From my heart...!!WRITER'S SPECIAL part4 updated@27on 15/12 Pm's later - Page 13

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Awesome story loved it
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And they meet again .. Nice.

Heyy all...m back with another update written by a some new writer...

This part is written by BLUSHY(FARIYA20)

PART 4

geet came home her mother saw her..coming

Rano - geet bety

but she went straight to her room , she did not

listen their vocie she was too angry on her self

RAno : uff yeh ladki kiya hua ise ab

Darji " ja kar zara dekiya akhir asa kiya

hua k humri lado ne hume pechana hi

nahi aj

dhavini chuckled listening this ,

Rano : buaji ap bhi ..na dekti hoo mein

here in room geet IS cribing to her fav babaji

GEet : wah babaji sab apki wajh say ,

BAbaji : mein nai kiya kiya

GEET : ha sab apki galti hai , q muje inta

talkative banya ap nai , jab dekho be wajah

ka chupar chupar karti ho , jo pochna tha

woh toh pocha hi nahi , babbaji q

she said making cute and angry faces

RAno came to her room saw her talking

with babji

RAno - q tu babji ko tanng kar rahi hai

becharey unk pass aur bhi kam hotey

hongye , teri bak bak sun kar woh thak gye

hongye thoda aram kar ley aur unhen bhi

aram karne dey she said entering her room

haww she uttered making gol gappa face

BABAJi : chalo ab yeh mere sir nahi khaye

gyee, sahi time par agye RAno

GEET : mein babaji ko tang nahi kar rahi

thi.. she said with frown fold her hand on her

chest

RANO - acha acha thik hai nahi kar rahi

thi , par yeh asaa face q banya hua hai

aur nechay tuje awz di tu suna q nahi

GEET : MAA ,,, sorry woh nechey awaz nahi

suni uskey liya , woh mere dhyan nahi tha

she apologized sincerely

RAno ; caresses her head lovingly , kiya hua

beta , abhi gussa thi aur ab maafi maag

rahi hai

GEET : woh maa muje na gussa aya tha

apne ap par , 1 week say jo mein pochna

chrahi thi , meri chaper chaper , bolney ki

adat ki wajh say sab karbar hoya aur mein

poch nahi pai , she said with complain face

RANO look her daughter confused trying to

understand what she talking about

RANO ; tu kiya bolti hai mer kuch samj

nahi araha

GEET : wahi toh maa mein bhut bolti hoo

na isliya sab hoja ta hai , kiya mein zayda

bolti ho islilye..she mumbled sadly

RANo : nahi mera bacha kha tu kaha zayada bolti

hai ,,, she said ,,, bus chup hona bhol jati

hai she mumer to herself

GEET : suchi main zayda nahi bolti paaka

na

ha mera bacha said rano

geet sat on her bed put her hand on her

chin thinking about her meting with the stranger

thoughtfully ...

RANO : acha chal chud aja kuch kha le

subha say tune kuch nahi khaya hai

GEET : maa bhok nahi hai please , mein

thodi dar bad kha lungi she with grummpily

RANO : par

GEET : please maa she cribbed

her mother walked out leaving a sad geet alone ,

she wondered y her daughter is so upset..

geet was so upset. cursing herself she missed the chance to

know about her staranger name , she laid

on her bed recollecting their meet

her eyes got teary unknowningly..

here in hall rano came darji asked enquired

about geet

DARJI : kiya huaa , geet nahi ayi.. usnai

morning mein bhi kuch nahi kya tha he

asked

Rano : pata nahi bauji , thodi dair pehley

gussa thi , phir pata nahi upsat hogye kisi

bath ko lekar she said worringly

Dadi : koi btha nahi hoga kuch tum tu janti

hoo rano geet ko , k hogi ched chad in

bacho k mood ka kuch pata nahi hota pal

tula pal mein masha , abhi thik hojai ge

rano smiled weakly..

darji relaxed...

ans both nodded moving from there..

here maan came home after meeting

he smiles to himself thinking about his

meeting with her

MAAn shaked his head pagal hai puri ki

puri

dadi saw him entring with smile

Dadi : kiya bath hai aj humrey potey , k

chere par itni pyari smile , kasie she questioned

surpirze with his unusual smile

MAAn heard his dadi's voice and made stern face

aagin

dadi : arey kitni pyari smile thi , achey lag

rahey thay ap smile karey she said coming

close to him put her hand on his cheek

lovingly

MAAN : dadi ap nai bulaya tha urgent kuch

kam tha maan asked

Dadi : hai woh , hum nai ap say pocha tha

na , k humri dost ki poti

but maan cut her...

MAAN : dadi please ap ko mein kha na , i

dont want marry now

DAdi : maan hum kon say apki shadi kal

karwa rahey hai , hum toh bus ladki

passan karne ko bol rahai hai ,

MAAN : dadi muje koi ladki passan nahi

karni please

DADI : maan ap ko koi ladki passan tu nahi

hai na she asked

MAAN 's thought went to " HER " he was once again lost

thinking about her

DADI yelled..: MAAN

MAAN- huh he came out his thoughts ji dadi

DAdi made face : maan agar ap ko koi ladki

passan hai tu boliya warna is week hum

sab meri friend ki poti ko dekney ja rahi hai

unho nai humai diner par invite kiya hai ap

k pass week tak ka time hai , koi ladki

passn hai tu bata dije warna joh hum chaenge waise hi hoga she declared

and went from there in anger

MAAN : yeh muje kiya hogya jab dadi nai

muje kisi ladki ko like karney k bare mein

kha toh muje uska khyal q aya he question

to himself

here in room geet abhi tak upset hai dhavni

came to talk to her

dhavni : kiya hua tuje

GEet : kuch nahi

she got up sat on her bed.sadly ..

, dhavni sat beside her

KISi nai tujhe kaha geet k tu worse liar hai

dhavni commented

geet looked at her, her eyes showed her

sadness

DHAvni : bata kya hua

GEET : hona kiya hai aj phir mili ti mein us

stranger se

DAHVNI excited : suchi wow kiya nam hai

uska she asked

GEET : nam pata hota tu kiya main usko

starnger bol rahi hoti idiot she said gritting

her teeth

DHAVNI got confuse - matlab

GEET : matlab uski dadi k bar mein pocha ,

uski sis k barey mein pocha yeha tak k

mein nai use kiss ki confortaion bhi poch

li nahi pocha tu uska nam ..maine sab pucha but naam nahi.. she

said with irritation

DhAvni looked her open mouthed is that true..?really??

geet nodded her head

Dhavni bursted in laughter

hahahhhahaahah geet tu hahahaa master

hahah piece hai she said laughin..loudly...

making geet annoyed

geet threw pillow at her face

ouchdhanvi winched

GEET : chup ho idiot

DHAVNI heheh ; ok she said controlling

her laughter...

geet looked away and turned her face

she was angry now dhanvi came close giving her bear

hug

DHAVNI : oyee mere baby gussha hogya ,

GEET : push her mein baby nahi hoo

DAHVNI : ha hai mere cutey baby she said

puled her both cheeks cutely

Geet : nahi kar na she said shoved her

hands from her cheek..

Dhavni : acha thik hai nahi karti , ab gusaa

q horahi hai

GEET ; dhavni ek tu mein tension mein ho

aur tu hai k

DHANVI : par tu tensio mein q hai she

asked

GEET : had hai yar tu poch rahi hai mein

tension mein q hoo ,ek tu muje us ka name

nahi pata aur tu hai k

DHAVNI : dekh geet pehley tuje sirf is bath

ki tension thi na k woh teri KISS ko galat

na samje

GEEt nodded her head innocently...

DHAVNI : toh usne nahi samjha

GEET shook her head in negative..instantly

dhavani : nahi na so just chill , ek stranger

hi tu tha , itna q soch rahi hai us nai teri

help ki tu nai usko thank you bola , phir tu

nai us say kiss karne k liya bhi sorry

boldiya hoga so just chill na she said

making geet realaxed n normal

GEET : hai yar mein q itna serious hogye

par

strangely her heart did not agreed with her words...they refused to acknowledge them..!!!

to BE continued...

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nice part dear...jhalli geet...hihi..cursing herself for not asking maan name...otherside maan also thinking about her whem dadi confront him...arey..maaneet ko jaldi milwa do next part m...continue soon..

Nice update dear geet really you talk more dear

geet talking 2 babaji

Nice update geet is so cutie pie she is upset because she didnt asked maan name n maan also cant stop thinking about her thnx 4 update its really awsome dear each update is written by different writer although the story is going very beautifully hats of to all of u thnx 4 pm