New SS: Kya Wo Tum Ho?Updated Part 22 on Pg 104 23/9/2016 - Page 22

Honestly, I like it simple... we already have too many twisted stories over IF but simple are very less...so keep it simple...bt if u wanna bring twist then plz no rona dhona...bt a twist is incomplete without rona dhona so better leave the twist...rest ur wish..

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

anything is fine...

Par no complications... Please...

Originally posted by: anky_s

Honestly, I like it simple... we already have too many twisted stories over IF but simple are very less...so keep it simple...bt if u wanna bring twist then plz no rona dhona...bt a twist is incomplete without rona dhona so better leave the twist...rest ur wish..

hey dear...liked the way story moving .. .but if u wanna add twist...then plz be it a simple one...don't want some scary, too emotionl twist...at last its up to u..ur wish.. 😊 ...am always reading this story whatever the twist is...

i will prefer story without any big twist
like all is well
but its upto you comletely what you want
if you want twist plz bring small not big that will create comlication between them
cont soon
will be waiting

Originally posted by: Monikaarora

hey dear...liked the way story moving .. .but if u wanna add twist...then plz be it a simple one...don't want some scary, too emotionl twist...at last its up to u..ur wish.. 😊 ...am always reading this story whatever the twist is...

Originally posted by: angelshah

i will prefer story without any big twist
like all is well
but its upto you comletely what you want
if you want twist plz bring small not big that will create comlication between them
cont soon
will be waiting

Part 9

Maan woke up in the morning and went to his gym. After that he got ready and went downstairs for breakfast.

Maira and Ram: Good Morning

Maan: Good Morning

Ram: Slept well or

And while saying that Ram winked

Maan: Dad!!

And Maira and Ram grinned at that

After breakfast Maan stood up to go to office

Maira: where are you going Mister?

Maan: Mom...when I have got ready... Obviously I will be going to office...

Maira: Nahi ji... I called Rano early morning and asked for Geet to go shoppiong with us... So u will be taking us for shopping

Ram stood up and while going whisperd to him

Ram: Maan betay baat maan lay...warna Malke-Maria naraz ho jai gi...and then you know...you will have to manofay...

Maan knew that he will have to agree or else...

Ram then spoke aloud

Ram: Maan don't worry about the meeting... I will do it... You spend time with two beautiful girls

Maan and Maira smiled at that

At that moment Maan cell rang

Maan: Mom...you get ready... I have to take this call... or else Yash will beat me once he comes here

Maira and Ram smiled at that

Maan took the call and then

Yash: Kutte, Kaminay... Phone to utha liya kar... Kidhar hai to... I am calling you from yesterday...abh bolega bhi

Maan: when you will stop giving me these ghaliya then only I will speak na...

Yash: Wo to tu deserve karata hai...

Yash laughed at that

Yash: Acha bata kaisa hai tu?

Maan: Bilkul theek. tu suna?

Yash: Acha I am calling you to tell... I am coming tomorrow

Maan: Acha... this is very good... And do tell me the your arrival time and plane no... and I can come to take you..

Yash: Yes I just called you to tell this... Maira Mom say baat hui thi kal...

Maan: Did she tell you something?

Yash: Nahi kyun?

Maan(selthought) Chal yeh to acha hai... Agar is ko yah baat paat chal gayi... To is ka bus chale...he will start kicking me through the phone...

Maan: Nahi when u will come I will tell you...

Yash: Chal then see you tomorrow.. I will whatsaap u all the details... Kal milte hai...

Maan: yeah sure... I will get the guest room ready then

Yash Yeah

Maan: Ok bye

Yash: Bye

Maan(selfthought) Thank God... aaj to bacha... Liken Maan kal kya hoga... Kal to pakka...

Maan just thinking about tomorrow gulped down his saliva...

Maira came with her purse from back

Maira: Baat ho gayi yaar say..abhi chale jaaneman kay pas

Maan smiled embarassingly at that and kissed her and bought her on the front seat of car.

Maan: Bachat to hogayi hai...par kal nahi hogi shaid baat nahi sedha laat pare gi.

Maira laughed at that and they continued their journey to Handas house

Yash was Maan very best friend since their school years. They studied together until their professional degree. Maan went for his BSc in Business and Yash Malhothra for his LLB and became a lawyer. Later Maan completed his MSc in architecture and Yash did LLM. Yash was still single and was a heart throb just like Maan. Girls used to die for him in UK where he practiced and whenever he came to India he stayed with Maan. So now Yash is coming once again but he doesn't know anything about what happening in Maan's life though they shared everything with eachother.

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Rano: Ganga go and wake up Geet..pata nahi raat ko kab soyi hai yeh larki

Ganga went up and tried to wake up but couldn't and then Rano went up

Rano: Geet get up Beta... Maan and his Mom is coming for you to take you to shopping

Geet: Haa kya... kon Maan

Rano: Tera hone wala fianc...

Geet at that point woke up shocked and Rano was laughing at her expressions

Get: Maa acha bhala I was sleeping and you woke me up with a nightmare

Rano: Kyun Maan itna dorana hai... Mijhe to laga bara hi handsome hai

Geet blushed at that and Rano came close to her kissed her forhead and caress her hair

Geet put her head on her Mom lap while Rano kept her caressing her curly mass of hair

Geet was smiling silently

Rano: Lagta hai shadi jaldi karni paregi...

Geet just hide her face in her lap...

Rano: No need to hide from me... Aisa to hota... itna acha sasural kismat walo ko milta hai Geet...

Geet nooded

Geet: But mai apni baat par kaim ho ok

Rano: acha Baba chal tyar ho ..they will be coming

Geet got up and got ready in jeans and red mid-thight lenght top with a scraf around her nek, hair open with just a small clip on one side. Make up was just to enhance her already beautiful features

She took her leather bag and dropped in her cell phone and wallet and sunglasses and came downstairs

Maan and Maira just reached there

Rano: Geet take your breakfast... tea is on stove..and

They were interrupted when Maan and Maira entered

Maira greeted rano and then Maan

Maira: Kaisi hai app

Rano: Bilkul theek ji...

Geet(Selfthought): boht hi efficient hai yeah Mr. Maan... bari jaldi thi... Abh I am so hungry... Inke samne kuch khaya to...

Maan looked at her and was mesmerized by her beauty. She was looking so beautiful in that red top and blue jeans with leather bag in one hand.

While Geet was awestruck looking him in his office attire...

Geet(selfthought) Waisay He is looking so sexy in this attire... Right that instant smacked her forehead and thought..Geet kia bol rahi hai... tera dimagh bilkul hi chal gaya hai...

Maan came back soon from his thoughts while Geet was now confused to say anything...should she greet him in a traditional way or say hi

Maan made things easy for her

Maan: Hey Geet, how are you

Geet: Wo I am doing good... How are you

Maan: boht bura...

Geet got confused at him saying this

Geet: Kyun you are not feeling good... sore throat hai, fever hai... haa sardi bhi to boht hai..

Maan: Geet Geet chup ho jao... pareshan honay ki zarorat nahi

Geet made a confused look

Maan:I meant to say... app ka jadu is dil ar bhi chal gaya hai... so is bemar dil ko abh app ki zaroorat hai

Geet mouth turned in a perfect O and then red hue crept on her face...and she said

Geet not knowing what to say further and trying to divert the topic said

Geet: Let me have some breakfast and I will come

Maan grinned at that and nodded and went to sit along with Rano and Maira

Geet knew that they were waiting for her so she drank tea only and came

Rano knew her well and asked

Rano: Geet what did you eat?

Get: Tea...

Rano: Is larki ka mai kya karo... I asked you what did you eat and you are telling me u drank tea

Rano turned towards Maan and Maira

Rano: App please wait kare... I will bring her something... She doesn't eat so early

Maira: Koi baat nahi ji...we are waiting

Rano went

Maira: Beta how are you... all well

Geet: Ji Mom I am good...

Maan smiled at her when she called his mother mom. He felt some kind of satisfaction just by hearing her.

Both glanced and smiled at eachother in the mean time while Maira kept on talking with her...

Rano came back and gave sandwiches to her

Rano: Please kha lena gari mai...

Maan and Maira bid bye and and Geet hugged and kissed her mom and then went to the car.

Precap: Shopping!!

Thank you so much for liking and commenting and letting me know about your view on twist. There will be a simple twist which I have decided. So you all can be happy... 😊

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Part 10: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/117850038

maan's best friend yash is coming to india and going to stay with maan..
maira informed maan that they are going to handa house and from there they will pick geet and go for shopping
maan and geet both are admiring each other...
maan was happy to hear geet calling his mother as mom...
eagerly waiting for the next part

Nice part..
Both admiring each other and going for shopping...