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PART 198

Aage 1000 steps hain mandir ke

Maan asks once again-

M-So why is she your kul goddess? Why not anyone else?

G-Because she blesses the whole family, the future heirs too and a marriage is a big step for a family so has to register it to Kul Devi...thank her

M-How did she bless you guys and how are you sure she is the one who blessed you?

G-I don't know. That's just an assumption if any other question asks the Pandit ji

M -Like I am that interested...

Chade hain dono sidiyaan... chadte hain aur chadte hani...chade chalo

G-Kaash paani laate

M-May be there would be some at the station, par wahan koi dukaan hi nahi dikhi jo wahan se kharid lete

G-Well water

M-Well water... is it hygienic? What if you get sick after drinking it?

G-Jab mil nahi raha tab kya?

M-Ye bhi hai

Bohot mehnaat ke baad at last mandir pohonch jaate hain

Pohonchke dekha wahan bass ek murti hai

Maan is like WTH iske liye aaye hain? But keeps it only to his thoughts aur wo apna muhh intelligently band rakhta hai

Geet folds her hands...he is observing her...usse koi interest nahi hai murti , mandir aur surrounding ke kheton mein

She prays in silence for a whole 15 minutes

Maan khada hai chup chap..thodi der bad idhar udhar dekh raha hai ki pani kahan hai

She goes and whispers in murti's ear

G-Ao naa Maan mannat maango kaan mein. Ek saath maangte hain

He walks over-

M-What do I do?

G-Just say your wish

M-Aloud?

G-In her ear

He nods, thinks for few seconds and goes to whisper something in the goddesses ears

She didn't expect him to do it as she knows he is an atheist

It's not like he believes it will come true or anything... but he was bit weary and the last thing he wanted was an argument with Geet however small it may be

They start to get down

Geet apne mobile mein romantic songs chala deti hai...she loves love songs

Maan cup chap sun raha hai...sidhiyaan utar raha hai...he actually likes the songs she is playing, some which he knows he even hums a little along with it

As they mount the boat she plays chup ke se raat ki chadar tale song from sathiya...the song is romantic plus suggestive

As Maan aaj-kal zara bigad hi gaya tha...so he was also fantasizing a little

Maan mand-mand muskurate hue chal rahe hai towards the station side by side Geet

Ab agle din station pe Shekhar bhaiya saaman le aate hain unka as unhe aaj hi nikalna tha

Puri battalion yaani family bhi aayi hai

Sab aa kar chipak gaye hain Maan and Geet se

Maa sneaks the ring for Maan into Geet's hand

Ma-mat jao mat jao...we'll miss you...

Maa also gives Maan a tight hug and surprisingly Maan hugs her back-

Geet is also pleasantly surprised

M-Aap zarur milne ayega

He tells Maa and only Maa

The baby gal gives him a peck and Maan smiles at the girl

Geet is pleasantly surprised

Maan ke mann mein to good riddance ke laddu phoot rahe hain

Saari saaliyan ki hum bhi hug karenge

Maan bag uthaa leta hai so they awkwardly give him half hugs

He goes and shakes hands with Shekhar and Geet's dad

Dad-Suno

M-Ji?

Dad-Take care of Geet or...

Maan narrows his eyes

Dad-...or I'll kill you

G-Dad !!!!!!

Maan smirks gives dad a devilish grin but doesn't say anything...

The young boy comes

Boy-Sirrr!!!

Maan extends his hand to shake hands with the boy

Boy-Sir ye aapke lie

The boy gifts Maan a painting made by him

Maan takes it surprised

M-Thank you... emm you should come too..

Boy-Kholke dekho

Maan kholta hai and its Geet's portrait

Boy-I made it sir...didi hai

M-Yah its...exquisite...tum bhi milne aana zarur

Udhar baby gal chilla rahi hai ki godi le lo

Maan sabke sath milaa raha hai trying to ignore the crying girl...station ke halle ke upar uska halla hai

Wo bechari kund rahi hai'ma is trying to pacify par nahi

Ma-Ek baar utha lijie naa, agli baar to isko dekh nahi payenge

Her maa says sadly

Tab sad se ho jaate hain

Gal's ma-Bohot pareshaan kiya isne aapko, I apologize

Maan again superior intelligence dikhakar chup rehta hai and finally bends to pick her up

Geet hugs the maa

G-Bhabhi sab thik ho jayega, don't worry

Maan moves around a bit with the girl in his arms ki w dekho wo dekho...train, chidiya, bridge...sab dikha raha hai...he is telling her it's o its ok...we'll come back...

Baby-Par main to nahi hongi naa tab

M-Tum kahan jaa rahi ho? [keh do hostel...Maan soch raha hai]

Baby-God ke paash...

M-What? Why?

Baby- Mele ko..leuco..leco...leucomi..hai cansher..khoon wala

Maan is struck speechless

After gathering his wits he finally says

M- So why don't you come and visit me then?

Baby-No...I am very busy...I have school...good gals go to school

Maan nods in approval ki haan they do...still he somehow invited her to his place...so what... he was irritated by her... she messed with his hair!!

Baby-You'll get late naa

The baby says

Maan nods...

M-Maybe you can skip school? I can talk to your teacher, he won't mind

Baby-She is a gal...yaaak she is

M-Don't worry main samjha dunga unko

Baby-But I'll die naa

M-Naa you come before that

Baby-Okie I'll see if I am not busy

s-You take care of yourself so you can come see me

He handing her over to her maa and ruffling her hair a little

She chuckles

Maan walks her back to where everyone was going teary eyed...saying bye

M-Bye baby

Maan smiles and walks into his car with Geet waving to everyone

Bye-Byeee

Geet is looking at him with surprised stuck smile. As they get in she promptly says-

G-You actually started liking her

M-What? No...

Maan shakes his head to emphasize his point

G-No? Then why did you ask her to come

He just shrugs...

M-She wanted to come and see me

G-And you didn't? You were conversing with her and showing things and I also heard

M-Coz I didn't remember her name [Maan lies badly]...and I was just trying to get her to shut up...look Geet it's not like...

Maan runs a hand through his hair

M-Did you know she had leukaemia?

G-Yes I knew

M-Why didn't you tell me?

G-What is there to tell? She is as good as a normal kid

M-Yah well why does a kid has to have it? Why not some old mean crone...it's just..

Maan looks annoyed ki kisko peetun

G-Well...you didn't like the kid much

M-It's not about what I feel for the kid...as if my liking her would cure her disease

G-Hmm the good thing is, she will not bother you next time so you shouldn't care about her living or death

M-Geet agar unn logon ko hi bimar padna hota jinse mujhe problem hai then she mustn't even on that list...and it's a very long list. Isn't there anything that can be done about her disease?

G-No...its advanced

He curls his hand in a fist.

M-Why didn't that Goddess of yours protect her?

G-Life is like that

Maan just looks out of the window ki aise situatiion mein to koi kitni koshish kar le tab bhi kuch nahi kar sakta...all in all he is upset and although he wouldn't admit it...he did like the girl...pehle din se use godi mei sula raha tha..

G-You know, she also likes you

M- I know that...

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Ghar wapas pohonche

To ghar par wapas anne ke baad wahi routine

Maan bhi kaam par jaata hai...Geet bhi jati hai...aur... kabhi weekend par Maan bahar ghumane lekar jaata hai

Sometimes he brings her flowers kyunki Geet ne kaha tha Maan se ki she likes flowers and music...to aise hi kabhi kabhi he would bring them...kabhi red roses khoob saare..kabhi sirf ek..kabhi koi aur flower...jo dekh kar pasand aa jaye..he .isn't repetitive

PART 199

Ghar wapas pohonche

To ghar par wapas anne ke baad wahi routine

Maan bhi kaam par jaata hai...Geet bhi jati hai...aur... kabhi weekend par Maan bahar ghumane lekar jaata hai

Sometimes he brings her flowers kyunki Geet ne kaha tha Maan se ki she likes flowers and music...to aise hi kabhi kabhi he would bring them...kabhi red roses khoob saare...kabhi sirf ek..kabhi koi aur flower...jo dekh kar paand aa jaye...isn't repetitive

As Geet was working with a fashion magazine so one day she invites the chief editor for dinner.

As Geet keeps talking about her boss and she really wanted to invite her boss so Maan agreed to her wish and even agreed to her request to come a little early from office that day.

So as promised to his wife Maan does come home early and even before the guest

The doorbell rings and Geet excitedly rushes to open the door.

Maan was standing behind as she opens the door.

She smiles to the boss...the boss is a ultra-glam high society lady... she is 50 but Botox makes her look 30

G-Hello mam, please come in

Maan is struck by lightning when he sees who the boss is...she is none other than one of his ex-mistress...the same lady who cruelly made him do all the nasty things

The bosses eyes widen with amused amazement seeing the man in front of her...she instantly recognizes Maan...he was one of the best yet unbreakable...unlike others he had never fawned over her...he would go through all their nightly motions if she demanded it but he wouldn't do it deliberately...he knew not to get attached to anything already by the time he was13 he also knew how much buttering people paid up so he knew how to do that very well too but since his mistress was already pleased with him and wanted him to fall in love with her.. .Maan did all the correct he had observed others do but only in front of her or when he was being paid for it, never otherwise.

The lady wanted more of him... she wanted to own his heart and soul... wanted complete power over him... never wanted him to leave her...be at her mercy

The lady glances at the girl standing with his slave...the ultra-talkative stupid girl...who didn't have the style not the way to charm anyone...but still had got what even she had failed to own...this girl owned his heart and soul...why did he choose to marry her

But little does the lady knows that Geet has his heart and soul only coz she doesn't demand to own it and would never use that ownership as a leash...she had won what she had, his heart, soul and trust

Geet is busy introducing Maan to the lady and the lady to Maan

Maan stares at his past like he had seen a ghost...he isn't afraid of her...just afraid of what it felt to be powerless in her hand...his minds in a shock, trying to separate past from present

Geet holds his arm while introducing him to the lady

The lady who was just gazing at his toy boy with her crooked eyes

Maan feels the touch anchoring him to reality and he looks at Geet...his mind says, she wasn't there in past so this is the present

Geet's eyes look so much in love as she looks at him

Maan swallows hard remembering the first rule of survival-never let them see your weakness...so he has to act cool

M- Good evening

He manages to say without extending his hand towards the lady...he can't bear to touch her

Hi body shivering ever so slightly

G-Sit mam. Would you like to drink something? And if a hard drink please ask my hubby to make it, that's completely his department

Geet goes in kitchen to check the food

M -Drink?

He won't call her mam; it would be like giving her some power of dominance

Lady-The usual, my taste

G-What would that be?

Lady-Don't pretend as if you don't know, my young handsome lad

Maan bunches his fists behind her back

M-Do we know each other? I don't remember ever meeting with an old lady. Sorry... when did we meet?

Geet comes with appetizers

Lady-Geet, does being in love also make people forgetful?

G-Why? No

Lady-Then look at your husband, he forgets things

Geet is still confused...Maan isn't head over heels in love and he never forgets

Maan is silent...he won't say anything

G-He never forgets. What did he forget?

She looks at Maan

Maan shrug his stiff shoulders

Lady-oh... [Says with a smirk looking at Maan] to make my martini

He makes it and comes back with it on a tray...he won't risk brushing his finger against her

G-Mam please have the appetizers. Maan loves these prawns

Lady-oh I see

Maan goes and sits near Geet... placing his palm lightly on her back. She is only thing which is keeping him from remembering everything right now

Lady-Geet, did you have a love marriage?

G-eh...no...-arranged

He is drawing small circle on her back with his thumb

Lady-oh...that's sad...I hate arrange marriages. No love, just compromise. You don't even know about the person. Nothing about person's past

G-But I think mam, the present and the future is more important and fortunately, I am very happy with him [She says grinning happily]

Maan leans back happy to let Geet deal with the boss.

He scoots closer so that one side of his body is touching her profile

Lady-oh you look cosy couple

G-Thanks

Geet too is a bit astonished at Maan's actions though. Usually he maintains his distance in front of others and generally he is never to initiate contact...also he can feel little tremors in his body

M-We are fine together

Lady- Maan you don't have to shadow your wife. Come sit here

She points at the place near her on couch

Maan smiles at her and lean further into Geet...

M-Am I shadowing you, honey?

He says very close to Geet's ear...his lips almost touching her... nearness with Geet is helping him every second, plus he is remembering more and more how to pretend closeness

Geet is surprised at Maan's changed behavior

Lady-Geet, did you start writing your new article?

G-Yes...eh...it's on new fashion trends

M-Geet has the best fashion sense ever

Maan says smiling still...he never used to praise his mistress...he would do everything to show her that Geet is not his mistress and he is his own man

She blushes at his unexpected compliment

G-No he is just exaggerating

Lady-Geet, then change the topic. Write it on gigolos

G-Huh?

Maan's eyes narrows to laser beams

G-What?

Lady- You know them naa...male keeps

Maan is trembling more violently now...his hand in pressed hard into her hair

G- Are you ok Maan? [She whispers to him]

He nods barely, it was a test for him to prove that he is out of that life and he wouldn't let it affect him

He rests his head on her shoulder.

Geet somehow feels something is wrong

M- Geet will write on whatever she feels comfortable with. Besides what has gigolos got to do with fashion magazine? Is keeping them a fashion trend?

He says and turns to smell Geet's hair...they are always clean smelling to him... not those exotic scents his mistresses used

G-Excuse me...Maan can you come over to the kitchen with me please?

Maan gets up quickly, thankful for the escape but holds onto Geet's hand before walking into the kitchen

She asks in kitchen

G-Is anything wrong? I am worried

M- No I should be fine.

He says holding her hand tight

G-That means something is wrong. Please trust me, tell me

M- But it shouldn't be. There shouldn't be anything to tell

G-I guess I am not worth enough to know

M-Geet trust me, this shouldn't and wouldn't break me...it's not about you, it's my worthiness being measured out there

G-What wouldn't break you?

M-Being out there

G-What are you talking about?

M-Nothing. Come here

Maan pull her close and hugs her tight for a moment. He is feeling so different than he had ever felt with any woman... he doesn't even feel disgusted in the slightest by her closeness right now

G-I think you...you should take rest

M- No! I will not hide!

He says and buries his face in her hair

G-Please...listen...I..I care for you

M-Just give me 2 minutes then

He keeps holding her and focuses on how different he feels now while holding a woman in his arms

He slowly draws back and looks her deep in her eyes

M-You trust me?

G-More than anything

M-You like me a little bit too?

G-Off course I do, a lot

M-Good then. Don't scream.

He swoops down and kisses her...slowly pressing his lips to her...he was sure it wouldn't be the same with her like it was with all of them and it wasn't'

Geet is shockeddd

He holds her close and kisses her to his content hear and slowly breaking away and rests his forehead against hers.

Her eyes are full of emotions

M- I haven't kissed a woman since I was 21

She looks at him with her big pretty eyes

M-Do you understand what that means?

G-No

M-It means you are nothing like any woman I have ever met in my life and I like it this way very much and I haven't kissed a girl since I was 21 coz they were all alike and I wasn't forced to so I didn't

She was freezed hearing him...her hearts was fluttering with joy...he was actually...she felt like screaming with happiness

Maan draws her in another hug, feeling pretty happy himself, he couldn't believe he had found someone he can be so normal with and like it so much too

She loses her balance a bit as she is suffering from rubber legs. She was too much in state of shock and happiness to actually remember about balance

M- Let's go back now; do you want me to carry you?

He says actually smiling for real

G-Huh?

He picks her up and starts walking back to the room where the boss was waiting..

Geet realizes that her boss would see that she was being carried by her husband

G-no...eh...my boss

Maan suddenly realized he didn't care what the woman thought...Geet already knew and accepted him and anyone else's opinion did not matter to him

Maan carries her right to the boss and puts her on the sofa.

M-My wife twisted her ankle

The lady is furious witnessing the scene

She can't stay more...she gets up

Lady-I have an appointment. I should leave

G-But mam...

The lady's anger reaches the highest level seeing Geet's lipstick mark on Maan's lips

Lady-One thing more Geet, you don't even know W of writing. You are fired

G-Why...me...I? But...mam

Geet gets upset with this shocking bad news

M-of course she doesn't know W of writing when it comes to gigolos. She'll find better employment where subjects aren't so degraded

Maan says

Lady- She can marry a person who is not so degraded or she can get clues from her husband who was a gigolo himself

M-The operative word here lady is 'was'

He says smirking

Lady-Same thing...social taboo

M-My... what about your image standing in my home then? If you have any left?

Lady-Geet, ask your husband he was once my pet dog

Maan grows quiet waiting for Geet's reaction

She is just silent...looking down...lost in some thoughts

M-Geet if you want to say something say it..

She just slowly shakes her head in a no...her eyes are still lost

Lady-What can she say? Poor girl

M-She is not poor

Maan countered getting uneasy... he had been counting on Geet unconsciously, now her silence was not very trust evoking

The lady gives a cruel laugh looking at Geet

Lady-200 Rs per hour, toy boy

Maan looks at Geet for anything...any reaction of support and trust

G-Mam

She mumbles

G-How old was he?

Lady-Well...16-17

G-Hmm

Geet is silent again

Lady-oh poor girl still in shock

Maan looks at Geet trying to understand if she making a point or just satisfying her curiosity

G-No...what you did was a crime. We can call the police, isn't it?

She looks at Maan

He is so damn proud of her he can kiss he on top of Eiffel tower right now

M- Harassment +child prostitution + misappropriate behaviours at work and biasing towards employees...hmmm I think 6 years can be guaranteed...

Lady-Aaarghhh!!!!!!!!You two go to hell...I will make sure you never get a job Geet

She leaves in haste

Maan just turns around and picks Geet swirling her around in the air smiling all the while

G-ohhh...what...are you...ohhh...

She is giggling

He puts her down and hugs her tight

She hugs him back

M- I am sorry you had to go through that

G-No...you went through all that. I just did what any wife would have but...I prepared so much of food [she pouts]

He pulls her close again

M-I promise to eat it all.

G- Nooo. I won't take you to doctor

M-No?

G-No. Eat as per your appetite

M-You think it can make me sick? Mam you don't know how strong this (pointing to his stomach) is

G-I know, I make dinner for you daily

M-Not big, strong

G-Sir, we also have a machine called fridge. You better eat stale food than lots of food

M-Oh no, you were quite in despair about putting it in fridge a few seconds ago...now that can't be allowed, it's my stomach now. I have the capacity to store food like camel stores water

Geet laughs

G-Nah, do you even know the menu?

M-Prawns?

G-That was appetizers. I am talking about main course

M-What is it?

G-See you don't even know

M-How bad could it be? I can digest any thing

G-Well let's start. I made pompfret fish, chilly chicken, fried rice, prawn shingtu, mutton curry, kheer and chocolate pudding

s- What? Was that lady hiding a whole army inside her?

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 10 years ago
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Sorry LIKE button is not working !
superb Updt.. feel so sad for that baby..
Maan is actually kind hearted but doesnt show 😳
It is shocking Geet's boss is Maan's e-mistress 😲
glad she was handled well by both Maan Geet 😃
Maan is so proud of her 😉
continue soon !!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
I loved it.
Its one if the best update.
First mandir scebi,maan actually did wished something. I want to know what.
Then about that little girl and his reaction, it was so different thing to come up with.
And the bouncer was boss...
And followed after it.
Shock
Showing unaffectiveness, being cool.
Being close to Geet n finally KISS '
Then Geet actually replying in best way to boss.
Superb parts.

Now wondering what is next.

Continue soon.
Happy new year

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wish u a very Happy New Year dear..
Thnks for the update n PM
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198 - maan follows what geet said even though he doesnt believe in god...he felt bad to know that gal having cancer and in last stage..he felt bad for girl..he started liking her

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