OS: The best anniversary gift -Full english version on Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ok guys..dis OS is based on d happenings of today's anniversry episode. Some of you might not agree and have objections to the content, pls forgive me in case you disapprove. (This OS was written bfor d report revealing scene was aired on d show)

Edit: I hv made some changes here n there, do check out. 😊

If u hv difficulty in understanding the hindi dialogues, here is a link to the full english version: English version

The best anniversary gift


Raman was still unable to control his laughter, it had been more than 10 minutes since Ishita had finished explaining him about the belly dancer - interior decorator confusion that had just happened.

"Omg, videos to dikhaye nahi usne mujhe, samples laane ko kahe the na tumne!" he spoke to her naughtily, still laughing.

"Raman!" she hit him on the shoulder.

"Aur phir live bhi nahin dekhne diya tumne!"

"Ab marne waale ho aap mere haathon Raman. Apni shaadi waale din shaheed hona hai aapne?" she slapped him thrice on the shoulder.

They both continued laughing, giggling and teasing for sometime.

Raman: " Vaise agar ye suite tumne nahin book karvaya to kisne kiya ye?"

Ishita: " Omg itni der se baithe hum yahan pe, kahin koi confusion to nahin hai? Let me call at the reception "

His phone beeped. It was Mihir's message: " Bhai hope u r liking the surprise. The suite booking was Papaji's and Appa's idea, enjoy to the fullest tonight with Bhabhi. Wishing you a very happy Anniversary!"

Raman: "Ye lo, yahan hum puri family se bhaag rahe the, yahan ye suite humari family ne hi hamein privacy dene ke liye book kiya hai! This suite is our Anniversary gift from our family."

Ishita: "Kya? Omg. Let me just call up mummyji and thank her"

She called up both mummyji and amma and they both expressed their gratitude.

Ishita: " Ok. Ab family ka gift ho gaya, maine bhi aapko gift de diya. Mera gift kahan hai!"

Raman: "Mera gift abhi diya kahan hai tumne?"

Ishita: "Oho, atleast aapko pata to hai mera gift kya hai. Kal theek vali interior designer bhej doongi aapke office mein. Aur maine humare liye yahan dinner plan kiya tha. Aur vaise bhi wo belly dancer aayee thi na yahan, to 3 gifts ho gaye aapke meri taraf se! Ab its ur turn for gifting me!"

Raman: "Diya to tha maine tumhe raat ko surprise"

Ishita: " Hmmm.. vo bahut sweet surprise tha vaise, but wo sirf surprise tha, gift nahin tha. Aur aapko Ruhi ne kitni baar samjhaya hai ki hum girls ko gifts achche lagte hain! Aapko mujhe gift dena chahiye! Kahan hai mera gift Raman?"

Raman:"Mujhe laga ki wo surprise kaafi hoga..gift to main laya nahin"

Ishita: " Raman! Aise nahin..gift chahiye mujhe!"

Raman: "Achcha achcha baba ek minute. Apni aakhein band karo"

He pushed his hand inside coat pocket and took out an envelope.He pulled open her hand and lay the envelope on her palm.

Raman : "Aankhein kholo apni"

Ishita: " Envelope? Isme kya ho sakta hai.."

He smiled, his eyes set on her. "Khol ke to dekho.."

"Medical report.." she read. And seconds later she realised it was her own medical report, for some moments she just starred at the contents of the report disbelief.

"Ye kya hai Raman? " she asked him, the contents had still not sunk in her, for so many reasons. There were way too many things going on in her head simultaneously.

" Doctor to tum ho"

" Haan par Raman ye.."

He came forward and took both her hands in his, and held them securely.

Raman: " Actually recently somebody in my office had a baby after 10 yrs of marriage. Usse baat karte karte pata chala ki her wife had a condition similar to yours. There have been a some medical techniques that have come up only recently, those helped my colleague's wife to concieve a baby. I then took your reports from Amma and visited the doctor. And you see these reports, he told me that your condition too is curable and maybe even you could deliver a baby in future."

The realisation hit her out of nowhere. For the longest time she had believed that she could never be a mother. She had accepted this bitter truth, had never considered an alternate possibility. She was still in shock, the happiest shock of her life. Tears rolled down her eyes non-stop.

He pulled her closer.

" Tum please ise aise mat lena ki mujhe tumse koi bachcha chahiye isi liye maine ye sab kiya. Its just that I want you to be happy Ishita. I want to do everything possible to make you happy. Main jaanta hoon is maa na baan paane ki vajah tumne kitna kuch khoya hai, kitna kuch suna hai. I know tum kabhi kuch kehti nahin but this thing pains you deeply. Aur jab maine suna ki tumhari ye problem shayad resolve ho sakti hai, to mujhse raha nahin gaya and I just took these reports to the doctor. " he spoke, gently wiping her tears.

"Hmm..aapko koi clarifications dene ki zaroorat nahin hai Raman, I know your intentions, I know" she spoke, her voice choking at times as she sobbed.

"But ye sab Raman..you dont know what that means to me, you dont know. Main shayad maa ban sakti hoon! Oh god oh god" she pulled him closer wrapped her arms firmly around him.

He ran his hands down her hair continuously to console her. "You have been so kind to the rest of the world, you hv been the perfect mother to my kids. You definitely deserve a lot of happiness Ishu." he kissed her very softly on the head from the side.

She calmed down after crying out incoherent words between her showers of happy tears.

She couldnt say it so openly to him, for they hadnt discussed those things yet. They hadnt even confessed yet! But there was only one thought in her mind- if things could work out for her, she could have his baby in her, she could raise a part of him in her. Him, the love of her life. Her everything. Probably nothing in this world could make her happier than this news, this was the best possible anniversary gift she could receive. Raman had brought so much happiness to her life, their marriage was indeed the biggest celebration of her life.

Ishita: "Main nahin jaanti thi ki main kabhi itni khush bhi ho sakti hoon Raman. Pata nahin kahan se aa gaye aap meri zindagi mein. Thank you so much for making my life complete.Thank you for giving Ruhi and such a wonderful family to me. And you know I cant thank you enough for this gift."

She pulled him apart gently. They looked into each others eyes lovingly for some time.

They chatted for sometime and finally sat down on the bed.

" Vaise you never told me that you do think of making babies with me" she spoke to him teasingly.

Raman: " Tumhe nahin pata tha? Vaise not making babies exactly, but doing IT with you is in my mind all the time"

She raised her brows.

Raman: "You dont even know how many times I have had to resist the temptation, kya kya sapne dikhati ho tum pata hai!"

"Achchaji!" she spoke but then looked away shyly as she started to realise where this was heading to. She was blushing throughout.
He grabbed her hand, pulled her closer and rested his hands on her shoulders.

"Ab maine tumhe itna bada gift diya hai aaj to ek aur chota sa gift to tum mujhe de hi sakti ho..wat say.." he winked at her, looking at her lecherously.

She pushed his hands away.

"Aise kaise..Aapne woh tak to kaha nahin ab tak mujhse.." she gave him an eyebrow flash.

Raman: " Wo karne ke liye wo kehne ki zaroorat nahin hai technically dekha jaaye to.."

Ishita: " Ofcourse zaroorat hai!"

Raman: " Achcha bachchu! To theek hai. Bol deta hoon. Isme kya hai"

He pulled her close in a jerk, really close.

"I.." he looked into her eyes.

She felt her heart pound heavily inside her. He gazed down her nose onto her lips, then gazed back up to look into her eyes. She could feel his warm breath against her facial skin.

"I..." his voice choked.

He gathered himself up again. "Ishita.. I..love.."

But before he could complete the sentence she shut his mouth with her right hand.

" I think I should let go of my ego first Raman. You deserve it totally. I wanna say it first. Please let me."

She could feel his lips curve into a smile beneath her hand.

"I love you" she spoke." I love you Raman. I love you."

She pulled her hand away and pressed her lips on his softly.

She had finally said it! They both had been waiting for this moment for the longest time, but it all felt worth the wait..finally it happened at the perfect time! It was their anniversary day and she had just received the most beautiful gift she could receive. Probably this was the best way she could thank him and celebrate their togetherness. It felt so natural, so beautiful, so perfect!

She kissed him with all the love and gratitude. He allowed her to continue pleasing him for sometime, then pulled her apart gently.

Raman: "Ab mujhe bhi to keh lene do!"

She chuckled softly.

"I love you Ishita. I love you more than tongue can tell. Without you I have no reason for being. I love you. I love so much!"

He cupped her face and then dropped kisses all over, finally absorbing her lips into his.

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avni_19 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
awesumm updateee!! loved it! esp the take on medical report!
i strongly feel that cud be the one in the serial too!


Divancraze thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Awesome OS!
I hope the medical report is also the same report in YHM!
ABBY92 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was a sweet OS. It was one of the best gift Raman could have given Ishita and I'm happy Ishita took it in the right spirit and understood where Raman was coming from.
Viji15 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cute 😊
I loved your take the medical report
simply short and beautifulšŸ‘
snehac2 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey nyc update
kinda cute update

thanx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww... This is just so sweet.
But I think.. Confession is again not happening in the show.
If the CVs lack idea.. Why can't they borrow it from writers like you. I wish!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks Pallavi for beautiful and cute OS. I wish Ishu get this happiness of her life in the YHM show too.Love Raman gesture he is such a sweetheart.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Reserved

Although I don't want the surprise to be that but loved reading your version to the gift. It was very sweet.
Edited by -Srishty- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww it was indeed best gift even for a sec I thought so it must be medical reports in scene lets see ...Lovely os dear ...best confession possible

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