Let's Fix Our Broken Hearts- A Vidarth SS- updated on pg 4

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payal

@Payalchoudhary

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Wow amreen...
What a beautiful start yr...
I read both part together...
I just loved it girl..
Parth ne divorce paper jala deye
Hahaha...
I am happy...
Update soon...

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MagicalWish

@MagicalWish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Amazing! I read all three chapters in one go. Loved the concept! 😊

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KAJAL

@foreverhers

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Unreserved my previous comment on Page 3.

Bauhat jald hi India mein flood aane waala hai and the reason is obviously you...
You made me cry so much.. *sniff* *sniff*
Damn it!! You made me so emotional with Vidushi's break-down.
Tere charan kahaan hai guthli?? Mujhe tere charan sparsh karna hai... That was just mind-blowing brilliant!
Always the one to use less words, it intrigues me how you make such emotional chapters?
Ah! Did I just read baby in the chapter??? *blinks*
Guthli!! This torture was itentional, wasn't it???
Tu ek baar ghum k aa fir dekh tu!!
Update soonish after 15 days..

Regards
Keya

P.S.- I hope that aunty and your sister are fine. May they get well soon.
And you also stay healthy.

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Aimy

@aimyx

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Awesome update Amu. Really intriguing. And it is getting more and more interesting. Loved it.
Hope your mom and sister get well soon.

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Happy_hippy

@Happy_hippy

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Wow Amu...brilliant update...

Keep it up...of course family comes first ..updates can wait..

Take care of ur family n ur self...wish your mom n sis a speedy recovery...

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sakina1267

@sakina1267

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Res:)

Unres..

Amu 🤗

Wow yaar what a concept...

Amazing... i really liked every chapter...

Jordaar.. bus only one issue behna please chapter ki length badha de😉

Waiting for next update. .

Update soon...😊

Edited by sakina1267 - 10 years ago

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Moony87

@Moony87

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Nice update.. So the divorce.. it involves their baby.. Ekdum jhatka de diya tumne.. Wasnt expecting this angle.. Vidushi's loss and Parth's guilt.. both are nicely described.

Jaldi jaldi apni mom aur behen ko thik karke.. Write again.

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