FanFic-Sagar-Vidya -Update p34 - Dec 16th

armulover thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 18 years ago
#1
Ok guys...so its like 2:00 AM here in Canada...and I cant sleep...dont knw why...lollll....ive been constantly thinking about the things that have been happening in the show these days...esp the bigggg night tht happened today...still havent seen the video but am dying to...😃 anyways so i thought of writing a fanfic...so here it goes...

SETTING - So after, Sagar andVidya return home from their little trip, and sindoora has a heart attack seeng them together...she tries to put more stuff in sagar's mind about vidya...so sagar decides to talk to vidya!

Its night time and we can see the happiness on vidya's face...she comes to their room...Sagar is sitting on the bed in deep thoughts...

Vidya - Suniye...aap kya soch rahein hain?
Sagar - (still in thoughts) - kuch nahin...
Vidya - (concerned) - agar aap apni pareshani humain batayenge toh shayad aapke dil ka boj halka ho jaye...
Sagar ( very rudely) - maine kaha na tumse vidya...kuch nahin...meh har baat tumhe batoon yeh nahin ho sakta..
Vidya (upset now) - ji hum toh aisey hi puch rahein the...
Sagar - ( angrily) - toh mat pucho...samji tum....jab se meri zindagi mein tum ayi ho jeena haram kar diya hain...kyun...kyun hui hamari shaadi...kyun mein is bandhan mein phas gaya hoon...chali jaon meri nazron ke samne se...chali jao..
Vidya - ( shockeddddd...now crying) - aap yeh kya keh rahein hain...kya ho gaya hai apko?
Sagar - (still angry) haan jo bhi keh raha hoon sach hain....mein yeh rishta nahin chahta...lekin is waqt sab ki khushi ke liye meh tumhe yahaan se nikal bhi nahi sakta...tum reh sakti ho yahaan...lekin humare beech koi rishta nahi hoga...ab mujhe kuch der akela chod do..plss...
Vidya - (crying...cant believe wht she just heard...her world has fallen apart...million thoughts goin through her head " how can her sagar do this...how can he change soo much? where is all tht love..all those promises...where is everything??? she was soo upset this time tht all her patience was gone...she makes up her mind...and says) - theek hain...jaisi apki marzi... ( she says this much and leaves the room..)

Vidya walks outside to garden and cries her heart out...the past flashes in front of her eyes....the time he said "i love u" the time he didnt eat all day because it was her "vrat"...the time in singapore where he said he would luv her always and he would only wanna see her face when he wakes up every morning...and now things have changed soo much tht he doesnt wanna see her face at all.....she decides in her mind.."agar yeh chatein hain ki hum dono mein koi rishta na rahein...toh yehi sahin..." She's thinking all this and crying....Chinu sees this and comes up to her...

Chinu - arey bhabhi kya hua..
Vidya - kuch bhi toh nahin bhaiya....bas aise hi man bhar aya...
Chinu - bhabhi aap humsein jhoot nahin bolo sakti...kahiye kya dada ne kuch kaha apse...aapko humari kasam hain...apko humein bata na hi padega...
at this...vidya narates the whole scenerio to chinu....chinu tells her tht what she's doin is absolutely right and tht also from tommorow onwards he'll be her teacher...he'll teach her how to read and write...and also teach her english...vidya is a little reluctant at this thought at first but soon agrees...

that night....vidya doesnt return to her room...she spends the night with sameer....next morning also she gets up and gets everything ready for breakfast before sagar awakes....she doesnt even go to wake him up...sagar wakes up and wonders where vidya is...but quickly brushes off the thought as he thinks he has now broken his relationship with her....he comes downstairs for breakfast and learns that vidya has already left to go the mandir...he again finds it a little odd but chooses to ignore it....

Vidya in reality had gone no where....she was in the kitchen the whole time...she watches him come..eat and leave...and soft tears roll down her cheaks...how she remembers those days when he didnt eat until she gave him his favourite kheer....just thn Chinu comes along with bharat and sameer...

Chinu - chalo bhabhi...aapki padhaiee shuru kartein hain...
Vidya - theek hain..
Bhabhi - haan mami hum bhi chaltein hain..

they all go and everyone is busy teaching vidya in their own way...vidya seems to be learning even quicker now thn bfr as she has tht dedication to prove her worth to saagar....sindoora watches this and thinks tht her plan of getting vidya out of this place hasnt worked...

Sindoora goes to sagar and asks him why vidya is still in the house...sagar explains tht he let her stay here for everyone's happiness...but now they share no relation....sindoora is very pleased to hear this....

Saagar repeatedly keeps thinking of vidya....he wonders why this is happening to him..but fails to get an answer.....he decides to leave work early today and talk to vidya one more time and explain things better to her....

Ok...so here's where ill end this...tell me if u guys like it...and if i should continue....pls do comment..😃




Edited by armulover - 17 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

236

Views

49.1k

Users

53

Likes

1

Frequent Posters

payal40 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 18 years ago
#2
Plz continue, I really like your fanfic. 👏
nivedita_21 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#3
Yes, please do continue. You have got my serious attention as i like to your fanfic.
rose_love thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#4
very very nice,,,but you couldnt sleep till 2 😆 even i m here and my whole family is sleeping 🥱
hunnie1991 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#5
it greatt plz do write sum romantic scenes if it nt too much 2 ask plz 😛
Mazzy101 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Commentator Level 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#6
😊 yeah that was good! plz cont soon! i wonder what he does?
jigna_07 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#7
that was awesome !
continue soon 😊
afghangirl thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#8
wow, very nice continue please.
KHJL thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#9
Wuuuuuuu 😳 ....tht was interesting...luv the fact tht he is actually beginning to think about vidya a lot lately😉 ....LOL 😆

n also like the cold sholder vidya is giving to sagar.....mayb this will help him understand how much vidya really means to him 😉 ....HAI!!! 😳 😳 😳

neways in one word tht was SUPERB!!!!... 👏 👏 👏

do continue... 😊

later! 😉

LiSa 😛
armulover thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 18 years ago
#10
ok so guys...thank you sooo much for reading my fan-fic...im soo glad u guys liked it....ill try to do my bestt to make it interesting...if u guys have any suggestions or complains about the track pls feel free to pm me and ill try to fix as soon as i can...😊 ok so i wont waste more of ur time..and here it goes...

Recap -
Saagar repeatedly keeps thinking of vidya....he wonders why this is happening to him..but fails to get an answer.....he decides to leave work early today and talk to vidya one more time and explain things better to her....

ok so...sagaar comes home extra early from work...he hopes to find vidya in the kitchen...so he gathers all the courage and goes towards the kitchen....but doesnt find her there...he next goes to the mandir but he doesnt find her there either...he wonders where she could be....next she goes to sameer's room but fails once again to find vidya there....in the hall he sees bharat and sameer...sameer runs to his room..

Saagar - bharat...voh sab kahan gaye?
Bharat - mummy-daddy toh office gaye hain...is waqt aap ko bhi wahi hona chaihiye na? aur baki sab apne apne kaam mein lage honge...
Saagar - arey lekin...tumne...mera mathlab hai...sameer kahan hai..
Bharat - woh abhi abhi toh apne kamre mein gaya hai...apne ek minute pehle toh dekha use..
Saagar - (now getting irritated) - theek hain...tum jao..

vidya who was on purpose hiding from saagar was watching all this from a distant...thinks with teary eyes.."kya yeh wohi hain...jo mera naam lete hue nahin thakte thein...aur aaj inhe humara naam bhi nahin liya jaata" she makes sure everything is ready for the dinner...and tells chinu and shalu to handle everything and leaves for the temple....she doesnt want to be around whn saagar is around anymore...there is no point...

at the dinner table...saagar's eyes are constantly searching for vidya...but he doesnt say anything...he quietly eats his food and leaves....sindoora thinks to herself..."yeh toh apni hi duniya mein khoya hua rehta hai aaj kal...mein sari property apne naam karlu tabhi ise kuch pata nahin chalega" and chinu has observed every reaction on saagar's face...

its quite late in the night but vidya is still no where to be seen...saagar starts to get restless now...he's been lookin around for her all day and he hasnt seen her face once...just then vidya enters the room...

Saagar - (with concern) - arey vidya kahan thi tum...pura din nahin dekha meine tumhe...aur itni raat ko tum kahan se aa rahi ho?
Vidya - (chooses to ignore his questions...) - aap so jaiye ( says this much and leaves the room..)

she goes out in the garden...saagar thinks tht today he has to talk to her...and follows her..

Saagar - suno toh vidya...yeh kya baat hui...meri baat toh sunlo...
Vidya - (choking back her tears) - aap kyun apna waqt barbad kar rahein hain mujhse baat karke???
Saagar - (shocked to hear vidya talk back to him) - vidya...aaj yeh baat mein tumse kahoon yeh bahut zaruri hai...(vidya doesnt respond so he continues..) suno vidya...humarein beech jo hua us raat woh..woh...im sry mujhse galti ho gayi....woh nahin hona chiya tha...jab ki mein yeh rishta nahin chata tha...mujhe aisa nahin karna chahiye tha...
Vidya - (now cant take it anymore) - bas keh liya jo kehna tha apko? ab meri baat suniye...apko lagta woh raat ek galti thi? aap mere pati nahin ho sakte...woh jo mera naam lete nahin thakte the....jo mujhe itna pyaar karte thein...aur woh raat apke liye ek galti thi...toh ab humarein beech baat karne koh kuch raha hi nahin hai....agar aap chahtein hain ki mein sabki khushi ke liye yahan rookon toh theek hain...lekin ab humrain beech koi rishta nahin rahega...

she says this and walks away...leaving a shocked saagar standing there....she goes to her room and cries her heart out...while saagar just cant believe tht vidya talked like this to him?

ok guys...thts it for tonite...more to come..tmw...so keep reading...😊 i knw its a lil short...but a longer one tmw for sure...a treat for the weekend...😃



Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".