BONUS-TRACK THREAD:The Marriage Story: RagNa FF,Thank You, P-45,7/4/16 - Page 22

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome
its like some action movie..good job dear..loved it..twist pe twist..👏
you explain eveything well and clear every thing...
and ya loved +ve pakhi & prem..
raghav become rawdy rathore😆...and now who will come fron of gun..hope not ragna
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Good thing Prem & Pakhi are not like their dad 😡 loved the chapter, totally action-packed... who was hit by the bullet in the end? I hope RagNa are safe...
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMGGG...what a dashu wonderful gripping action packed update. I think Pakhi or Prem will take the bullet. Thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update.
Finaly kalpi free frm chains n meet raghav. She hugged him like there is no tomarow. N evn rags responded her with same passion. Hwevr, through her sobs he undstnd his strong kalpi is scared immensely cz of that cheap goon, n he lost his calmness. He attacked dat goon n he evn gv chance to kalpi so that she cld let go her tension with dis.(thank u so charu for slap and u gvn more with dat rod beating😃)

Sahil is in shocked dat his own daughter n son help his enemy against him, bt still his ego is their. Rags told him all the plan bt the jerk still thinking that he wil get off with this mess coz there is no proof for murder hapnd 20yr ago.

But the fool dnt knw power of raghav singhania as well as his own daughter's support to rags. Finaly he got to knw abt Dr. Khanna's help n undstnd nw there is nothing more remain.

Everything end bt, sahil, the jerk coldnt let go off his ego and here again he show his true colour. He threat rags n point gun towards kalpi, and he shot.
Big cliff hanger charu😔
bt i feel kalpi is safe and sahil got shot by oficer or by sum1 else. Hope kalpi is safe.
Fabulous update darling😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Charu, charu, Charu..., kahani puri filmy banadi.
In last chappy itself I was going to mention u too r on the way of Vish, but didn't. Ab samajh me aaya Vish ko apni FF ke liye ideas kyun nahi mil rahe? R u sneaking on her ideas? Just joking.

Wat a contrast in two versions of same story! Original TMS is sweet halka fulkil romantic one n this one full of twists n turns, shud I say tussi versatile ho? Han zaroor ho, par kathor bhi ho kahan par update end ki?

Now we need to wait for u only know how long to know autobiography of that shot bullet which is yet to hit it's target! I hope it misses its target, please listen to my plea nd amend if u hv already made it hit.
chalo too much of kidding try jobe once again, perfect thrilling update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice...
I guess it wud b pakhi who will b shot..
Continue soon..
Thanks for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sunyy

Omg what a power packed and action packed update. But please tell me kalpis going to be safe? The end was so scary?

Thanks sweetheart. 😃 No story is complete if it is not a happy ending, but some exceptions are always there. 😆 😛 🤗


Thanks dear.

Originally posted by: Asyalover

hmmm...very clever you are...u shud join detectives...so cunningly thought and wrote everything...totally love it...u certainly know how to keep ur reader's intrigued in the story...hope kalpi is safe...cont soon

Really??? I'll think over it. 😃 Thanks so much. 😳 Shall try to update soon.

Originally posted by: sweet1308

An action packed update love mostly ragna part n last part was breath hitching

Update soon

Thank you dear. Happy you liked it. 😃 i'll try to update soon.

Originally posted by: ReezaFathi

plez update soon..waiting..😃

Okay, thanks. I'll try to update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Wow this was a thrilling action pack update
Everything was revealed in such a awesome way
Kalpi running into Raghav arms her everything and letting out all her pain was a beautiful moment. She knows that now she is safe and no one will dare touch her...
I feel so sorry for Pakhi and Prem. I can only imagine what they are going through to see the evil side of the man they love all their life and worship they ground he walk on...
Raghav beating that jerk black and blue was amazing, I love every mintue of it and the best part is when Kalpi had her revenge on him that was superb lol
Oh no! Sahil has a gun and him threatening to kill Kalpi is awful
Omg! The gun shot at the end is shocking. I hope Kalpi is not shot and fresking sahil plan backfired on himself. Entire chapter was mind blowing, I love it

Thank You very much Natasha. Happy you liked it. 😳😃 yes, generally it happens, alone we gather all our strength and courage to fight the odds. But when that one person comes, be it your elder brother, soulmate, father, you let go of it all. Pakhi-Prem are in an emotionally sad state right now. Glad you loved Raghav & Kalpi beating. 😆 Let's see who takes the gunshot! 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Cinderella81


Wow Charu it was superb action pack the way Raghav protected Kalpi, the way each and every of moment when Prem and Raghav narrating the incident how the know about his plan and failed it. Felt bad for Pakhi and Prem as they want to show the right path to their father and more for Prem each moment eventhough he love his father but don't want to help in his wrong deeds. Pakhya finally u gave him imp role yaar which ema had just sidelined him he convinced Prem to return and help Raghav and he protected his wife from her father. Ohh😲 Sahil escaped with gun and fired aiming Kalpi hope she is fine Prem will come between bullet and Kalpi waiting for ur next update.


Thank You Cindy dear. Glad you liked it. 😃 LOL, yes, Pakhya finally got something to do! As for gunshot, let's see who got hit by it, if at all! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swaralohakare

wonderful update dear
Sahil shoot but whom ? i think its not kalpi prem ya raghav hoga.
what yar tum ne meri sase bitch me lataka di kam se kam kise shoot kiya ye to bata deti . mystery girl
i like the way kalpi hit the goon 'woman are not less than anyone'
love it . update next part soon

Thank you dearie. let's see who got shot by the bullet!! I'll try to update sooner to reveal the suspense. Glad you liked Kalpi beating the goon scene 😃 Thanks for liking the update dear.

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