*Manmarziyan* a MaNan story (ch3:page5)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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The newly born sun rays were all set to penetrate inside the room of nandini moorthy,the girl who has taken the lesson of 'early to bed early to rise...' a bit too seriously...
So just like all the other days,even after styudiyng till 1 in the night,she is all set to start her new day at 5:15 sharp. Its not that she has some hard physical tasks to do or anything like that,the fact is that she loves her books beyond anything..and can do anything to spend time with them. Though she is having biology as one of her subjects but still she loves literature and mathematics beyond anything..and mathematics at 5:15? Aahh..it is nirvana for her...


On the other side of delhi..a boy with a psyche to die for and a brain to beg for is just sitting and staring at his chemistry texbook past 2 hours.!! It is so wierd for him, like these equations,and facts..yes they are interesting but...there is still something that he cant understand about these textbooks. Till tenth,he used to love the smell of paper. But now,the only form of paper he loves is the paper used in novels.his textbooks..they smell of H2S gas while his novels like ester..he thought. He opted scince for exploration,for some reveleations but it is completely different..it is rot learning and nothing else.!!
Bam!!
Finally he closed his textbook and started reading his all time favourite novel'the fault in our stars' for the nth time. This...this piece of writing always gives manik..manik malhotra..the peace he wants..


How are the fates of nandini and manik connected to each other while diving deep into the ocean of knolwdge??
A story of questioning...trust...faith...manipulations and love...


Should i continue ?

Index:
chapter1: page2
chapter2:page3
chapter3:page5
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Posted: 10 years ago
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well written!
pls make it longer :)
you're right it is nirvana but err a liittle later for me say 7 am😆

Yes dear pls continue...Is it based on school life? Manik sounds like a frustrated high schooler😆
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all ur valuable comments,criticism are welcome whole heartedly..i know it is gross..vaise to..so cliched.. :p :p
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Originally posted by: Ribelle_IshRa

well written!pls make it longer :)you're right it is nirvana but err a liittle later for me say 7 am
Yes dear pls continue...Is it based on school life? Manik sounds like a frustrated high schooler

thanku so much :) yes it is based on school life.. There are many shades in a high school's classroom and im trying to portray them through these two characters(there are many more too but they are my focus) i hope it will come out as i'd imagined ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Science, school and MaNan,perfect recipe for me.
Very well written
Do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nia07

Science, school and MaNan,perfect recipe for me.Very well written Do continue soon


thanku for liking this :)
and i will continue it ASAP
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow looks very interesting..😃
Pls continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yes please continue! 😃
It looks interesting.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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EEe i love my padhaku sherni... n intelligemt but not at aall studios manik...
The story sounds really great... n i wish to read further... so yaa do continue... n pm me if possible... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww the story sounds really good..kinda reminds me of myself pm me sweety...

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