SS- Accept it! Part 6 Page 6 30/1/2015

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nisha and Viraj were really good friends. They used to frequently go out for Russian sandwiches. They had developed a very lovely bond. Priyanka had become good friends with Nisha and so did Gaya. It was all happy. Nisha still loved Viraj even though she did not have any reply from Viraj's side.

At Lakshya Academy:

Nisha heard sobs from Viraj's cabin so she entered his cabin. She saw Viraj holding his rifle and crying. Viraj noticed Nisha and stopped crying.
Viraj- Yes, Miss Nisha, aapko kuch chahiye?
Nisha- Sir, aap theek hai naa?
Viraj- Haa Miss Nisha, hum bilkul theek hai

As Nisha left the cabin, Viraj started sobbing again
She immediately entered and said- Pakad liya!
Kyun ro rahe ho ,Sir she said with teary eyes
Viraj- Nisha, hume kuch nahi hua. Hum rote nahi.
Nisha- 5pm, Russian sandwiches, aapke penthouse mein, okay bye
Nisha leaves the cabin with watery eyes
Viraj- ye ladki hume pagal karke hi chhode gi. Nisha lightened Viraj's mood somehow

Precap-
Nisha arranges everything for the meal. Viraj opens up to Nisha. Nisha motivates him to restart shooting.

This is my first SS ever so forgive me for mistakes. I do not know how many chapters but more than 5. Share your thoughts on it. Will update at night. A long one as I know this was short..

Bye
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good start! Loved the 'pakad liya' moment.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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gr8t 👏👏
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing!! Yay a new FF
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 2

Viraj unwillingly but for Nisha gets ready in his black tee and wears black pants.
Nisha calls him
N- Sir, room se mat nikalna
V- kyun, Miss Nisha
N-surprise hain..
V-theek hai

Nisha makes the russian sandwiches and gets some Coke. She makes the lights bright enough to feel like you are looking at stars in the day. She finally calls Viraj. Viraj is stunned. Such bright light.
V- Miss Nisha, kya hum beach pe aayehai?
N- Yes sir. I mean no sir
V- toh humare ghar pe russian sandwiches ke liye sooraj ko invitiation di? Huh he says laughing
Nisha laughts too.
Nisha dims the light.
They start their meal.
Suddenly
V- Miss Nisha, Coke? Hume nahi peena.
N- laayi hoon toh khatam toh waise hi karna padega. Aapki nahi chalne wali.
Viraj left with no option drinks thecoke in 1 go.
Nisha stares with wide eyes
V-kya? Hume coke bardaash nahi lekin aapka hukum saraaakhon pe
N-khush raho putr
Accha sir, nahi rifle launch hui hai, kal subah order de doon ?
Viraj starts sobbing after hearing rifle
N-kya hua? Sir
V- Miss Nisha, kyun? Humare saath hi kyun hua aisa? Humare apne hume kyun chhodte hai, pehle maa, phir paa, phir jai.kyun?
Pata hai. Jai humara best friend tha. Woh bhi shooter the par wohi humare paralysis ka karaan bane. International competition mein jai ki jagah hume select kiya gaya isiliye unhone gunde bhej ke hume pitvaya. Hume 2 saal tak paralysis mein the tum sirf dadji the humare saath. Aur koi nhai. Kaash aap pehle aati Ms.Nisha, hum adhoore se poore ho jaate
N- toh bulaaya kyun nahi she said crying
She hugged Viraj and viraj reciprocated as he needed one. He felt as comfortable as nobody made him feelmso comfortable ever in his life.
N- nothings tough
Sir aapko move on karna hi padega. World champion khud ko saabit karke jai ke mooh pe laafa dena padega. Sir world championship 3 mahino mein hai. Aap training shuru kijiye. Koi ho na ho main aapke saath hoon
V-par...

Precap-
Viraj ponders over Nisha and the meal. Nisha does the same. Dadji gets happy viraj decides to shoot again

Here is the second chapter. Maybe not so long but not so short too.
Ciao!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awe, you're such a cutieee! haha. It'such a cute update. I love the little moments between NiRaj. Keep posted. Update soonest 😃
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V- Ms.nisha hum aapko apna jawaab kal zaroor batayenge...filhaal hume akelamchod dijiye...hume maaf kar dena..
N- kal tak jawaab done ?
V- aap chodengi naa hume tab pakka kal
N-phir theek hai sir...bye
Jawaab ka intezaar rahega...shubh ratri
Tata goodbye...

Viraj changes and goes to write a mail to Arti

Hi Arti, Aap kaisi hai...aaj miss nisha ne kamaal kar diya...hume aise motivate kiya jaise kisi ne nahi kiya..isiliye woh humari best friend hai..hume unke sujhav par gaur karne ka man kar raha hai..shayad hum phirse shoter banne...hum bahut khush hai...Good Night.

Viraj goes to his bed and starts wondering about nisha... that hug..the warmth..was so caring. That motivation.. that affection...Why?...did she still love me...viraj hits his head and tells viraj are u mad?
Who will love u?

Nisha reaches home in her lalalalalla world
Nisha reads the mail and gets doobi doobi

Office-
N-jawaab
V-30 minutes in my cabin
N-zaroor chote hukum
Niraj start laughing
V- miss nisha back to work
N-yes sir
They bump into each other
N- sir sir phirse takrana padega... dekh ke nahi chal sate
V- par
N- sorry ke illaava aap mujhse jhagda kar rahe ho...ohhohoh
V- miss nisha (stary eyes)

V- dadji humare saath zara aayiye
D-theek hai
V- humne ek faisla liya hai
D- kaisa faisla
V- hum shooting phirse shuru karenge
D- kya ?
V- sach dadji...miss nisha ka kamaal
Kal humare andar ek ichha daal di shooting ki
D- nishaji ka yeh ehsaan hum kabhi nahi bhoolenge..
V- hum miss nisha ko batayenge ab
Miss NISHA IN MY CABIN NOW!
N- yes sir
V- aapka jawaab tayaar hai
N- kya?
V- yes...hum shooting phirse shuru karenge
Nisha hugs Viraj...
N-mein sabko bata ke aati hoon
V- mias nisha rukiye
He holds nishanand grabs her next to him...their heads were so close that they could collide again...
V- miss nisha kisi ko nahi batayengi aap...promise?
N- promise sir

Precap-
Viraj restarts shooting practice... Nisha gets stuck in a room with Viraj.. They share some close moments
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update😊
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice... 😊
Story is getting really interesting...
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb...pls update soon.. Eagerly waiting for the next update...

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