SS- Accept it! Part 6 Page 6 30/1/2015 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
amzing update..plzz continue ASAP as i m really excited after reading precap 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Yay!!! Wow! Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Wow awesome story🤗
awe nisha succeeded in making viru start shooting
I am eagerly waiting for the next update
do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Hey, great story! I liked best - friends bond that you have shown between Nisha and Viraj 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Awesome...niraj will get stucked in a room together...plz upadte soon..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
When will you update next??????
We are waiting and waiting and waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Please update faster. Everyone is waiting!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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V- aap ready ho jao...hume palace jaana hai
N- par kyun?
V- secret ka matlab pata (he pulls her ear)
Hum waapis shooting kar rahe hai ek SECRET rahega..aayi samajh mein baat ya ab 2nd standard ke english teacher ke tarah samjhana padega.huh
N- accha sorry...ab kaan chhodo
V- theek hai...tayaar hojao
N-kitne der mein aajaoo
V- uff...MISS NISHA
N- accha calm down..10 minutesby th watch...interview ke tarah late nahi aaongi...baksh do mujhe ab...aagya chhote hukum
V- ji nisha ji..ab jao

They get ready and move
In the car...

N- sir..ek galti hogayi
V- ab kya!
N- mein rifles laana bhool gayi
V- kitna tang karegi aap hume..ek din humara sar phut jayega..dekhlena
N- sorry
V- jabse LA join kiya hai sabse zyaada sorry hi suna hi..kuch aur bolne ka kasht lengi aap...ya sorry repeat mode pe hai aapme
N- sorry...i mean sorry sir ( nisha bangs her head)

They reach the palace
Nisha moves towards the stairs
V- kaha jaa rahi hai aap?
N- 3rd floor sir..
They share a laugh
N- bozo kaha hai...
V- woh apne ghar mein hai
N- accha

They move to the shooting ground..
N- go viru go
V- miss nisha!
Viraj shoots 5 at a go..2 miss by a cm..1 bullseye and 2 shots 1 inches away
N- not bad
I want to explore the palace.
V- kya? Kyun?
N- arrey dusri baar hi toh aayi hoon
V- chalo 10 minute kaa break lete hai...chaliye
N-theek hai
V- yeh humare paa ka kamra haa
N-wow
They enter the room
The door gets jammed
They hear a noise
N- yeh kya tha..
V- Door jam ho gaya hai
N- shit!
The lights are flickering
N- yeh?
V- maintenance karaana bhool gaye! Shit!
Aapke paas phone hai? Humara neeche lobby mein charge horaha hai
N- mera toh mere bag mein hai joh abhi LA mein hai
Mujhe andhere se darr lagta hai
V- miss nisha dariye mat
Nisha starts crying as she gets haunts of her past due to the darkness and the wind blowing out making the curtains blow around..
V- miss nisha kya hua?
He hugs her tight and pats her head
V- rona nahi chahiye aap chhoti bachhi nahi..
N- chhoona mat..please..nahi
Viraj realises that she is getting attacks
He tries to comfort her by every sort of way...
Nisha finally goes to sleep in his lap
After a few hours Dadji opens the door

Precap- Viraj realizes about his love for nisha..

Sorry guys...had my tests going on..will be able to update weekly or fortnightly.. i am extremely sorry..actually i get demotivated sometimes as i dont recieve many comments or likes...not offending anybody...hope you are excited for the next chapter..will defo update next week...bye...share ur ideas so i can continue it th wayu likeit..byeee...sweet dreams good night
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good update...
So Viraj is finally going to realise that he loves Nisha...
Can't wait to read more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Awe so sweet
finally viru understood his feelings for nishu
Do continue soon
will wait for your update

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