My Fiancee's little sister-A sinful story-[2]-Completed. - Page 38

Superbbb story...Each part is Outstandinggg...

Omg what a Beautiful story I just read it in one go loved it n enjoy I Thanks for the story :)

nice stry
luvd d pissesiv maan n cutiepie geet

awesome parts.
lovd it.
realy it was a sinful luv but lovd the bondind of maaneet..

A very unique concept.. there is no doubt in it !!! 👏 Seriously.. it took me some time to understand every character's feelings !!! 😊 But u have done a great job by characterizing each role perfectly throughout the story !!! 👏⭐️ Geet was naive yet passionate & insanely loving to Maan(though she was in the process of realization due to her age) , Maan was ruthless yet caring & more than a true lover to Geet , Ayan was same as Maan but in a different perspective !!!! I loved all these complex characters sooo much !!!! 😳 Sameera was just a plain opportunistic witch !!! 😡 Maan & Ayan's past was really tough & emotional !!! Shame in the name of mom & dad , were their original parents... 😭 yet Mr. & Mrs.Khurana were angels in disguise !!! 😃 I adored Maaneet's bond !!! 😳 It was just pure love & never did i feel uncomfortable about there intimate lifestyle in a wrong sense !!! ⭐️ All that i could see was there eternal love which is beyond all worldly factors like age & etc... 😳 Loved ur writing !!! Read the whole story in one go & even read ruthless rejection after this in a single day !! 😆 Keep writing on Maaneet !!! 🤗

it ws just osmmm
luvd d bonding BTW maaneet
superbly writtennn
well done