*Manmarziyan* a MaNan story (ch3:page5) - Page 2

yes plzzz continue... im waiting

chapter 1:
'class u need to be practical' sir ahmad said in his age old monotonous deep grumpy voice.
'this concept will be very easy when we will relate it to our daily life...' and he went on like that..the whole class...having dusk brown benches and children who do not look like children was attentive like anything and jotting down notes like a machine. The first benchers,alya and navya..the back benchers mukti and cabir...the most shy guy who sits alone-dhruv..everyone..everyone in the class was so dedicated...
But but but..there are exceptions...
A boy..that mascular one..okay manik only,was sleeping in the cornermost seat of the last row near the window..the soothing breeze,mild sunrays,and sir ahmad's lecture were working as a catalyst for him right now.he was sleeping as if he had been deprived of sleep since 2 months and has suddenly got the most comfortable place to sleep,certainly it was true..

'but according to hooke's law force is also equal to..' and his weary eyes fell on manik..'manik! Stand up!
..'y ..yess..sir..' he managed to murmer under his breath after absorbing the shock waves.
'you tell me..what is hooke's law..?'sir ahmad roared.
'hooke's law sir..'he went into a deep session of thinking..as if the question was that much difficult..
'sir,it says that stress is directly proportional to strain.'
'get out!!'
but sir..
I said get out..
And manik..following his instructions went out of the class..good for him..he needed to sleep though..

The answer was correct but what was wrong then?

Yes alya u tell me..
Sir acc to hooke's law..f=-kx..
Correct my child.!!
And happily..the front bencher with two oily plates sat on her bench again with clear superiority written on her face...


Though manik was right..but he was not right at the same time..

This was almost the daily routine of class 11B, SXC school. ...
manik..the explorer sleeps in the class..gets scolded for that..answers the question asked correctly yet wrong..again scloded..asked to get out of the class..aliya the scholar answers correctly , sits..and the class continues just like that...
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So this is chapter 1. Boring? Tasteless?? Wierd?? Idk..please tell me..and thank you all for your precious comments..it means a lot..but idk i'll be able to justify this story or not. Sorry in advance...
And thanks again..:)
this forum is blessed with authentic and real writers..and i am happy to share my thoughts here..so please give your genuine feed back..rotten veggies are most welcome..
And sorry i cant pm anyone cause i am always on my phone.so it is difficult(vaise zarurat nahi padegi lagta hai :p)
Next part will be a nandu 's part

Hey dear!!good start.Absolutely liked the chapter

Originally posted by: nia07

Hey dear!!good start.Absolutely liked the chapter Alya and Navya scholar,Mukti Cabir back benchers wow.Manik makes me remember my elder brother's high school days,perfect in the lab and punished by every teacher. My dad was called to his school almost every week even in high school :PI am excited about Nandini's high school life now.Do continue soon

thanku am glad that you liked it..i wrote it aise hi :p :p and this manik is the mixture of 3 of my classmates..thats why he is an exception :)

loved it...oho poor manik...
pls continue soon...would love to read more...
take care..😊

Superb..

Originally posted by: KaShforever06

Superb.. Poor Manik.. Heheh I feel the same even though i study Biology..Aliya is a scholar.. nice.. Continue Soon

lthanks a lot..yeah aliya is a scholar..and dhruv is a loner ;)..and manan also have biology as one of their subjects

Awesome yaar.loved it.hayyee poor manik...looking forward to see nandini

chapter:2
Nandini Moorthy! The perfect package!
All the chemicals,test tubes,students especially boys forgot to breath as soon she entered the lab. The whole atmosphere changed. Her innocent eyes,her cute two plates,her chubby cheeks,her aura,her perfectly ironed lab coat,her exeriment notebook..everything,..everything about her was the best in both the science sections. The boys of her class were the luckiest yet unlucky of all...
'good morning nandini'said soha,her fan.
'good morning soha'replied nandini with all the sweetness the world could possess at a time and without looking anywhere else,she started to wash the apparatus required for today's experiment. She was very well aware of her surroundings but chose not to respond,as always. Yes she knows some maths and loves literature thats it.!whats wrong with them? Okay she is excellent in all subjects..but she is natural..she is like that only..and when everyone behave with her so abnormally,she just dont know how to respond..so she always kept a wall around herself..completely secure..
She has some freinds,yes..soha being one of them.but it seems they are her flaterer than friends.


She needed a REAL friend..just like hazel got in TFIOS..yes she too is a die heart TFIOS fan..


So this is nandini moorthy's school life..full of attentions and inside awkwardness. This has made her a closed system.and she is happy with that...


Sorry again :! Im ready for all the rotten vegeis.

Oh well are Nandini and Manik in same school?