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Posted: 10 years ago
part 45 ...
nice ... liked it ...
thanks for update ...
continue soon ...
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Part - 46

Maan: Geet

Geet doesn't reply...she is busy watching Salman again...

Maan is feeling jealous...she is only interested in her Salman and not Mann?

Maan: Geeet

Geet turns back...

Maan: tum movie dekh rahi thi?

Geet: woh...meinne ye movie miss kar diya tha, issiliye

Maan gets angry but controls his anger...

Maan: tumme bhook nahi hai?

Geet then realizes that she is also hungry...

Geet: haan, bahut zor se bhook lagthi hai

Maan: toh jao, jaldhi tayaar ho jao, hum neeche restaurant jaathe hai

Geet: bas 15 min

Maan waits for her to get ready but she wants to see the end of the movie...

Maan keeps staring her...

Geet: uff...ye channelwale bhi na? kitna break lethe hai

She blames the ads...

Maan lets her watch the movie and he goes and unpacks her things...

He then pulls out a beautiful dress for her...

Maan waits for Geet and he keeps admiring the way she enjoys her movie...

After the end Geet rushes in to take a quick shower, she had kept Maan waiting for a long time...

He may be angry but she can't leave her Salman movie in the middle, haina?

Maan patiently waits for Geet...

And it's been a long wait and though Maan could wait for his Mishti the whole lifetime the lunch hour will end in a few minutes and them they won't be able to have lunch...

Maan won't mind his lunch but the chance to have lunch with Geet that too with such a romantic afternoon, and after his angel is all dressed up for the occasion how can he disappoint her?

Maan starts calling...: Geeet Geeet, kitne dher lagaoge, jaldhi karo, ye tummare papa ka ghar nahi, samjhi?

Geet doesn't respond...

She is struck in an awkward situation...

She couldn't open the back hook of her kurti that is giving her a hard time with those sour fingers...

Geet had to seek Maan's help if she has to get ready in time...

She knows Maan woud definetly lose his patience if she keeps him waiting any longer...

She comes out and looks at Maan...

Maan stares her as she is yet to change...

Geet waits there infront of him and Maan is confused...

Maybe she need some help, she might not know how to operate the fancy taps...

But Geet has become used to the uber life style after she had shifted to Delhi...

Maan: what?

Geet: mera hook

While Maan couldn't get what she is saying Geet turns around showing her back to him...

Maan takes a couple of minutes to understand the position as he keeps on admiring her beauty in a different angle...

Geet is nervous and she goes speechless with the intimacy that's very new for her and that too she had never imagined that she would seek such a help from MSK...

Maan slowly realizes what's happening and he moves forward to unhook her kurti...

As Maan helps her his touch sends shivers down her spine and she runs off immediately...

Maan has awoken the women inside the innocent little girl that she is...

Geet returns after a quick shower and she hurriedly dries her wet hair...

And she had not properly tied the knot of her suit...

Maan has been watching Geet only and his eagle eyes notice her suit...

Thoug Geet isn't facing Maan directly and only her back is facing him she could feel the intensity of his gaze...

Maan gets up and wlks towards her...

Geet sees him approaching her in the mirror and she freezes...

Maan removes her hair from the back, he unties the knot and ties it properly...

Maan looks at her image on the mirror and he couldn't takes his eyes off her intoxicating beautiful looks...her fragrance arouses his desire, Maan holds her shoulders and turns her towards him...

Geet feels very shy and she keeps looking down as she is unable to face his passion oozing eyes...

Maan keeps staring her when Mr.Sharma calls...

Maan gets back to his senses and steps back to attend the call...

Geet is relieved and she gets ready in a minute for the fear of Maan returning to his duty...

And during lunch too Maan never takes his eyes off Geet and continues staring her making it uncomfortable for her and she couldn't even enjoy her lunch...

As they come back to the room Geet tells him that she needs to take some rest and Maan leaves reluctantly...

Geet tries to sleep but couldn't as she is so disturbed by the sudden intimacy that Maan is showing towards her and his recent dangerous looks...

Maan too feels restless and this separation seems to become harder and harder as time starts ticking slower and slower without Geet ...

Maan couldn't stay away from her even for these few minutes ...there is this urge to see Geet, he comes back to her room to check her and he asks her to come with him for dinner...

Maan also doesn't feel like going to the dining and he orders some juice and sandwich for himself and a milkshake for Geet...

As it gets late and the night gets darker Geet feels a little scared to stay alone in that new place, she hears some noise from the back and looks down the window...

She finds some party going in at the pool side with the men drinking and making loud noise...

She is frightened at the sight of the drunkards as she has always feared the alcoholics including her own father...

She goes and lies down on the bed with her face covered just to escape from her fears...

Someone knocks and Geet is terrified...

She decides not to open the door...

But the knocking continues...: room service m'am

She goes and opens the door...

She finds a man with a huge mustache waiting out and not the chubby little boy who came earlier...

She doubts that he may harm her and she closes the door quickly...

That man leaves all the more confused by her starnge reactions...

He even thought of shaving off his mustache as it scared an innocent beauty, poor man!

Geet begins to panic, she feels very insecure and fear grips her...

Maan comes to say good night...

He keeps on knocking the door but Geet doesn't open the door at all...

Maan is worried that something might be wrong with Geet, she might have fell sick...

Maan shouts: Geeet Geeet

Geet is very happy to hear Maan's voice, she runs to the door, throws it open and goes and hugs Maan tight...Maan looks at her scared eyes and he tries to calm her down...

Maan: Geet, kya hua? Tum teek toh haina?

Geet is still trembling...Maan is all the more worried...

She keeps clinging to him tight and won't leave...

Maan slowly walks inside taking her along holding her shoulders...

He makes her sit comfortably on the couch and moves to take some water for her...

Geet holds him back...: mujhe chodke mat jao

Geet bursts out crying like a child...

She asks him to sit beside her...Maan takes his seat and tries to console her...

Maan makes her head rest on his shoulders and asks her what's wrong...

Maan: Geet, daro mat, mein yahin hoon, tere paas

Geet: aap mujhe akhele chodke kahin mat jaana, ye kamra toh kitna bada hai, hum donno ke liye bhi yahi kaafi hoga? aap bhi yahi reh sakthe, haina?

She asks him innocently...

Maan turns around to look at the bed and he turns naughty...

Maan smiles...: haan, ye hum donno ke liye kaafi hai

Geet is very happy to her that as she doesn't understand what he is meaning...

Maan comes back to reality and reminds himself that he is with a grown up kid...

Maan: Geet, tum ne Milkshake piya haina?

Geet: nahi, toh ussko aapne hi bheja tha?

Maan: haan, meinne hi order kiya tha

Geet: lekhin mujhe toh uske bade bade muche ko dekhke bahut dar laga, meinne ussko wapas bhej diya

Maan: what? mujhe laga tum bahut himmatwali ho

Geet: aaise sunsan jage pe ek akheli ladhki ko dar nahi lagega kya?

Maan: haaan meinne toh socha hi nahi ki tum ladhki ho

Maan teases her...

Geet: kya?

Geet makes a face...

Maan laughs...

Geet: meinne bhi socha hi nahi ki aap hansbhi sakthe ho

Maan realizes the changes that Geet has brought in his life...

Maan: Geet, ab gabrane ki koi zaroorat nahi, MSK tere saath hai

Geet is really relieved to see him back...

Maan orders hot chocolate for her...

Maan: ye lo Geet, issko piyoge toh achche se neendh aayegi

Geet grabs and finishes it in a second...

Maan: toh Geet, tum sojao, good night...

Maan gets up but Geet holds his hands tight and she refuses to leave him...

Geet: aao kahan jaathe ho?

Maan: hare, mein wash room hokke aatha hoon

Geet smiles...: teek hai

Maan comes back and finds her still sitting on the couch...

Maan: Geet, chalo, sojao abhi

Maan takes her to the bed and Geet lies down on one side while Maan sits on the other side and checks his mails...

He has some work pending...

Geet falls asleep holding his one hand while Maan manages his work with the other...

After finishing his job Maan makes sure Geet is not disturbed and he gently keeps his lappy aside and lies down beside her and falls asleep...


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Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
maaneetsangel thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome...
Thanks for update...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice ud
geet afraid to be alone in room e told maan
stay with her in same room
maan realize how frighten geet is so
he agreed
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Posted: 10 years ago
geet is going in plane for first time
she is excited n same time scared n holding maan
maan thinks she trusts him
n he is too lost in his love
geet ..becahri..akele in room
n with sallu she forgot everything...
n maan scared with the breaking sound of vase.
.n concerened seeing her blood..geet thinking he didnt scold her
nice part


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Posted: 10 years ago
poor geet scared seeing the mosutache man n the loud sounds of alcoholic party
she broke down seeeing maan n pleads him 2 stay with her
maan too stays with her..
both sleeping in one bed..
nice improvement
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update dear!! ..good to see their relationship is progressing...geet is confused with her new feelings for maanm...even many nice changes can be seen in him...lets see what happen next...continuee soonnn dear ..

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Posted: 10 years ago
hogaya hai pyar maan...abb bol bhi do...

lovely update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Wow lovely emotional superb update..te way my maan ki J seeing his geet lost in salman was lovely cute psk..te way my maan not want to leave his geet for a sec too and waiting for her and geet hesitating how to ask but she have no other way and asking him open te hook making him shock was lovely cute..my maaneet ki nervousness feeling each other was lovely..te way geet ki fear and seeing my maan she hugged to him and crying my maan consoling her , geet asking him to stay with her and my maan holding her was lovely emotional touching cute.te way my maan teasing his sherni to make her ease was lovely cute...i love te update so much

Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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Lovely part.. Geet getting scared being alone so told Maan to sleep with her..

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