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...Hemangi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: shipreeta

Hemangi as it told, it was my POV. I am very sure that I can not (and no one should) excuse Dushy for VH. What I meant to say here was that just because of that one episode we can not conclude that Dushy was a womanizer. He did not feel bad about insulting Draupadi because he had personal hatred for Pandavas, but that does not mean that he can not repent mistreating a random woman (who is also a friend, at least I guess of his Bhrata and Bhabishri).

Anyways this was just a random thought which came to me, but I am sure you would come up with a good idea. Eagerly waiting for the next part

I understand ur point here...I have portrayed Dushy as a man who loves to spends some time in woman's company...he's a proud kuru prince a bit spoilt and has to learn things yet ... I hace written in one of my chapters...where Dury speaks to Karn that his brother has to grow up and learn how to behave... I took some creative liberty here because I have something different stored in my mind for VH part.
Will continue the next part soon 😊

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#332

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#334

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.Vaikartana.

@.Vaikartana.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#335

OMG!!!Hema what did I miss!!!My Arya all blushing and shy in his first love and all naughty and passionate on his first night☺️I so loved the fact that you introduced Vrishu.If it had been SwaRna it would have been unrealistic.KarnAli is perfect.And sorry I skipped the Kalyugi parts as I was hungry for KarnAli.I promise I will read them along with the next update.But from my scanning of those parts I am amazed by the knowledge you have about that area.Wonderful Hemali

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: vaikartana
OMG!!!Hema what did I miss!!!My Arya all blushing and shy in his first love and all naughty and passionate on his first night☺️I so loved the fact that you introduced Vrishu.If it had been SwaRna it would have been unrealistic.KarnAli is perfect.And sorry I skipped the Kalyugi parts as I was hungry for KarnAli.I promise I will read them along with the next update.But from my scanning of those parts I am amazed by the knowledge you have about that area.Wonderful Hemali

Thank u Vani... 🤗
Yes...you missed all the blushing & loving part but u finally made it 😆
I have introduced Vrushu in the story for a purpose although the main heroine is Swarnali
Oh...do look at the Kalyugi parts too when u get time 😊

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: vandu123
Awesome update

Thank u Vandu 😊

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#338

Res
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Mera balance not kating that means I still have net pack😆 so I m unresingg[:p]

Aww so cute Arya nd Vrushu😳 I loved her embaracement! Nd the eay u wrote it too[*^*] it was too good
nd myy gwaadd Swara kidnapped😲
poor dwarparyugi kidnapers will have hard time handling Kaliugi kanya🤣.. Didnt they know abt the Shurpanakha Dushyy?😉 BTW isnt Dushy going to make his re-entry I m busy thinking what to make him next🤣
so will karna turn into the jasoos dwarparyugi Sherlokii to trace out his frnd?😉

okies now I am turning serious😆
so they kidnapped her to advance in weaponaries😳 so is any chance of Swarna to do research on their weapons???...I mean nt to help them bt ofcourse the kidnapper must be knowing some vidya about divyastras so will Swarna find some connection betn them nd kaliyugi atomic astras??

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sania_58

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Posted: 11 years ago

#339

Awsome update Hemangi.👏
btw, U recently planned this part naa???I love the way your story is progressing.👏Too good⭐️
Always love Radha & Swarnali's relation.😃
& throughly enjoyed the way Vrushali described her first morning.😉😳
😳simply rocking.
superb.But she skipped that info ki Karna fell beside her lap in their First night.😆
ohh, So understanding wife.Saved her husband from endless teasing.😉

So, your story took one year leap.I am so happy to see Angadesh prosperity & Birth of Vrihasena.😊
Enjoyed the whole thing.Loved the way U described Karna holding his child carefully in his hand.😃
But that Pundru Naresh.😡Musibaat ki kami nahin hai.
ohh, Swarnali in danger.😕
Angaraj come soon, your buddy is in danger.
Now, I am waiting for Angaraj Heroic Entry.😳

mindblowing update.Beautifully written.👏
waiting for the next part.Continue soon.

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.Vaikartana.

@.Vaikartana.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#340

See Hema I read it earlier this time.I so love Radhama Swarna relationship.Radha maa wishing for her first grand child was so cute.And Vrushu and Arya☺️Arya is too ziddi and naughty.Poor Vrushu she is worried.My innocent darling.And I loved the way Swarna teased her.She really knoes how romantic is her buddy😆And Vrisha holding Vrishasena and my little darling holding his father's thumb even in sleep.Awww my dream sightAnd this Pundru Naresh😡I am expecting the mighty Angaraj to make an ultra heroic entry to save his buddy.