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Posted: 10 years ago
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In order to keep the suspense of the story intact and as a measure to make this piece more and more interesting our prapanchi mind gave this idea and we have decided to keep characters sketch under wrap😈... you will discover more about the characters and know What?, Why? and How? are they in the upcoming chapters!😉 You will have to stay tuned here for the same purpose and wait for the story to proceed!😉 Hope our strategy in pulling your excitement works!!⭐️

Love and Regards,
Sansrajya
(Sanskruti & Samrajya😳)
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(PS: Please check the PMing list again😳)



Edited by .Sanskruti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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***Almost a year before***
Date: 22/2/2014

It was the early afternoon of Saturday beautiful two young girls in their early twenties dressed in Jeans and short thigh length Kurtis of different colour and style, hair clutched and pinned by a single clip... looking casual yet formal suitable for the girls of their age were about to sit in a Taxi but then just behind them they heard some noise... And a huge heap of crowd gathered immediately!!
"Lets see what happened Sona!", said Rutuja a girl from the two and both went near the crowd,
A young boy of their very age group had fallen on his back in an unconscious state! But as expected the crowd stood like cluster of stones placed together!...as expected the silent spectators did nothing except watching with hands folded...just "Oh my god! What happened to this guy", "Looks a drunkard lad...What will we do?", were some of the chaos they heard there
"Okay Sona leave it..this is normal!...lets go! We have your appointment with Dr Jha!" said Rutuja
"Rutu his hand has a slit! He is not just a drunkard but has some personal problem too...We must help him!", said Amanyata
"Oh Amanyata please leave it!! Sona what you wanna do with this guy? You know him? Leave it? Moreover he has a slit on his hand we may get caught in Police inquiry! ", said Rutuja out of frustration
"Oh come on Rutuja! We are heading towards the Hospital ...thus we can take him! ...also after few days I may fall somewhere in same condition!! What if no one helps me then??", asked Amanyata
"Stop battering that nonsense again!", Rutuja said in a soft yet angry voice
"So we are taking him to the hospital?", asked Amanyata on which Rutuja gave a nod.. but it was not to their extreme shock that no one came forward to even help the girls!!... Amanyata just stared at everyone angrily and the strong girls took the Boy into the taxi themself!
"That is his bag just take this too!", a man from behind said Amanyata smiled and took the sack from his hands with smile



In the hospital she called a ward boy and asked him to take the boy up to the doctor and she went to the counter to check up for her appointment!
"Oh hello maam! You brought in that Sir, didn't you?", asked the receptionist before she could query on which Amanyata gave a nod and the receptionist continued, "Please fill in his details we cannot continue without this!" she said handling her with a form
Amanyata took a pen from her and began thinking What to do! Just then Rutuja came from behind and called out' "What happened? Shall we go to the doctor?", Rutuja said
"She gave this!", said Amanyata as reply showing her the form..
Rutuja went red with anger, "Is your mouth sealed?? Can't you tell them that the great Devi only existing just did a service to mankind!"
"Stop taunting me!... lemme check his bag we may get some ID to fill this!" said Amanyata opening the zip
"Here is it!" she said and then Rutuja replied, "Okay I will fill this...you.." but before she completes Amanyata took his mobile and said, "let me contact the recent dialed!"
Handling Rutu the form she moved away and dialed a number the number picked up her call but before Amanyata could speak ... the girl on the other phone started, "See I said its over! Please stop calling me! its irritating!! I told you I never took this seriously and I am getting married now...Look I don't want you to trouble me now! Stop calling before I block your number! Please forget everything!! Live and let live!", she said and cut the call harshly
"But he is already dead now!", Amanyata said looking at him through the glass pane she couldn't stop a drop of tear that fell from her beautiful deep dark eyes!
"This is done!, what about the contact to add? ... As the contact on his ID must be his own!", asked Rutuja
"Check from the contacts in his mobile!", Amanyata said handling over the Mobile to her.. she walked towards the window from where she could see him, touched the pane as if to touch him and whispered, "Poor guy!"
"What are you doing Sona? Lets go!!", said Rutuja and coming near her and taking the hold of her hands in a surprised tone continued, "Where is the 'S' of your bracelet?"
"I don't know?? Would have fell somewhere!", she said in a lost voice thinking something else
"Okay forget it, Lets rush to the Doctor!", Rutuja said almost pulling her!...
"Rutu What is his name??"
"Armaan!", Rutuja said!
"Armaan!" she whispered in an inaudible voice looking back at the boy in unconscious state




"So you must take this medicines on time!", said Rutuja making exit from Dr Jha's cabin... but Amanyata wasn't listening to her! Amanyata's restlessness grew as she was approaching the exit gate
"You go and stop a Taxi...I will just come in a moment!", Rutuja frowned but before she could question Amanyata turned back from the main gate!!




She moved towards him and was about to roll her palm placing on his head but just then a doctor entered Amanyata moved towards her and, "How is Armaan maam?" she asked the lady doctor there
"So you are the one who brought him here?", doctor asked to which she nodded her eyes conquered by care for that stranger!
"What kind of girl are you? Can't you control your boyfriend! It was the first time he drunk right? Why didn't you ask him to stop? Especially when he cannot sustain a hard drink!! and Why and What is this slit? doctor lashed at her angrily
"Ma..aadam I am...", Amanyata started but the doctor continued, "Okay its fine no need of sorry... nothing to worry! Just take care of him looks he need you the most!", said the doctor which made Amanyata stare at her with a sign of disapproval
She went near Armaan with eyes outpouring the unspoken, untold emotions for him in a reflex she took the notepad and a pen kept for the doctor's use and penned them down!... and moving towards the doctor said, "Doctor will you do a favor on me?"
"What favor?" asked the doctor with a formal smile
"When he gets up just give him this letter! PLEASE will you!!", asked Amanyata with a plea in her voice and slightly lowering her eyes!
"Okay I will!", doctor smiled and took the letter


***To be continued***

**SPOILER **

What medicines of out of her emotions did Amanyata prescribe in the prescription? Will Armaan take the dose of the medicines prescribed to him?
Stay glued to your chair in this place to reveal this mystery soon!!



PS: This is my first Kaliyugi venture as you all know all my other pieces are Dwarparyugi! Honestly speaking I was stuck right at the starting completely falling short of words and thought yeh mere level ki baat nahi hai but still I wrote this only and only because I love this concept and changed few things last moment! Hope it was worth reading! Sorry if you had a bad time!
Tomatoes, chapals and whatever you have is welcomed...I will always treasure your genuine opinions for sure!


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Edited by .Sanskruti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks a lot for liking this concept and your valuable comments😳
Hope all of us will have great time us as writers and you all as readers😃

Love and regards,
Sansrajya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonatia

Sansrajya????????
Yeh naya rajya kaha se agaya?


iTS SANSKRUTI AND SAMRAJYA😳😆😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

oh! i never lie to my besties and deariees..y do u think so darling..definitely u r a good writer AND INSPIRATION FOR ME


☺️BLUSHING😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice Starting !! Loved How The Two Girls Helped 'The Man' From The Road and Got Stuck In The Hospital !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: unishaz

nice. Thanks for pm.

Thanks 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was my pleasure 😳

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