Let's Fix Our Broken Hearts- A Vidarth SS- updated on pg 4

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<font color="#000000" size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">This one's for you, Ash di! 😊
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'I want a divorce, Parth.'

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The words left Vidushi's mouth, as bleak and numb as her red, swollen eyes. This was the last straw, and she couldn't take it any more. The countless number of fights, the hurtful accusations, the misunderstandings and the gap between her and Parth which was widening with each passing second.


And after crying and crying and crying so much that her tear ducts dried up...she finally made the toughest decision of her life.


Parth's expression of anger changed immediately! His blazing eyes softened for a heartbeat, and then, his expression turned into one of total disbelief.


'What are you saying??' he asked Vidushi, grabbing her shoulders harshly.


'What you just heard,' she replied with the same numb and cold demeanour. The force of Parth's strong hands did not affect her at all. After all...the physical pain was nothing compared to the emotional pain.


He let go of her.


And just stared into her eyes, trying to find some emotion. But all he saw was emptiness and darkness.


A huge dark void devoid of all emotion.


'Sign these papers...and set me free,' said Vidushi, handing Parth the divorce papers and a pen. Then, without even looking back once, she walked back to her room.


Parth went through the papers. He saw that she had already signed them.


And before he knew it, salty water blurred his vision and started flowing down his cheeks.


He sat down, composed himself and wiped his tears. His fingers bent around the pen, ready to sign the papers.But as the pen was about to touch the paper, he stopped.


He couldn't do it. He just couldn't.

He went up to the terrace to get some fresh air.


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Vidushi sat on the bed in solitude. Her tears had dried up. Her eyes were swollen, red and paining. She had no strength left to cry anymore.


She was tired. And she felt like an empty shell. A shadow of her former self.


She had been taking anti depressants for the last one week. Not that they seemed to be helping much.


She searched for the anti depressant tablets in her medicine box. Seeing that they were over, she opened her drawer to get out a new container.


And then her eyes fell on her wedding album. THEIR wedding album.


And the sudden wave of nostalgia hit her!


TO BE CONTINUED...


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So, this is my first attempt on Vidarth.


And it is dedicated specially to .Burn-The-Ashes. aka Ash di! 😳


For being the queen of dark writing, a crazy Vidarth shipper and an awesome friend! 🤗


I am falling asleep 😆...kaafi late ho chuka hai na. So I have decided to continue it with a sequel. 😊


Will update soon! XD


xoxo

Amreen 😉


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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm really sorry if this is not up to the mark.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amu girl!
You dedicated your first ever Vidarth work to little old me?
Gosh you do know how to make a girl feel at the top of her world! Love you for this girl! Have been waiting to read a VidArth piece from you for AGES !

Now, about the prologue:
First thought : She wants a Divorce? WHY *wailing*
Second thought: Amreen you sneaky kid! You better tell me why she wants a divorce and what he did and what she is remembering!
Third thought: UPDATE. NOW.

Aight. Now coming to the mood of the piece, it is one of those works where the mood is set prefectly. A grey sort of tone, reeking of despair. You raise a lot of questions straight at the prologue. Which is a mark of a good writer.
Dialogues and reactions are very much visual and it is written flawlessly!

I am so sorry for unresing late and for any anxiety that may have caused you. I know waiting is irritating and scary and I promise to unres early next time!

Looking forward to the next update girl! I'm loving your fresh perspective on the characters. Can't wait to see how this tale unfolds!

And as for the title of ' queen of dark writing' ...Don't you wish you could read my dark mind?
Love you for this wonderful piece and continue quick!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow ...Amu good work 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Eagerly waiting for the next part 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

And true Ash is queen of dark writing 😉😉😉😉😉😉

Good work Doll 😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First Vidarth attempt and this is really good.👏 Top it with dedication to Ash makes it all the more special. Yep, Ash rules dark stuff.. Indeed the queen of dark writing.. 😊
Coming to your update.. It was a perfect set up for the next part. Reading it keeps you wondering, what might have happened. The Vidarth here are totally opposite to what they are in the show and that adds a new flavor. Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Marvelous and magnificent Os.
please do write more on Vidarth
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res!!!!!

unres!

a vidarth ss!

that too from you?😲

i am shocked,surprised but now i am fine😛

continue soon girl

jiya:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...amreen..first attempt and superb work...excited for next update..🤗really loved it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you so much for all the appreciation and compliments! 😳

NOTE- I have just realised that this story cannot be finished with just one sequel. It'll need a few more chapters. So...I have officially converted this into an SS! 😃

xoxo
Amreen 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow Amu ..really good...pls continue , would love to know ki exactly kya hua tha?
N I must say ur writing style is really good.
Tell me the truth ,are u really 13? Coz ur writing sure says otherwise...ur writing sounds all grown up !! Really good..keep it up Kiddo!! Really , I'm super impressed with ur work...
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