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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL...
I READ IT TWICE
GREAT JOB DEARπŸ‘
JIYA😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
This was beautiful, and perfectly penned. There are only few writers whose work I read more than once. You're one of them. I hope cvs show something like this somewhere in the future, coz Maniks seems to be getting shocks after shocks. πŸ˜†
Keep writing more Sharmi. I'm your fan now. πŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Awe sharmi this is very beautiful <3
Do write more dear :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
This is one of the most beautiful piece of writing I have ever read!!! I wish something like this did happen <3
- Krishna
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: .Username.

This is one of the most beautiful piece of writing I have ever read!!! I wish something like this did happen <3

- Krishna

what r u doing here maasi?😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Paro_rudra

what r u doing here maasi?😲


Mera aana manna hai!! πŸ˜³ πŸ€£

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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Awesome!!! Very beautifully written!! Keep it up girl!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
This is so beautiful..I loved it.
The writing, the story, the setting every thing is really well done. One of the best story and story writing I have seen in this forum. 

I started watching this serial only 2 weeks back and I caught up with all the episodes first. When I saw the episode when Manik comes to know the betrayal of Dhruv and Alya, this is exactly what I expected in the next episode. This silent, unspoken and unexpected offering of comfort from Nandini. 

Really great writing...hats off to you..

Love
MD


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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
This is beautiful !!!πŸ‘
Loved it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Beautifully written πŸ‘
such a shared moment between them, after the blow of betrayal, would have been so profound.