SwaRon OS: Love in Paris...

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Tis was so hilarious ...i had to hold my stomach

Just to keep it in plc tis was epic

Rite from the begining where they

Were fighting for harry potter

N then the gazing of statues was funny she felt

Jealous ...which was so cute

But the confession made the

Spotlite ...he just thru the words on sharon

It was romantic n yet u added a whole new

Charm to it

Tis is beautiful writing

Innovative n very creative nishu

A very big kuddos for tat

Do keep them cuming buddy...🤗

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

such a nice nd lovely os yr..

my swaron..too adorable...

loved it nishi...

thanks 4 d pm

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Rachel

@.Vrushanholic.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

ahah nishu this is so different and amazing..
really loved it!!
the last part was so cute...such an unpredictable way!!
and the fight over harry potter :v you include yourself too in the stories!!
amazingly written!

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

If this is how love stories in Paris happen to be.. I would love a chance to get there. ;)

Anyways.. this was as always a cute little romantic insight.. a kick-start to a story.. that was adorable.. and charmed hearts.. at least it did mine :*

I loved the jealous Sharon! She fumes at the very simple things

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

heya nishi

such a sweet os

i loved this swayam

cute one

harry potter🤣

that was superb

"Do you think it's time I started looking for a life partner?"

Sharon stared at him. Uh oh, touchy topic. She gulped and said "yes, I think it is."

"Will you help me then?"

Sharon felt like giving him one smack on his head.

"Yeah sure"

Swayam's face broke into a huge smile "I knew it! I knew you would agree to be my girlfriend!"

i speciaaly lovd this part

thnx 4 d pm

keep writing

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srinidhi94

@srinidhi94

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

a very nice os... loved reading it

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Omg. Such an amazing use of harry potter and mona lisa.
This OS beautifully amazing. I really liked the conversation they had about various things.
the way Swayam proposed, weird ways of asking a kiss. 😆
Really enjoyed it. Keep writing.
Thanks for the PM.