From my heart...!!WRITER'S SPECIAL part4 updated@27on 15/12 Pm's later

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

nice part.. geet cursing herself for not asking her stranger's name.. dadi asked maan if he has some girl in his life and instantly geet name came to her mind..

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Mayuvani5

@Mayuvani5

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Cute update...

Geet bhi na...naam nahi poochi ro rahi hain...

Maan ka bhi yahi haal hain...🤔

Beautifully written

Blushy...tum tho super update diya hain...👏

waise sweta...mujhe pata hain Dhavni naam ka raaz...😎 🤗

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AshelySpinelli

@TJ_spinelli

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

oye blushy superb part👏

geet is angry nd didnt listend 2 anybody who cald her nd went 2 room

de her crbbing session startd bechare babaji😆

rano tried 2 cald down geet nd she is rite geet bas chup hojaana bulthi hai🤣

daarji said dat may be smbody teasd satd y she is upset😊

other side maan was fully lost in geet nd his lips were curved in a bful smile 😃

daadi gave him 1 week time nd aft dat dey r gong 2 c d gal

dhvani came 2 c geet nd saw her grumpy face😛

when geet tld wt all happnd nd she didnt askd stranger's name dhvani culdnt stop laughng geet is masterpiece 🤣

den dhvani said 2 geet dat sh explaind her kiss was out of happiness nd ntg more dan dat nd she shld nt wrry much though geet agreed bt her heart didnt😳

waitng 4 d nxt part

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

awesome update!!!!!

geet getting upset about not able to ask her stranger's name!!!!!!

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kamna

@kamnagupta7

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Geet is such a master piece 😆
Sab baat kar li lekin naam nai pucha.
Now she is feeling sad abt it.
She is asking her mother did she talk much.
Superb part blushy

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fariya20

@fariya20

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#136

me thinking yeh mein hi write kiya hai na lol

sweety awesome tu nai meri writting mast kiya 👏

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gurtimuskaan

@gurtimuskaan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#137

read all 4 parts. Loved it very much

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gunjar

@gunjar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Superb update fariya..

so cute tha..

geet ki cribbing with babaji..

rano's defining abt geets talking nature😆🤣

maan smiling and dadi teasing him...😃

wow dadi asked maan abt him liking any girl and maan thaught abt geet

great...😃😛

dhavni teasing geet on her answer abt the stranger...🤣🤣

just sooo cute update...

awesome fariya👏👏

continue soon...

waiting to see the next part of a new writer...⭐️

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sandymg

@sandymg

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#139

awesome update!!!😊😊

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Sweta

@crazy_sweta

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: fariya20
me thinking yeh mein hi write kiya hai na lol
sweety awesome tu nai meri writting mast kiya 👏

hehe baby nahi tune hi likha tha yeh part 😆

waise u knw the way u showed dhvani...she is the same in real life😛

jab mai yeh padh rai ti toh mujhe dhvani sabse cute lagi...coz dhvani is my frnd whom i have include as geet's sister..she acts the same way when i tell her ki maine kuch kiya toh