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Posted: 10 years ago
that was simply amazing

love maan-geet relation

cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
kya jawab di geet ne...uss chudail ki bolti bandh kar di...

nice updates...


loved dem very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...


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Posted: 10 years ago
Liked the updates...
Maan feeling frustrated and helpless for not being able to do something for the little girl...
poor girl had such a bad disease in such tender age...
so Geet's boss was one of Maan's mistresses...
Maan felt uneasy for a while but Geet's presence soothed him
loved how Maaneet tackled the boss...
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Posted: 10 years ago
those were fabulous parts !! maan going along with geet to the kuldevi mandir...actually , that long journey gave them wonderful time to chat...to share ...such small small talks go long way in strengthning the relationship and make a bond !! its normal life...which seems new to maan ...but, looks like he is enjoying it with geet !! even the baby part was good...how, he was enquiring maa ...about kids...if boy babies would act different from girl babies...it seems he lost any type of hope about female gender...!! but ,though , she was irritating maan...he felt bad about her condition...he is a nice person inside !! and that geet's boss part was too good !! maan had to face his past...and actually came out more happier person...thanks to geet's support and love !! it brought maaneet close physically too...geet got a kiss😉...!! hope, now they can be more like normal couple...!! waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Craziest_MG

a chapter from the past ...wow
Interesting

Kisss ...wooohhooo
Pehla kiss ...finally


yuppp...thanks for enjoying the part so much...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bina_a

So... maan faced his past! geet was great in giving it back to her boss. Oh the baby is suffering from leukemia :(.

Thanks for the update :)


thanks for likin the part...and thanks for commenting too
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shree2

Feeling so sad for that little girl 😭...thats fate

Maan and Geet conversion with that lady is superb... Both faced her with much braveness👏...aent they just perfect
I like Geet silent treatment and her saying to jail her boss for child abusement so much👏...see she impressed him with her brains
Good work.. continue soon...thanks a lot dear

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: flowing_river

finally maan is experiencing all those forbidden emotions for him...yup..pehla pehla pyaar hai..peli pehli baar hai...lol

aww...that cruela ki to maaneet ne band bajai...😆...yup...thats team work hai naa

...thanks for the witty comment dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

those were fabulous parts !! thanks and it was a fab comment...super love it....maan going along with geet to the kuldevi mandir...actually , that long journey gave them wonderful time to chat...to share ...such small small talks go long way in strengthning the relationship and make a bond !! true...these are moments which make relationships...its normal life...which seems new to maan ...but, looks like he is enjoying it with geet !! ...yup...she is her life guide...even the baby part was good...how, he was enquiring maa ...about kids...if boy babies would act different from girl babies...it seems he lost any type of hope about female gender...!! but ,though , she was irritating maan...he felt bad about her condition...he is a nice person inside !!...indeed he is...and Geet realises it... and that geet's boss part was too good !! maan had to face his past...and actually came out more happier person...thanks to geet's support and love !! it brought maaneet close physically too...geet got a kiss😉...!! true...it also showed...facin ur past is the only option...hope, now they can be more like normal couple...!! waiting...naah...they are unique...let them be unique naa

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PART 200

G-Nah, do you even know the menu?

M-Prawns?

G-That was appetizers. I am talking about main course

M-What is it?

G-See you don't even know

M-How bad could it be? I can digest any thing

G-Well let's start. I made pompfret fish, chilly chicken, fried rice, prawn shingtu, mutton curry and kheer

M- What? Was that lady hiding a whole army inside her?

Geet loves happily at her husband's sarcastic humour

M-You would have wasted food anyway??!

G-No , I would have fed you

M-So, feed me now

She sighs as she accepts her defeat that she cannot win with him when he is bent upon doing something

Geet starts serving the food

Maan baith jata hai khane ki table par waiting for Geet to serve everything so that she too can sit and eat with him

As she finishes serving and sits down Maan smiles at her coz basically he is in a very happy mood despite the meeting with boss so he is all smiley

As they finish the main course, Geet serves the desert

She has made kheer.

As he starts having the desert he realizes there is something hard in his mouth

He takes it out of the mouth

It's a ring

Maan holds it in his hands and raises his brows questioningly...

Geet bends down on her knees, filmy style

G-I love you. Will you marry me, again?

Maan looks at her aakhien phati huiy...WHAT?!!! uske dimag mei to yahi baj raha hai...ki ye hua kya...iska matlab kya hai...it's the first time Geet is seeing him so shocked beyond words

She grins mischievously waiting for his answer patiently

He is just sitting and staring dumbly... the smile he had earlier still frozen on his lips

It takes him full half a minute to regain his senses...but he still has to confirm

M-Wh...wha...what ...umm...what d...did...you say??

G-I said...Mr. Maan Singh Khurana, will you marry me and like to become Mr. Maan Geet Handa?

Maan slumps back in his chair and nods

M-That's what I think you said

She smiles [her most charming smile]

M-If I say yes... Would I have to live in your house? Like a live in husband?

She smiles

G-Hmm we will have to think about that. Just say yes or no first

M-But this won't do...

He says sliding down to the ground on his knees too...eye level with Geet now

She looks at him questioningly

He puts his arms around her waist and pulls her close

She looks at him

He holds out his hand for her to put the ring on

She smiles, with a hint of blush and puts the ring into his finger

M-Now Mrs. Geet Khurana

G-Yes?

M-I know I have been the worst person... and I did everything wrong the first way round...so...

She shakes her head

M-Shh

He holds her by her waist and raises her to seat her in the chair

Her skin feels melted with his touch

M-I am still not the man you deserve Geet.. .

G-Maan! Chup!

Maan puts his hand on her mouth

M-But since I am trying to make amend and since you deserve a proper everything...

Maan holds Geet's hands in both of his

M-Will you marry me again?

She smiles

G-Yes

Then she gives a huge ear to ear happy grin

G-Yes yes yes !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He kisses her hands

M-Then maybe we can invite your sister for the visit here too...

G-Sister? Why?

M-Welll, we would have party sort or something wont we?

G-ohhh I thought we would have our own private party

She says with a glimpse of mischief

M- I thought so too

He says with a side way naughty grin

M-And oh.. .one more important thing

G-Hmm?

He pulls her close so she bends...

M-I love you [kisses her nose]

Geet to bechari melt si hi ho gai...she closes her eyes feeling his moist lips on her skin

He strokes her cheek and feels like the luckiest man... at this moment he does not grudge the life for dealing him a bad hand...coz he is here at this moment and this balances out the worst parts of his past

G-I never thought you can be so romantic

M-oh you thought you knew everything about me?

Maan gives her daredevil smile

G-Well..I am exploring

He laughs out loud and pulls her down to his lap so he can finally kiss her as he had wanted to do so for the last month since that polo match...

This time Geet also responds gladly. They pull away a little after kissing each other to their hearts content

Geet says-

G-I will leave the job

Maan doesn't have any problem with it coz if she stays on then the boss would only harass her or publically humiliate

M-You should do that if you want to...

She sits on his lap hugging him when Maan's phone rings...it's Ranjeet's number

Maan looks at the number and ignores the call...right now he has had enough drama, he doesn't want any more from Ranjeet

Ranjeet smses Maan 'Last chance'

Maan is like ki kya natak hain iske...

He lifts Geet up from his lap and puts her on a chair

M- I gotta take this call

He says and gets up and calls Ranjeet

M-What now?

He says in a bored voice

Ranjeet-I told you about the deal, yes or no? You are too late. So I want two of your factories

M- You don't have a thing...

Ranjeet gives a cruel laugh

M- I haven't got time for your dramatics. If you got a point make it or stop annoying me

Ranjeet disconnects

Maan bhi rakh deta hai

Next day, Maan had a series of important meetings so his phone was switched off whole day

Shaam ko nikalta hai cabin se to uska secretary bechara media se ghira hua hai unko bhagane ki koshish kar raha hai

Maan ko dekhte hi sab puchne lagte h ki sir aap kya kehna chahte hain iss vishay mein,?kya aap dono complaint kar rahe hain,? Kya khayal hai aapka?

Maan narrow his eye at all of them...giving him chilling glare..."as if I would tell you" wala look de raha hai

M-Call the security.

Wo secretary jaise taise media ko rok ke Maan ko ek khali cabin mein le aata hai, khud bhi aata hai and he goes to sit down on the chair

Secretary-sir yes, I have arranged for a car and driver. You can leave right now from other path

Maan doesn't panic neither work according to other...

M-Sit down

The secretary sits

M-What was that about?

Secretary-sir ...emm...

Maan glares at the secretary and gives a hard frown

He switches on the TV on a news channel

Secretary-Excuse me sir

Bolke nikal jaata hai

Maan looks at the TV

Sab mirch masala daalke wo news wale wo videos dikha rahe hain jo Geet ki videos Ranjeet ke phone mein thi saath mein mirch maalne wale commentary maarke

Har news channel mein aisa-aisa flash ho raha hai aur news channel wale to baal ki khaal nikaal hi dete hain

Maan is angry...very angry...very-very angry...

He is shocked too...ki ye kaise ho gaya and when anger and shock wears thin...he starts getting worried about Geet

Secretary again comes

Secretary-Sir car ready hai. Aap chalo

Maan gets up...looking white and pale and walks to the door

He opens the door moving in kind of mist...not really knowing what he is doing

Somehow he gets to the car and its inside without realizing it

Car ghar pohocha deti hai...thankfully ghar mein media wale nahi hai as the guards have kicked them out

Maan walks inside and looks around for Geet par kahi nahi dikhi to roars for Ram SinghMs-RAM SINGH!!!!!!!!

Ram Singh bhaag ke aata hai

rs-Ji saab?

M-Madam kahan hai?

rs-Pata nahi saab

Maan looks at Ram Singh... as if looks can kill...Ram Singh would be a burnt heap on the ground

Ram Singh looks down

M-When did she leave?

Rs-Pata nahi, hum to apna kaam kar rahe the. Subah ke baad dikhi nahi. Aap madam ko phone karlo

M-Guard ko bualo

rs-Ji saab

Ram Singh goes to call the guard

Guard comes

Guard-Salaam saab

M-Madam kab gai?

Guard-Madam gai? Kahan?

M-Get out both of you.

Maan says very evenly very very coolly his voice like arctic cold wind

Maan calls on Geet's mobile

Phone wahin ghar pe hi baj raha hai

Maan goes around trying to locate the phone...bedroom mein milta hai phone

Bedroom mein phone to pada hua hai par Geet kahin nahi hai

Maan phone kat deta hai

He calls Geet's home

'Hello'

Maa phone uthati hai

M-Geet wahan hai?

Ma-Kya???????

PART 201

Maan calls Geet's home

'Hello'

Maa phone uthati hai

M-Geet wahan hai?

Ma-Kya???????

He knows it is stupid to ask like that and the family may get tensed but he is tensed too and more than Geet's family he cares about Geet

Ma-Nahi wo...Geet tumhare saath nahi hai? Hey bhagwan, kahan gai wo?

Maa to chinta se adh mari ho gai

Ma-ohhh Maan kuch pata lage to batana...kahan jaa sakti hai? Tumne usse phone kiya? Kya hua tha? Jhagda hua tha? Naraaz thi kya? Aise kahan jayegi?

M- Main phone rakhta hoon

He disconnects the phone

Maan ko samajh bhi nahi aa raha Geet ko ki kahan dhunde...usko to yahi lag raha hai ki news sun kar kahin bhag gai hai... coz he thinks that Geet panics easily and panic mein she does some very stupid stuff and reaches very twisted conclusions...

He is waiting around the house...ghante beet gaye nahi aayi

Maan waits for an hour or two considering his options...

Aur issi beech Maan ke mobile mein har tabloid se phone aa rahe hai

Maan phone vibrate par daal deta hai

His phone rings and he picks up coz it's Sam's number

M-Hello

Sam-Abbey pehchana nahi saale. Shaadi mein formally invite karne ke lie phone kiya hai aur bata, kya kar raha hai? Kaisa hai tu?

M- I am busy. I have to go...

He doesn't want to miss Geet's call if she calls

Sam-Where?

M-Kaam par!

Sam- Yaar you never call, today I called then you are saying you are busy

M-Stop whining. Main phone rakh raha hoon. I am expecting an important call.

He disconnects the phone

Wo soch raha hai kya police ko khabar kare ...par he doesn't trust the police...he decides he will find her on his own but he is in a turmoil ki kahan se dhundna shuru kare. He thinks of hospital...but then he doesn't want to be so pessimistic train station par dhundne ki sochta hai...car rental bhi poochta hai ki kisi ne is description ki ladki ne car hire ki kya...sara schedule check kiya ki kaun kaun si

His phone rings

Maan picks it up

M-Hello?

'Saab ji wo...aspatal se khabar aai ki..dopahar mein kisi 23-25 saal ki aurat ka acident hua hai. Aap jaake dekh aao kahin madam ji to nahi'

M-Kaunsa hospital?

...

He rushes his car in highest speed and reaches the hospital looking grim and wearing his shades...his eyes look vulnerable to him in the mirror isliye shades laga liye

Hospital mien Dr idhar se udhar nurses bhi busy hain

Ek reception hai

Maan walks up there

M-Main Maan Singh Khurana hoon.. yahan kisi ladki ka accident hua hai 23-25 saal ki?

Rec-Ji ji usko dopahar mein le aaye the

She checks the register

Rec-She is dead now. Uski body morgue mein hai. Aap identify kar lijie

Maan just nods his hands curled hard in fists

He rushes towards the morgue

As he is walking towards the morgue there is a feeling of uncertainty...the feeling he hates...he is in a hurry...a moment is also precious to him...he has to find her...it's not she is dying...he won't think about that...he won't be negative but it's his feeling of what if...he never felt that what if

The morgue is locked

He storms back to the reception and almost hauls the receptionist over the desk

M- Open the dam morgue, you idiot!

Rec-What...emm...sir?

Maan narrows his eyes to after whipping of his shades...

Receptionist gets a glimpse of what a deeply disturbed man he really is and sees the madness lurking in his eye

Rec-emm...

She gets up and looks around

Rec-emm...ward boy!

She calls for one

Rec-Morgue kholo

The ward boy goes and quickly opens it

Maan follows the ward boy too

It's a huge place which is cold as ice with box like lockers

Ward boy pulls a drawer

A body is wrapped in plastic

Ward boy-Identify kijie

Maan walks over to it and looks upon the body's face...he doesn't hesitate to do it...it's like the pulling the band-aid off with a jerk kind of thing... if it's Geet then it is Geet, if it's not hen it is not. He wouldn't wait and deliberate and think about it

The face is wounded and body injured

The complexion of the body is very dark contrary to Geet's. The hair and body stat also don't match

Maan takes a step back and puts his shades back on

M- It's not her

Turning around he hurries out of the morgue and the hospital

But since it has already happened once...the possibility that Geet might be hurt enters Maan's mind

He calls his secretary and asks him to check up on all the hospitals if Geet had been there and also to try and get the list of passengers for the flights already departed

As if coming out of a temporary freeze up Maan's brain starts to function somewhat a little again gaining more functionality by the minute

He next calls the guard and tells him to go and cover the railway station and see if Geet is there

He tells Ram Singh to stay put at house and see where Geet is

He diverts all his calls to his secretary and tells him to only bother if it's Geet, Geet's family or Ranjeet.

Then he himself rushes off to the airport

The secretary calls

M-What?

Sec-Mam's family's call sir

M-Direct them to me

Maa-Beta Geet ki koi khabar mili? Kahan hai wo? Main bohot pareshaan hoon. Chinta se to mera sar phata jaa raha hai. Mujhe bohot ghabrahat ho rahi hai. Kuch hua to nahi hai naa? Beta kuch pata laga?

Maan lets Maa rant and run her course of grievances

M-Kuch nai hua hai use. Wo theek hogi. Thodi der mei mil jaegi. Aap chinta mat karo. I'll make her talk to you soon. Abhi mein jata hoon.

Ma- hmm...kuch pata chalte hi batana

M-Ji

Maan phone kaat deta hai looking around at the airport. He decides ki agar agle 6 ghante mein nahi milti to he will call in every favour he owes and start a search for her. But he'll wait till then maybe she just went out to clear her head...maybe she would come back herself...

Maan poora airport ghum rahah hai...dhundh raha hai

Maa time to time call kare jaye

Maan always says the same thing...kabhi active voice; kabhi passive voice mein sentences ko change karke

There's a call from a number and it's Ranjeet.

Ranjeet-Kaisa raha jhatka?

M-Why do you care? Ab tujhe kya milega?

Ranjeet gives a cruel laugh

Ranjeet-You should have made the deal. Par mujhe jo milna tha mil gaya

M-To ab kyun phone kar raha hai?

Ranjeet-Teri haalat jaanne ke liye

M-hmmm...to aur kuch pochna hai?

Ranjeet-#####$#$***^*^**&&&& naa naa jo jaanna tha jaan liya. Rassi jal gai par teri akad nahi gai. Oye hero, zero ban gaya re tu to

M-You think I care of what I am?

Maan too couldn't help a laugh...it's a cruel cold maniacal laugh

Ranjeet bhi bhauchakka sa reh gaya

Ranjeet-Pagal ho gaya hai tu?

M-Huh? I thought you understood how I was feeling...

Maan's tone is all polite and wintery and indulgent and condescending

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