Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I) - Page 69

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First off, sorry for the late unres!

Now coming to the update, as usual, it left me stumped and with a feeling of wanting more and more and more!!! Just a fabulous job.

Poor Khushi - she just catches herself in these weird situations. No wonder even in the present story, it feels like she's still haunted by the past.

I loved the little bits you are adding about AnandRams and Tewari in the past - I think I need to go back to all the previous updates and see hints that you have placed along the way.

Anand Raizada actually seems like a nice guy. Hope we get to see more of him!

Though Arnav came off as a total asshole to Khushi at the end, I can't really blame him for all of it. He's been thoroughly brainwashed by his mother and he already felt it was weird that Khushi dressed up so much just to see his dad so in his adolescent brain, all the pieces fit. However, if he actually thought about it, he would remember that Khushi is the same girl who would rather stay outside his house than step inside with only him alone as she didn't deem that proper😕

Uff, that HP - he's such a Didi ka Chamchi😆 At the back of my mind, I still can't get over the fact that in the present, HP is thinking about "that Chandni Chowk girl" and her return - what does HP know that we don't!!!??!!!

The foreshadowing of more heartbreak coming along for Khushi makes me sad, but you are doing such a great job with this story, I can't help but be enthralled by it!

P.S. Hope you enjoy your vacation. Will wait for your return!

What happened on the fateful day ? Kehte kehte reh gaya

waiting for the next part

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Poonam Raizada is simply sick..chii..how can she think so bad about Kushi?? and that HP..idiot..
and Arnav..he is maa da laadla..he believed whatever his mom told him?????!!

How Kushi must have broken to be turned into a Halwaii and leave college after experiencing a job in a corporate ..all bcos of that evil woman..

brilliant update as usual Radhika.. Preeto is wonderful..

Ohmygod, I am so late to this party, I feel terrible. *crie*

Hi people.

Originally posted by: YellowBoots

Hi everyone.

Hello Yellow,

So are some/all of you expecting an update today?I thought I made a pretty non-commital wishy-washy promise the last time 😛 As you might have guessed that is a roundabout way of saying that I have nothing on me today. I hope to update end of Monday.

And, MONDAY it is!! 😛

I have been reading some of your comments/ thoughts/ feedback and needless to say they are all brilliant and a little intimidating even. But thank you. You guys made me realise how enormously idiotic I have been by leaving the most inane comments on the fabulous stories that I have read.

OH! chak de... just pour all your creative juices right here on Chandni Chowk jee 😉 Me thinks that would be the beshtest kind of return gift you can give to all your creative frenz.

Since I am new to fanfic writing, I am always unsure the expected etiquette on comments. Should I respond to each individually? Does that make me a crazy narcissistic? Should I make a general note and offer a sweeping thank you to all the people who commented? Does that make me an a-hole? I don't know.

No, keep it simple... just write yours and in between if you wanna take break then read the comments and get back to writing once again...oh is it MOnDAY!! Yayy!! You get it ... thats the reward the comments actually want! 😉😳

Since, I have got some feedback on the pace of the story (again) and people's doubts about my motivations with the characters and how I will achieve a Arnav-Khushi endgame, I am going to address this bit. When I thought of writing this story, I had a premise in mind, with a start, a middle and an end. I also had a key conflict point in mind. Of course, crux to my story is the subject of class divide, which is part of the show's premise too, but one that they move away from soon, probably because it does not make for good TV. But I figured that this wasn't a story that would be any fun with a linear timeline and hence the back and forth. I know this creates a bit of a problem in that I am still establishing character ticks and motivations for the same lot ...twice. And the story is very exposition heavy. That is my not particularly stellar defence of my story's pace 😊

Keep the pace you are comfortable with - age old but holds true - Slow and steady wins the race.😆

On the Arnav-Khushi endgame, yes, that is my idea, impossible as it seems now, and be warned it will seem even more so once you read my next chapters!

I just love it this way when they are yearning and I am rooting for one or the other. When there is peace in the world.. the heart has no reason to flutter... keep the dhak dhak going in it own realistic way Boots!👍🏼

On character motivations and behaviours, of course, as a reader it is your absolute right to interpret any way that you want them to. So if you think Arnav is a dickhead, you are right and if you think he has shown growth and is therefore amazing, you are right too. I think it would be dishonest on my part if I actually explained why my characters are the way they are. Right?

Yep! and Its called character interpretation and perspectives of the reader and writer dare not interrupt or interfere at all. After all let the readers have their continued RABBA VEs and lovers tiffs whichever way they want!! 🤔

Anyway, absolutely chuffed reading all the comments. My apologies for putting the imagery of diaper barfis in your head 😛 And since a couple of people discussed on all the possibilities of hilarity if HP & Sonu were in the same house, I am seriously considering if Arnav should marry Payal *ducks*

I am seriously thinking about the marital possibilities too!! yehhh!!! I have sadist traits... oh wait! before I continue I gotta *duck too*

Some other things:

1. My name is Radhika, you may call me that. Or Yellow Boots. Or YB. Or anything else you deem right

Only 3 suggestions no Bootie!! Boo!! Yellow?? Thats my fav color so, thats what pulled me to this thread initially. Rest to *clears throat and starts* RABBA VE... 😉 😊

2. Yes, I am a Dilli girl/woman. Bengali. Though I live in Bombay now. It is my sasuraal. And sasuraal genda phool

Oh Well!! check, check and not check 😉 *strumming* to the Bong Connection!!

3. I don't send PMs because.. I am just very, very lazy (cue stereotype about Bengalis), so you don't need to buddy me. Of course, if you send me a buddy request, I will add you assuming you really want to be friends with me

The Lazy mention check.

Now, me thinks that you really really want me to buddy you and so there the key got pressed coz I cannot disappoint you 😆

Poonam Raizada and HP together are making Khushi's life be filled with woes other than what is already there... Arnav too has fallen into the snooty trap!