The crack in the wall : On behalf of SAC

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I built it myself
The wall that you can not see
But only feel
The wall that seperates you from me

I had to dig a deep hole
And bury my pain
When I was done,I realized
I could never smile again

My heart had turned into stone
Or so I thought
But merely your presence
To it life brought

I worked on it
Every single day and sleepless night
Darkness surrounded me
There was no room for light

But today I can see
A small crack in the wall
I want to hate you now
You have ruined it all !

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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely Pearly...
the supposedly stone hearted one is melting 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Junoonian

lovely Pearly...

the supposedly stone hearted one is melting 😳


Thanks Jun, glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh my...U are too brilliant...u surpass yourself everytime...👏 Keep up the good work Pearly...👍🏼
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Originally posted by: tweetie19

Oh my...U are too brilliant...u surpass yourself everytime...👏 Keep up the good work Pearly...👍🏼


Thankyou Tweety ! Glad you like my work !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is beautiful Pearly😳.
You write so profoundly and so well ...really apt👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: prettypri

This is beautiful Pearly😳.

You write so profoundly and so well ...really apt👏


Thanks Pri ! Glad you like my writing 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks a lot aamnazuha !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nicely written Pearly. 😃
What would have been going through SAhir's mind when he turned to look at Arzoo as she slept. And unknown to him the crack has appeared and that too deep in the foundation. 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww pearly..that was a sweet dedication to Sahir...well written 👏

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