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Kiran

@lovedrops

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Posted: 11 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: deepthiya
Update will be posted once I am done wth Pooja, Gym, Dinner and then finally...

it will take at least 4 hrs...so meanwhile Guys get popcorns, tissues and do something fun😉

Popcorn is for you Deepu... I know you have loads in stock to enjoy reading our sankiness. For us we need gallons of tears, loads of tissues/Tshirts, Pounds of nails, and BP monitors with high efficiency.

Bucket... check

Tissue box/Tshirts... check

BP monitor ... check

Ipad... check

Hot Coffee... on the stove

Tears... on the way

Nails... Damn i have to call him home early.

For those who needs tissues

For those who need my BP Monitor

We are all set Deepu... Now.. waiting

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#462

Originally posted by: lovedrops

Popcorn is for you Deepu... I know you have loads in stock to enjoy reading our sankiness. For us we need gallons of tears, loads of tissues/Tshirts, Pounds of nails, and BP monitors with high efficiency.

Bucket... check
Tissue box/Tshirts... check
BP monitor ... check
Ipad... check
Hot Coffee... on the stove
Tears... on the way
Nails... Damn i have to call him home early.

For those who needs tissues

For those who need my BP Monitor

We are all set Deepu... Now.. waiting

Thanks akka for the tissues and BP monitors. I have my vadas and i am all set

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#463

What the...
Kidnapped her????? No way
Waiting eagerly for the update

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Shyamala

@shyamidutt

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Posted: 11 years ago

#464

Update is on Saturday right? I got my hopes up for a second there Deepthi. Update is after Pooja gym and dinner on Saturday right?

You guys are all so cute. Though I know the update and teaser schedule I come everyday to see what's happening. Mee muchhatlu vinadaniki rooju oka saari tappakunda vasthanu. You guys make my day :)

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#465

Originally posted by: shyamidutt
Update is on Saturday right? I got my hopes up for a second there Deepthi. Update is after Pooja gym and dinner on Saturday right?
You guys are all so cute. Though I know the update and teaser schedule I come everyday to see what's happening. Mee muchhatlu vinadaniki rooju oka saari tappakunda vasthanu. You guys make my day :)

Update ee roje, pooja ayyaka akka post chesthundi, inko 2 hrs lo.

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#466

Waiting...

anxiously ...

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Deepthi

@ToxicLove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#467

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Deepthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#468

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#469

wt a fantastic update deeps...superb indeed...its amazing i have learnt so much from u through this chap..the most important of all...the title of story explained beautifully here...

sex between hearts : melting in each other with euphoric emotions,overwhelming gestures and indomitable passion of faith,paving way to the consummation of feelings 👏...excellent excellent wordings ,the title is sheer deep ..very thought provoking indeed...

loved the way u have shown arnav constant ordeal here...he is a man on roller coaster right now...some time its professional side of his which he excellent capable of to handle ..and then some times its his heart side where he is suffering very very badly and having no clue where his emotions landing him up to...his care his concern...his believes .loved the way arnav ready to support her by all means to bring the culprit to justice...his humour to bring ease to her...and fun thing in this all trauma ambiance,he is after a girl who is innocence personified...poor he ,welcome on board ..get ready for sleepless nights and tanha tanha rehta hoon mien tou bhari mehfil mien ..lol...reason as u mentioned..cause he knew his heart has already surrendered...in all certainty 😊

coming to khushi...i must saltue u deeps the way u showing her characters different shades...some time she is shown crying her heart out at the loss of her parts of her soul...and some time she shown strong enough to stand for the fight of right...sometimes she is shown sweet enough understanding daughter who is ready to support family...bringing out positivity even in her parents damn rude aggressive behaviour saying due to hearing it suddenly they reacting such

uff her words..u mean the parts of my babies...very painful indeed after reading these words i felt like by heart is going to burst with immense pain of a mother whose dream shattered brutally by non other than the man with whom she dreamed a world...u master in bringing out right emotions at right time .. wt an excellent writer u r ...fantastic...loved the way u have written damn professionally the medical procedure...i am impressed..

lavanya being amazing friend ...loved her care and concern towards khushi

awee khushi is worried about the clothes and bill ...true sense this girl is having self respect...and aweee even more for dr.r here...he their to bring comfort to her by any possible way ...awesome...

shashi and garima ...both characters yet again closest to reality...they r trained true sense under the pressures of society here...from the way u have shown garima interest in the clothes khushi wearing...shows her greedy nature...and shashi typical so called MAN of our society...and the reason he gave to khushi about family matter needs to discuss in home and all...u gave him perfect solid reasoning deeps here...amazing indeed.

must say i am impressed with gayatri character here...she proves to be well educated,understanding and top most sensible enough mother and human...seeing her character here ...its easy to say now that arnav is having her traits too...the difference of right and wrong ...and his believes ...kahin na kahin its gayatri and his family support and education which we can see on every step of story

loved the new FRIENDSHIP in making :)...the convo between arnav khushi ...fun and fantastic...superb deeps :)...the best part about innocence is that its always unsuspicious...:)..some times the people who don't talk much to u are the people who really wanted to ...:)...i guess arnav step towards khushi as friend going to be fab for this suffering girl and his suffering heart :)

ending lines uff breath taking...loved it loads...fabulous wordings...impossible to heal aching heart...indeed...excellent chap over all...love u

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#470

RES

I am ready with my plate of Vadas

UNRES

Vadas were good. Let me get back to Update.

You are officially my Fairy God Mother for giving us Sankranthi Gift.

Part A

The Open Paragraph was very nice about how us humans have tabooed and stigmatized sex and how many people don't know the line between love and lust.

Looks like Arnav Singh Raizada has realized his feelings for Khushi Mehra soon to be Gupta soon to be Singh Raizada. Aww there first Awkwardness together, Poor Khushi is worried about her tear stains of Arnav's Shirt, little did she know that Arnav will cherish that shirt forever. Looks like Khushi is determined to make her baby murderers pay for every drop of blood. She is making herself stronger. I felt really happy reading that line. Her asking of how to lodge a complaint and Arnav cracking a joke was really good. That was almost like on first date, where someone cracks a joke to remove the awkwardness. Khushi being stubborn about filing a complaint and Arnav becoming ASR for a second. I Looks like Khushi has lost her faith in humanity when she asked Arnav if the DCP was like that devil doctor. I cried 😭 a lot when Arnav was trying to explain to khushi about the fetal parts that are still in Khushi's uterus. I am seriously worried for Khushi's future Pregnancies and its complications due to this 5 murders. I am sure that the devil doctor must have not performed well the last four times. Khushi requesting Arnav to perform the procedure as she doesn't trust anyone. Poor Lavanya is worried about Khushi. You mentioned Payal, I want to know more about her and her relationship with Khushi. Arnav made Anjali give her new suit to Khushi and made a silly excuse that they give it to all emergency patients. Khushi asking for the bill and Arnav lying that it was a non profit hospital and Arnav feeling guilty about a little white lie.

Part 2

My first reaction reading the first paragraph is Khushi is smarter than we give her credit. Her trying to argue with DCP and Arnav for a separate case, i want to see where the conversation would go, but it was ruined by Guptas. Looks like Gupta's are weird bunch. The father seemed interested on how Arnav kidnapped their daughter. I loved Arjun trying protect and defend Arnav. When Arnav explained things to Shashi I really thought he understood the situation. But he changed my opinion in matter of second. He was quickly trying to get Khushi out of hospital. For What? I think that old man is trying to 'repair' his daughter's marriage by sending her back to that jerk and Garima seems to be interested on Khushi's chamkeeli dress than her health. Both are really f**ktards.

Mrs. Raizada is really awesome, trying to control her son's temper being enraged about Khushi's situation herself. Khushi naively asking why Arnav wants to call her, that was very cute.

"It would be easy to mend a broken heart with time but it is nearly impossible to heal an aching heart waiting in uncertainty of future - Unable to move on nor hold on..."

This line has me in tears. 😭.😭.😭

Awesome update akka, half my tissue box is done. i am really tensed about what Shashi will do. If Shashi do decide to send Khushi back to that jerk then I want Khushi to Kali Matha.

And

Meeku kooda Sankranthi Subhakankshalu.

Edited by Pinky.Raizada - 11 years ago