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Hey guyzzz i m back with an other work of mine to torture u all .. ...
I know aj kal roz torture karti hoon tum sab ko ...

No proof reading so plzz kindly ignore typos as u always does ...


Zain n aliya both are brilliant students of st .xaviers college mumbai...
Its their last year in the college so the college authotities decided to take the brilliant batch of their college for a hiking trip to a most beautiful place in india...they decided to go to kashmir ...usually cold heaven in earth
...the students of zain and aliya's class were very happy hearing this news ...they were day dreaming about climbing the beautiful snow filled mountains ...


Rizwan one of zain and aliya friend ...asked his girlfriend ayat to join them ...all were very happy to meet ayat ...her bubbly natyre was liked by every one ..soon ayat and aliya became friends ...


They were going to kashmir via train ...

Aliya was very excited to travel in train coz it was her first...usually she travelled through air planes and most of the tym in her car ...

The six stars ...which include zain aliya rizwan shazia bilal .and sanam along with ayat ..booked a boggie .. and sat together
...
They all sat on their seats but aliya was nowhere to be found ...
Zain got worried as the train was al ready to leave ...he got up from his seat...

Zain : wait guyzz where aliya...

Rizwan : she was here only zain ...

Zain : exactly riz she was but now she is not...plzz all of u check for her ..

Everybody starts searching for her in the whole boggie ...

Ayat : no zain she is not here ...

Zain : ok let me check out for her on the platform ...

Rizwan : but the train is about to leave zain...

Zain : i cant leave her lyk this she was the one jumping in whole college excited about this trip ...u guyzz wait i will bring her

Rizwan : ok we are waiting ...
Zain left from there ..and went towards the door he took his head out to search for aliya ...when he saw her buying the things for the poor kids on platform ...

Than she was about to turn when an old lady collided with her ...she was about to loose her balance but aliya held her in her strong arms ...

Aliya : aap theek hai ...i m sorry maine dekha nahi app mere peeche thi .

Old lady : koi baat nahi beta .. .mujhe meri boggie tak chor do ..

Aliya smiled at her ...
Aliya : ok ..
Aliya turned and waved the kids and smiled at them and left with the old lady ...she dropped her there ...
Zain was seeing all this ...with a smile on his face ...he was admiring aliya's every move ...he was her secret admirer but never dared to confess his feelings ...because he was not very strong to loose a great honest and caring friend like aliya ...

Aliya turned but the train blows it whistle..and started moving ...aliya got worried ..she started running towards hher boggie ...zain took out his hand for her ..aliya ran as fast as she could ...

Finally she was nearing the boggie ..her fingers brushed with zain' s fingers ..

Zain : aliya jaldi karo...

Aliya : kar toh rahi hoon ..

She ran with all her might finally she tangled her hand with zain and he pulled her inside the train ...
The pull was so forcefull that both ended up falling on the floor with aliya on top her eyes closed ..zain was seeing her anfelic face ...


Zain : put the strands her silky brown her behind her ears ...
She openes her eyes on his touch...

Aliya : thank u zain ...

Zain :akhir simran apne raj k paas bhi aise hi ai thi ...

Aliya got up
.
Aliya : hello abhi tak DDLJ ka craze nahi utra tumhara...

Zain : nahi kab ka utar gaya ...aj kal naya craze hai mere sar pe ..

Aliya : kiya ..

Zain : tum ..

Aliya : what ??
Zain : nothing ...

Zain smiled and left from there...aliya smiled...at him ...

Aliya : pagal...

She knew his feelings about her but was waiting for him to confess.


Coz as a girl she was shy to confess her feelings ...

Soon they were sitting on their seats ...talking about hiking ...with zain and aliya stealing glances at each ither secretly ...


In the night it was getting cold aliya handed every one duvet ayat and rizwan wrapped each other in a duvet together while the other took it from her and dozed off to sleep ...aliya was having only one duvet in her hand ...now ahe and zain was left without thinking for a second she gave it to zain ...telling him that she is having her shawl with her ...
Soon every body dozed off ...
After some time a shivering voice caused zain to wake up he saw aliya shivering badly in het little shawl which was providibg her no warmth ...he got up immediately and went near her he touched her and she woke up... still shivering ..

Aliya :y arent u sleeping ..go sleep zain ..

Zain : i cant sleep seeing u in this condition ...


He lifted her up and sat beside her and wrapped his arms around her and covered themselves with his duvet...

Aliya hasitated at first but zain comforted her ...

Zain : trust me ...

Aliya noded her head and dozed off in his arm seeking hia warmth ..
Both of them slept peacefully ...

It was morning and they reached kashmir
..

Aliya and zain were standing close to each other ..

Their hands slightly touching each other ...

They smiled looking at each other ...

Soon the reached their destinations ...
They saw huge snow filled mountains before their eyes ...all were smiling like crazies ...

Rizwan : lets start going guyzzz...chalo ...


Zain : no wait aise nahi ...hum sab alag alag jaye gein or jo do log sab se pehle ek doosre k samne aye gain woh foore k bare main jo bhi feel karta hai in mountains main chilla k kehna hoga ...q aliya ..


Aliya : nyc idea ...

Rizwan : lets go than ...

All of them started going towards the cloud ...but zain pulled aliya back ...

And whispered in her ear...

Zain : mujhe upar sirf tum milna ...kuch important kehna hain...theek hain
.

Aliya : mujhe bhi kuch kehna hai ...upar milte hain ..


They also started climbing the snow filled mountain...

All of them enjoying it fully ...a small smile playing on their lips...


Aliya : Ya Allah ..i want to see zain only ...plzz.

Zain : ya Allah plzz i wang aliya only...

Both of them climbing ...after sometime zain reached on the peak of the mountain ...

He opened his arms and closed his eyes to let the beautiful feeling sink into him ...

He saw down from the peek all the other mountains looking small infront of him ...


After alot of struggle aliya also reached the peak of the mountain ...
She saw zain standing there ...

She shouted his name ...

Aliya : Zain ...and it echoed in the mountains...

Zain turned to look back at her and smiled at her ...

She smiled back ..

Zain : finally Allah ne meri sun li ...tumhe hi bheja mere paas ..

Aliya : or meri bhi ..

Both smiled at each other ...

Aliya : you wanted to say something right

Zain : yes ...

Aaliya : so say it...

Zain closed his eyes and openes his arms ...


Zain : Aliya ...i love u ...

Zain shouted and his words echoed in the mountains ...
Bringing back the sound of i love u ...


He openes his eyes to see aliya who was smiling at him ...


Zain : u also wanted to say something ...say it what r u waiting for ...


Aliya closed her eyes ..

And shouted ...

Aliya : zain i love u too ...

She opened her eyes seeing him smiling with his arms still open ..

She ran towards him and hugged him tightly ...

And too wrapped his hands around her ...

Both of them lost in the beauty of kashmir and their newly found love ...


The End ...

All u have to do guyzz is jst comment ...

And tell u how u find this os on zaya ...

Take care all ...

Lots of love ..


Alina

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bloodsheds thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great os 👏 👏 👏
Thnx for pm Alina 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww its cute 😳 wow st xavier ke brilliant students thoda yjhd jaisa tha but bahut cute tha nd thanks for the pm 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...
what a khatron k khiladi confession alina...
👏

They confess at the peak of the mountain...
and u know what???i remembered your frecture...hehehehe
sorry but i thought u will narrate your story..

Thanks for such a nice os...
do write more..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: butterfly20

Wow...

what a khatron k khiladi confession alina...
👏

They confess at the peak of the mountain...
and u know what???i remembered your frecture...hehehehe
sorry but i thought u will narrate your story..

Thanks for such a nice os...
do write more..


Thanks hani ...

Hehehehe i also remembered my fracture ..and was laughing
But mujhe bachane k liye koi zain nahi tha na

Thanks for commenting ..
Means alot
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ilovezaya

Great os 👏 👏 👏
Thnx for pm Alina 😳


Thanks vini darling
Means alot
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cute one
Nice proposal

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHOWWW cute ! i loved it yjhd ka craze nah uttara lagta hai ! Thanks for the pm !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was really cute
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Alina🤗
This was beautiful
Keep writing
Tnx 4 pm😃
Love Aman❤️

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