sab teek kardoongi (in hindi)🤣
when did rk had tears in serial?? When he became Mr.glycerin??🤣
when did they become chipku?? They were clinging to each other, smelling eachother in elevator??🤣
answerme yammy?? Answer me?? The nation wants to know??🤣

A kiss of love kicked their past sufferings & Kissed their bright future!! So lovely!!😛

i m so glad u gave me my right kameena's Trade mark smirk!!😉

really loved d os & Also its so colorful😃

thanks for d pm dear😳

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🤣 🤣
Comeon Sudha.. dont forget their numerous hugs.. and our loving PDA couple.. they never bothered who was around.. 😳

And i can understand your complain for a kiss.. 😆 i have a similar one..

As for Madhu's all time fav line.. I hav no answer to that.. 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow, superb I love it. Ur writing style is brilliant. Thanks for pm me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: k.atrina75

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🤣 🤣
Comeon Sudha.. dont forget their numerous hugs.. and our loving PDA couple.. they never bothered who was around.. 😳

And i can understand your complain for a kiss.. 😆 i have a similar one..

As for Madhu's all time fav line.. I hav no answer to that.. 🤣 🤣


oh my bad! How i forgot my pda couple so soon lol..
one wrong question. I agree. They never give a damn to their surrounding lol..

glad u have d similar complaint lol..but if u didnt write d kiss part then we would be wondering what kiss of love when there is no kiss?? Lol.

okay for a change our rk used that line & Made madhu realise how annoying that line is lol

thanks for answering my funny questions.

p.s today i was searching for a song lyrics & Found a song called "a kiss of live" & Felt that very catchy & Thoughy to write an os on that title but i had to remind myself that i quit writing & Left d idea & See now i got an os with a similar title but it was life there & Here its love..but almost close. We have some mind connection yammy lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice piece of poetry u wrote here...
Thanks for d pm...
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Originally posted by: madhurish



oh my bad! How i forgot my pda couple so soon lol..
one wrong question. I agree. They never give a damn to their surrounding lol..

glad u have d similar complaint lol..but if u didnt write d kiss part then we would be wondering what kiss of love when there is no kiss?? Lol.

okay for a change our rk used that line & Made madhu realise how annoying that line is lol

thanks for answering my funny questions.

p.s today i was searching for a song lyrics & Found a song called "a kiss of live" & Felt that very catchy & Thoughy to write an os on that title but i had to remind myself that i quit writing & Left d idea & See now i got an os with a similar title but it was life there & Here its love..but almost close. We have some mind connection yammy lol



Ohh my! Really? This tym I got in ur head.. yes yes!!
I thought only you invaded my brain..
But that's strange really..

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