She suddenly placed her hand on her heart - the unfamiliar flutter she'd started feeling thereafter had brought her back to her senses.
Swiftly finding herself very frustrated, she amended her stance at once 'A man who loiters most of his youth, plundering others on the battlefield is bound to be - for want of a better word - well built!' she pauses angrily 'Silly girl...you hate him...then why did you just...why did you just...Kanhaji would never forgive you for this...for..'
She couldn't get herself to complete the statement...to admit that she'd just been admiring her husband's persona!
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Fuming to herself, Jodha decided to get back to the confines of her chamber when her predicament was suddenly worsened! She realized that the emperor had spotted her gazing at him.
'NO! I wasn't gazing, I was glaring at him' she corrected herself
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The furious Jalal had just been about to leave for his personal chamber, unconcerned by the numerous people vying for his attention - when he'd realized that he was being watched. By HER!
Briefly slowing down in his tracks, he looked up through the balcony to study her confounded expressions. Unmindful of the watchful eyes around him and unaware that his rage had begun subsiding, he stared back at her. The frowns on his brow mellowed down as he looked on for a moment. He felt a sudden rush of something - but he didn't know what it was. Just as his lips were about to break out into the slightest hint of a wry smile, her mesmerizing face abruptly disappeared behind the curtains of her chamber.
The parts above are my favorite
OS 'Because, you're you and I'm me!' - That DARK night at the FOREST
I couldn't select any part of it, because everything was my favorite. It would be unfair to select any part š³
Every time I read it I goāŗļøāŗļøāŗļø
OS- 'I have something IMPORTANT to tell you, Jodha Begum' he whispered
In a fleeting urge, the young Emperor let go of her wrist - only to glide his arms around her bare waist now. Alarmed by his advances, Jodha was thrust into a confusing spell of feelings as his taut fingers steadily made their way around her exposed waist. She hated him for this. HATED him! Why was he doing this to her? She tried nudging him away, but her mind was in a thousand places - her half-hearted struggles were not really paying off.
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'She was around me all these days and yet I know not the colour of her eyes...she tried spending many-a-night with me and yet I barely even touched her...because someone I know of with doe-like hazel eyes was constantly in my mind all through... now, why don't YOU spend some time thinking about all this...'
If anything could happen in the serial what you wrote šš
Your ff and os are far better than the serial š³ and no wonder people call you writer e khaasš³š³
I have read these Os's a few times before I joined IFš
Ps. Sorry I have commented for the other 2 Os's also here š³
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Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
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