OS - Her first glimpses of Jalal in his war armour! - Page 4

Originally posted by: batgirl67

Can u please continue this os and make it a ss or a ff?

Originally posted by: lashy

Megha...if you don't read OSes then you wouldn't have the patience to sit through my 6 part short story...😆

But, I do have two OSes - one written before the Mohan attack

and one after...

showing two different Jalal-Jodhas...

That might interest you...😳

That Dark night in the forest - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/3754343/os-because-youre-you-and-im-me-that-dark-night-at-the-forest

He opened his eyes and there she was - beside him https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/3771305/os-he-opened-his-eyes-and-there-she-was-beside-him

(Wrote a new OS when suddenly we had a few disjointed episodes after the tiger attack with Jalal and Jodha again spewing hatred with no proper justification for it!!!)

Originally posted by: BornThisWay

It's not that I don't have the patience to read them. I used to be a fan of long stories till my boards started knocking my door. Your OS is the first one I read since I started watching JA.

Whenever I'll get some free time (like today) I'll deffo give a read to the 6 part SS.

Thanks for the links 🤗

This might sound awkward but, I still don't know your real name 😛

Originally posted by: lashy

I only stated so, because I myself am a very poor reader...obviously that till I realized how uplifting it is when others read your work and comment on it..

That's why I've atleast made it a point to read OSes written in English...(I can't read Hindi/Urdu prose in English as it takes me very long)

As for 6 part story I haven't put the link up there...😕 its the link of two OSes...

My name's Shraddha...😳

When you feel like it gimme a buzz sweetie and I'll forward you the SS link...wouldn't it get lost in the pages warna...🤔

Thanks once again...!😃

Originally posted by: pulu1995

Ahhh beautiful!! Write more plss