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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Beautiful update, the old man helping them i hope it is not some trap for R.K-Madhu. Waiting for next.
Thanks for the PM.

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: ashitha235
Very nice update...
Both RK and Madhu are safe and together... madhu told her story to RK and felt safe with him...
But i feel that old man is going to bring trouble to them... hope they reach mumbai safely...
Thnx for the pm... continue soon😊

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: DancingDivaDd
Awesome update dear. Loved it. Finally madhu and rk is free. But lets see for how long this will last. Im worried for them. I have a feeling even if they leave delhi that sultan and madhus family wont leave her so soon and now also rk. Update soon

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Mikolingam
Great keep going love the track

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Hi everyone😉

Thanx for the likes and comments on the previous update 😃

Hope you all enjoy this 😊 and keep supporting me 😊

And this update is dedicated to Shriya(shriya.bk) 😳😳

Belated Happy Birthday cute si lambi si Shriya 😆

Part 16

Next day they started their journey for mumbai directly, they were not going to delhi as it was not safe. Bittuji said that he will bring their stuff from delhi. Madhu was very silent through out the journey rk tried to cheer her up but she always faked a smile to him. She kept starring out of the window when ever rk initiated a talk she gave him a small reply and cit it short. Rk could understand that madhu has gone through so much in the last few days but now seeing madhu quiet was killing him, he liked the madhu how was childish cute and sometimes funny. It was hard for him to see her like she was very important to him. Rk dint ask her to drive even though he was tired but when they stopped for food madhu silently came and sat in the driver seat and said "Rk you take rest , I will drive" "Okay" rk replied. Later they reached mumbai and stopped at Roma's house, rk said he will talk to roma and go. While they were climbing the steps rk caught madhu's hand "Madhu I know you are very upset because of the turn of events but now everything is alright. I am with you , tai is with you If you dont let it go tai will feel bad madhu. She is doing so much for you madhu" "I know Rk but the thoughts keep haunting me. I also wish to live a happy life with people who care for me and ..." "Madhu I care for you , You can always count on me. Please never hesitate madhu , I am just a call away" "Thanks for being there Rk" madhu said and hugged Rk with silent tears flowing from her eyes. They rang the bell and roma opened the door she hugged madhu and started asking how was she was " I am alright tai , I want to take some rest" "Okay you go and sleep. Where is your bag?" roma asked before madhu could reply rk said "Tai bittuji is going to bring our bags , he will get them tomorrow till evening" "No problem Rishab I wanted to thank you for everything you did" "Tai if you thank me once again. I wont ever talk to you" "Okay i wont how are you?" "Just a little rest and I am fit and fine. We have madhu's certificates also so we dont need to worry about anything" "Okay I wont say thanks but may god bless you with happiness" "Bye tai will meet you tomorrow" "Rishab did you tell all this to Radhaji" "No and you also dont tell mom about it. Even they dont know that madhu went with me" "Oh ... as you say" after this rishab went to his house and slept.

Rk got up in the evening and messaged madhu "Hi sleeping beauty ... still sleeping?" and came the instant reply "No I got up half an hour ago" "Thats good. Hey, lets go to lunch tomorrow" "Hmmm... No" "Why??" "I dont want to waste my time. If you say its a date i will think about it" "Oh madhu , you gave me a mini heart attack by saying No" "You should have asked properly" "From next time I will" "You should" "So madhu will you go on a date with me" "Hmmm..." "Madhu!!!" "Ofcourse I will" "Be ready I will come to pick you tomorrow" "Okay". Rk felt happy after chatting with madhu he was glad that madhu was back to normal and now he was excited about the date. Madhu was no less , from now only she had started planning about what to wear and she was confused. Rk was free the next day as bittuji was handling everything in delhi and he had no work here.

Next day Rk got up early and spent time with Radha and sikky as whenever Rk came back from his trip he would spend the whole day with them but as he had said asked madhu for a lunch date he got up early. Rk kept glancing at the clock every few minutes as for him the time was going very slow atlast he called madhu "Hello" "Hello Rk" "Madhu at what time you eat lunch?" "What??... I eat lunch at 2 but why are you asking" "Madhu did you forget we are going out for lunch date" "Yes I remember but its but its 10 in the morning Rk" "Madhu its 10 'o clock, I got up at 6 in the morning" "So what i got up at 9 but Rk why are we discussing time" "Because I am hungry now" "So" "I am hungry and I want to have lunch" "ooh !! You wanna have lunch now" "Yes" "Rk why dont you tell me clearly that you cant wait to meet me and you have started missing me" "No madhu I can wait to meet you but I cant wait to kiss you" "What!!" madhu shouted, rk chuckled imagining her the expression on her face "Madhu do you think only you can tease me" "Rk.. I .. that" "You wanted me to directly get to the point, So here I get directly to the point. I cant wait to see your beautiful face , I cant wait to hold you , I cant wait to kiss you. So get ready in a hour I am coming because i cant wait" "Okay Mr-I-Cant-Wait I will be ready in a hour" "Bye" "Bye". Rk cut the call happily and then he called bittuji "Hello" "Hello Bittuji I need your help" "Yes tell me chief" "I want you to make some arrangements for me" "Chief I am on my way to mumbai , I will do your work reaching" "No bittuji I want it done in a hour" "Chief but how will i do" "Let it be bittuji i will do it myself" "Okay chief , i will reach mumbai till evening and after that will come and give you luggage" "Thank you bittuji Bye" "bye". Rk got busy in planning where to take madhu.

After exact one hour Rk was infront of madhu's house waiting for her to come down , every second was passing like a hour to Rk atlast madhu came in a white top and blue denim. Rk kept staring at her "Madhu you look very beautiful" "Thank you and you look no less" "I know I always look smart but also , thank you" madhu looked at the smirk on rk's face and hit on his arm playfully and " I was just being formal.You dont look good" "but also thank you" rk said by giving a quick peck on her lips making madhu's eyes go wide in shock. Madhu blushed and turned her face "Someone was being very bold on phone what happened now madhu??" "I.. that.. stop it Rk" "Let it be, I have whole day to bring your bold side back again" saying this rk winked at her and started the driving. Rk stopped the car and madhu got out of the car and started shouting in excitement , rk felt good seeing her happy "You know Rk i wanted to go to the beach from the day tai bought me to mumbai. I lived in the village or in delhi and I was always fascinated about beach" "You like it?" "Its perfect Rk" "No madhu you are perfect" "Aww... thank you Rk" "I also love beaches madhu, I always come here when I am upset about anything or if I am happy" "Seriously Rk this is so beautiful" madhu said. Madhu and Rk kept talking about many things, they had their lunch at beach side hotel and again came back to the beach to see the sunset. Everything was very nice , madhu was loving it but she was scared as no one ever had showered her with so much care and respect , she dint want this to end. she knew she loved Rk but she was worried, she dint want to spoil the beautiful relation between them. Madhu was in her thoughts when it started to rain "Madhu lets go to the car or we will get wet" "No Rk lets wait. I love rains" saying this madhu started dancing and enjoying he rain. Rk couldnt move his eyes from her she looked so cute enjoying the rain , rk couldn't resist he moved towards her and pulled her closer. Rk held her tight in his arms and claimed her lips , softly at first taking in her sweet taste but madhu took over and deepened the kiss. They both stood in each others arms amid the rain drops falling and the sunset witnessing their love for each other which was yet unknown to them.

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Edited by AzraZaidi - 9 years ago

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SuRu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

resss
unres
yipppeee m first yayyy yayyy!!!! 😆
super duper liquifying update...
u know how eagerly was waiting for this date...
also finally u got ur beach hahah...
so rishbala are safe... having lunch roaming on beach dancing in rain moreover kissing in rain...
I specifically loved their naughty convo huhhh... RK u r sooo lovely...
now wat nxt eagerly waiting for update!!! 😳Edited by My_VivJaan - 9 years ago

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noiseygirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

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YAHOOO It's me again on 2nd !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
what a magical update
u made that old man positive 😉
they reached their home safe 😳
Naughty RK😳😳😳😳😳
love him 😊
when will they know their own feelings?
m waiting 4 that
update soon
btw came b4 ur pm as usual 😆😆😆😆
Edited by noiseygirl - 9 years ago

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Meghana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Yay I got third!!!!!!! 😆 and I beat sudha again 🤣 okay enough of that 😆

I loved the update azru...such a sweet and lighthearted update 😳
Glad Rishbala are safely in mumbai...and the date was so cute...I loved the ending scene 😳
I imagined them dancing in the rain happily...I hope their happy ending comes soon
continue soon...I want to get first this time...Suru di I'm coming for you 😆 Edited by Abhiya4life - 9 years ago

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jalebi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

U fooled me azra u fooled me..urgghh..!! 😡

i thought that old man will go to village & Bring madhu's family to d place were they stayed but...he was a dummy piece but u showed so much built up😡

okay now commenting keeping my anger away😆

such a cute sweet light hearted update.👏

i m so glad rishbala didnt face any trouble & They safely returned mumbai too..loved it.😛

awe...lunch date was so nice more than that their phone naughty convo...they know they love each other but without confessing they r kissing, blushing, dating & What next?😉

waiting for next update.😳

thanks for d pm but resed before it😆

Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago