ragna ff:bhul kar bhi na bhulu discontinued note on page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys here Is teaser of my new ff plz read it and tell how it is and also see the name u like it or not.
Teaser :in dehli in a big home.
Abha mehera wife of arjun mehera runs behind a girl of 24 years
Abha:guddi kyu satharahi hai.ek hi bite hai khake jaana.
Guddi (original name is arohi called as guddi by parents n aru bu friends ):my sweet darling mom .first u tell me u both me take me out for trip then I will eat.
Abha:guddi pehek kha lena bathne sochenge..
Guddi:nahi nahi nahi darling.
Gudi comes n hugs arjun
Arjun:kyu mana kar rahi hai meri beti ko.. k beta we will go for trip k..?? Now eat .he feeds her
Guddi:thats my dad..
Abha:aap hi ne bigada hai ise.. ab mera kya chalega apdononke beech..
Both guddi n arjun hugs her n says we love u chorry but we will go trip.

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kark12 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kisiko pasand nahi h
Ai kya.??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice teaser Ishu..
plz continue vit 1st chapter..
Just askin is tis a Ragna FF...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: akshara82

Nice teaser Ishu..
plz continue vit 1st chapter..
Just askin is tis a Ragna FF...

ye bhi koi poochnevali bath hai bala..offcouse ragna story hai..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice teaser Ishu.. But ragna kahan hai??? Update chappy soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

nice teaser Ishu.. But ragna kahan hai??? Update chappy soon

guess karo preetu darling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Deat readers I am not happy with the response I t for this ff.. so I will nt continue this till u all say to update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome n sweet teaser update soon
Plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry for late comment ishu nice teaser and 1 chapter galthi update karo.par ragna Kaha hai 😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice prologue. But this ragna ff dear.

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