I feel so awful while I am commenting here today, because it took me all this time to go through your story. I have bookmarked it longtime back, but due to exams and stuff, I didn't start to read this story, because normally when I start to read a good story, I won't stop until I finish. Since there were around 65 chapters written at that time, I didn't read it then, hoping to read once I'm kind of free. And this weekend I read your story from beginning till the current chapter you updated, and now I'm wondering what a fool I was to not read it earlier. So I'm really very sorry for not reading and commenting earlier, but I will try to do from now on, and I really hope the story doesn't end sometime soonđ
I must say you have a masterpiece here! This is simply and complicatedly brilliant! Hats off to you for writing such a unique story and letting us see Arnav and Khushi from a very different perspectiveđ
First of all, I loved that you blended the South Indian touch to the story. Being a foreign person, I got to know more about their culture and language through this. Not just that, the way you described the beauty of nature made me create a vivid mental picture while reading the chapters.
I still can't believe Arnav and Khushi fell in love with each other to an extent where they can't live without each other right now. The way they couldn't stand each other at the beginning, but how they now cherish each other's presence is quite a contrast. Yet, I believe they were bonded by an invisible thread which is what led Arnav into Khushi at the first place. The pranks Khushi pulled at Arnav initially were a treat to read, but I must say Arnav has a really good patience quotient in him. And the way both of their relationship grew within a period of six days was amazing. And now they are married. I really wished that Khushi didn't take the decision to leave Arnav after their love making, but if I were in Khushi's place, I may have done the same thing, which was the right thing to do according to the circumstances. But yet again, Arnav feeling betrayed is natural. So both their feelings and emotions at the moment are justified.
I really love the strong character behind the kind outlook in Payal. She has a much deeper understanding nature compared to Khushi. The way she has managed to emerge strong despite everything she went through is amazing.
Khushi's father comes across as a silent, yet head strong character. Him without uttering a single word as to what was going in his mind, yet successfully managing to get everything done tactfully is what I called great parenting skills.
Coming to the mysterious back story with characters like Devki, Laxmi, Khushi's brother and Arnav's sister is what kept me more gripped to this story. And I'm really grateful that you have tried to point out more worrying topics that prevail in our current society such as a girl being manglik, how women like Devki has to go through so many hardships thanks to their big headed husbands who are not ready to accept their weaknesses, and how a girl is considered cursed if something goes wrong in the in-laws family after a marriage.
The most thrilling thing about this story was trying to figure out how Arnav and Khushi both continued to see the dreams. Khushi i understand, maybe because she is related to Devki, but why Arnav? If Arnav and Khushi are the reincarnations of Devki and her lover, why is Arnav still seeing Devki? I'm really lost here, and I'm so curous to know what's going on. And the other mystery is how Khushi's brother died. Well, I guess I will have to wait for the story to unfold in the future.
And I forgot to mention that I really loved Nalan's character. He played a major role as the cupid for Arnav and Khushi according to me. He is one adorable boy!
I really loved the story so far, and I'm sure I'm going to love it till the endâ¤ď¸
Thank you so much for sharing this incredible story with usđ¤ It feels great to know that brilliant writers like you are a part of IPKKND fandomđł
Eagerly waiting to read the next chapter
Update soonđ
PS - Sorry, as I'm used to Arnav and Khushi's names so much, I mentioned Kashi as Khushi throughout the comment. Hope you won't mindđ
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