THE JADED PRINCE [MG] PART 206-207 Page 25

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Hi All,
This is Nilanjana...I am starting a new thread for my fic 'THE JADED PRINCE'

Thanks a lot for liking this story till now.

I hope you all will join me again on this thread

Speciality of the new thread that it is for the readers. Now I don't control the thread or the story; readers do.

Now, I just post daily (that's a sincere promise) and we all interact,,,how does it sound? Good?

So lets get started with my intro-

Hi, this is Nilanjana. I have been writing on IF since 2007...I guess. I started writing for Sujal & Kashish. Have now moved to Maan & Geet. Just changed my username from 'storywriter' to 'NilzStorywriter'
I am doing my MBA. Also, I am active on whatsapp FB and gtalk...so we can catch up there too.

That's about me...if you want to know me more just ask.I really want to know my readers more

Love you loads...thanks

PS-look for this space for the update



INDEX FOR THIS THREAD

Part (180-181)

Part (182-183)

Part (184-185)


Part (186-189)

Part (190-193)

Part (194-197)


Part (198-199)

Part (200-201)




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for new thread. waiting for update.
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PART 180

G-Hum room mein chalein Maan?

Wo jaldi se khada ho jata hai

Saari saaliyan mandra rai hain uske sar par ab...like vultures over a body about to die...sab wait kar ra hui thi Geet and maa jaye and wo Maan ki le lein...thankfully Geet saved him from eminent danger

Wo dono room mei chale jaate hain

Wahan Geet ke room ka gate to tod hi diya tha Maan ne pehle so he puts a chair against it

M-Is everything fine with your mom?

He asks once they were inside

G-hmm...I mean ...sit Maan

Maan baith jaata hai

G-emm...my sisters are just...so much...bothering..

He shrugs it off as if it doesn't matter much

M-Just don't leave me alone with them for long

Geet laughs

M-I am serious

G-They won't eat you up Maan

M-They looked hungry enough and what happened to word privacy? I don't think there is anything they didn't ask me!

She again starts chuckling

G-Saali- jiju relation is casual and they are kids, not matured

M-You really are happy, aren't you?

He says smiling while observing her laugh happily

She nods happily and keeps her head on his shoulder

M- Then it's good we came here

G-Hmm, are you disturbed?

M-No I am not...this is different ...not bad though... I wouldn't call it disturbing...I never had brothers and sister

G-You know, maa likes you a lot

Itne mein someone knock on the door

G-I'll see

Geet opens it

Maan is surprised to see the saalis standing there and giggling. While handing over a pile of clothes they sneak glances at Maan

G- Kya laayi hai tu?

Sis1- Wo maa ne apke liye kapde bheje. Didi ye gate kaise tuta? Wo...lock tha naa isliye

Sis2-Didi apne lock tod diya?!!!!! Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

G-Nahi...Maan ne

Maan to palang par let gaya... Mr Shehzada... enjoying the oft girly mattress

Sis1 and sis2 with awed expression-Awesome!!!!!! He can break doors!!! He can break head too

Geet smiles

Sis1and sis2 look at Maan jaise jaake pair choo lengi

Maan ko baate to sunai nahi der ahi but his looks are making him feel uncomfortable... aise kyon dekh rahe hai jaise wo mount everest climb karke aaya ho

Sis1-Diii aapko darr nahi lagta phir jab jiju ko gusa aata hai?

She whispered... dono ki to udd gai ki thode der pehle kitne mazze le rahi the.. yahan jiju to black belt nikle

G-Gussa nahi aata Maan ko

Sis2 -Seriously? Bilkul nahi? [ Feeling relived]

G-Nahi. Mujhpe to nahi karte kam se kam

Sisters-To aap to hamari hi di ho naa...

Both giggle naughtily...ki jab tak Geet hai no problem...

G-Haan to? Par zyada pareshaan mat kiya kar inko

Both nod... shakal par likha hai ki ab aur zyada pareshaan karne ka plan hai

Dono bhaag jati hai hir

M-What was that all about? Wo mujhe aise kyon dekh rahin thi?

He asks a bit worried...

G-Arre nahi, were asking who broke the lock

M-Oh so?

G-I told you

M-Is breaking locks a big deal here?

Itne mein ma aajatai hai

Maa kame mei ghus ke-

Ma-Arre beta ye darwaze ko kya hua?

Looking at Maan and then at Geet

G-Ma wo tutt gaya

Geet looks at Maan

G- Chodo na maa, tutt gaya achcha hua, waise bhi wo lock jam tha

Wo uth ke baith jata hai...he looks around ...yahan wahan...kaun? kya?

Maa bhi samajh jati hai ki hua kya par kyun ka kya pata baad mein pooch legi

Maa- Arre beta tum dono ne change nahi kiya? Chalo jaldi neeche aa jao change karke

G-Neeche kyun?


PART 181

Ma-Arre beta ye darwaze ko kya hua?

Looking at Maan and then at Geet

G-Ma wo tutt gaya

Geet looks at Maan

G- Chodo na maa, tutt gaya achcha hua, waise bhi wo lock jam tha

Wo uth ke baith jata hai...he looks around ...yahan wahan...kaun? kya?

Maa bhi samajh jati hai ki hua kya par kyun ka kya pata baad mein pooch legi

Maa- Arre beta tum dono ne change nahi kiya? Chalo jaldi neeche aa jao change karke

G-Neeche kyun?

Ma-Arre sab wait kar rahein hain. Itne din baad aayi hai...sab se mil, baat kar...teri behnon ne to keh diya hai ki aaj koi nahi soyega

G-Aap log bhi naa...rest bhi nahi lene dete...Maan yahan kaam se aaye hain

Ma-To jamai ji ko karne de, tu chal

G-Maan nahi soyega mere bina

Maa looks shocked surprised ...delighted and happy and sly

Maa- oh phir ... aisa hai to... unko bhi neecha le ana...

Maa goes away chuckling...

Maan looks a bit red

Geet turns

G-Change karke so jao tum

M-I can sleep you know...

G-ok sleep then

He gives look ki nahi sona...and neend nahi aa rahi and tumhare bina nahi ayegi...all mixed into one

Maan aajkal ishaaron mein baaat karne ki koshish karta hai... giving off more expressions on his handsome face

Geet sits beside him

G-Suno...

M-emm...hm?

Ma puch rahi thi tumhare baare mein

He stiffens a bit

G-Maine kuch nahi bataya...isliye puch rahi thi ki...wo...maa hai to...chinta hoti hai unhe...isliye puch rahi thi...she likes you a lot...you know naa

He nods

He is waiting for his answer

M-I am not ashamed you know that... terrified of what it makes me yes...but not ashamed coz I did the best I could...if you want me to lie about it...I will do that

G-No..baba...I am proud of you, you know naa

M-But your family may not understand

She keeps her hand on his

He pats her hand with his other hand

G-I will make them understand. I was worried about you

He snorts-

M-Mujhe kya hoga?

Wahin neeche Sheetal is bad mouthing Maan ki aap logon ko kuch nahi pata hai...kaisa insaan hai wo...aapko sirf paise ki hamak dikh rai hai and blah blah

G-You know what...Sneha...was asking...jiju ke 6 packs hain kya?

Maan looked at Geet wide eyed

M-She only 13!!

He blurts...samajh nahi aaya ki ache ghar ki 13 saal ki ladki kyun poochegi...

G-Arre usne tv pe wo sab film star dekhe hain naa isliye

M-oh...I...I'll go out, you change

G-ok..I'll change in a minute

Wahan Maan utha bahar jane ko to dekha ki aas paas saaliyan mandra rahi hain

Maan ne ek kadam baha rakha to 2 ne advance kiya Maan ki aur-

Saaliyaan-Jiju aapko kuch chahiye...aapne change nai kiya?

Maan wahin se backtrack hokar gate band karke chair laga deta hi ki koi khole na

Par wahan to Geet hai naa...she was changing par Maan kya kare saari saaliyan us par tut padengi if he stands outside his door waiting for Geet to change ki yahan kyon khade ho...kya hua...jhagda hua kya?... didi ne apko bahar kyun nikaal diya blah blah

G--ohhh [She blushes to the color of beet root]

He looks away. Embarrassed himself

M-Wo...your sisters...

He turns his back to her...even his ears are a bit red

G-emmm...

She quickly changes...Geet has turned like a tomato

Maan to gate se chipka hua hai...between rock and hard place...his eyes closed head resting against the door

G-Maan

She murmurs

M-Yeah...

He says without moving an inch or opening his eyes

G-Ho gaya. Tum bhi change karlo

He nods again

G-Main neeche jaati hun

Slowly he peels away from the door and nods again...

When he had entered the room though she was just undoing the pleats of her saree but he did see her sexy stomach and navel though

Geet goes and Maan changes super-fast as he doesn't want her to go away too far...agar phir saaliyon ne pakad liya to

Geet bass stairs se utar rahi thi

Maan almost runs to catch up

M-Geet ruko

She turns

He reaches her quickly and holds her hand

M-Chalo

She smiles

G--I thought you would take rest

M-umm no...

He shudders imagining ki wo akela so raha ho...darwaza bhi locked nahi hai aur wo impish saaliyan kya kar de...

M-Nahi I rather be with you...your sisters... I'll have you by my side

Wahan neeche Sheetal ne hungama khada kar raha hai...ki aap log kuch nahi jaante...anaath hai Maan aur sirf anaath hi nahi hai wo, anaath hone ki wajah bhi wo khud hai

She has cornered maa ki aapne poocha to hoga Geet se...I am sure usne nahi bataya...kya batati... uhh uss jaise ladki tak ko sharam aa gai to samajh jaiye wo kaisa hoga

Ye speech chal rahi thi ki Maan and Geet reach down stairs

Wahan saaliyaan and chote bachchee nahi the... wo sab to Geet ke room ke paas mandra rahe the so they missed the venom

Geet looks at everyone

G-Khana khaa liya sab ne?

Saare bachche come downstairs by now all smiley

Jahan all grownups look weary and unsure but maa looks 100%sure of everything

Maa- Nahi Geet, ye bachche keh rahe hai ki Maan ke sath hi khayenge

g-oh Maan bhi aa gaya, chalo khaa lete hain

Geet pretends as that Sheetal doesn't exist

Maan ka mann to keh raha hai ki Sheetal se bole tu bahar mil phir tujhe batata hoon...but he keeps quiet and follows Geet's lead

Saare bachche and bade go to dining room...khoob halla and laughter and saaliyaan separate Geet form Maan aur gher liya Maan ko

Jab khana serve ho raha hai and during dinner they are all like ki to the elders

Saaliyaan-Shankar bhaiya!! Aapko pata hai? Maan jiju can slit this table in two with kick!!![sis1 says pointing to the dining table on which they were eating his food]

Maan looks embarrassed

M-That's not true...

sis2-oh he is just being modest

Geet starts giggling under her breath

Sheetal starts frowning and then says-

Sheetal-Haan haan kyun nahi...practice to hai hi... haina Geet?

G-Kya?

Sis1-Really jiju you practice daily too cool!

M- No I just work out twice a week

Sheetal is fuming ki teer nishaane par nahi lagaa

Saaliyaan are loading up Maan's plate with more food he can eat

Saaliyaan-Arre jiju ye to lo...nahi nahi ye to lena hi paega

Geet chup chap khana khaa rahi hai

Maan gives Geet a help me please look

G-Arre arre bass karo Maan itna nahi khayega, waste ho jayega

Sis1-Nai nahi...Special bana hai...khana padega warna hum sab bura man jaenge

Maan didn't care kaun bura maan jaega

Wahan Shekhar was sitting next to Geet... jab Maan distracted tha he asked ki

Shekhar-Geet, what is Sheetal spewing about? Maan ke past mein koi problem hai kya?

G-Problem? Bhaiya...aap Sheteal ko jaante ho naa


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Edited by NilzStorywriter - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kabslocks

Congrats for new thread. waiting for update.



Oh you are the first one...welcome to the new thread...here is the new update...hope you like it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for New Thread. 🥳
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Awesome Update 👏
ye sheetal tou Maan aur Geet ke peeche hi parr gai hai 😡
lets c what happen 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats for the new thread

Geet's family will not let Maan go easily hahaha
Poor chap

Geet n Maan's married life is still no where in the scene
Would love to see that phase of their life
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congrats for the new thread dear
lovely update
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awsm updt...i hope sheetal ke irade pure na hu...love maneet moments...dear ur fb link is nt wrking its showing nt found anything
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hey..why in fanfiction not in geet forum???
u would get more readers there...

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