ArShi FF: Sex between Hearts - Thread 1 - Page 29

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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank u so much deeps for ur all love...i am honoured to be part of ur yet another new journey...and u sweet enough for dedicating the FF to me...i simply love u baby...its ur brain child ..u such a sweet heart and down to earth person..its my blessing to be with u and learning loads from u...hugs

coming to chap ...very very refreshing start..there is an awesome feel attached to it while reading ...some how its the positivity of khushi or professionalism of DR R...or the friendship of arnav anjali and arjun...or concern friend like lavvu and aman...the aura or feel is amazing :)

loved this damn professional arnav...at the same time his friendship with anjali and arjun..very cool and mast :)...loved the way u have expertly written the delivery scene...loved the way he congrats the parents :).loved the way he showed door to careless person..he looks an interesting guy...DR R :)...so he running his family hospital ... his family into this noble work from last 60 years...thats awesome

i m loving khushi...:) how positive she is...understanding her hubby work load and all...even bringing out positivity from her saas venomous words...its awesome...deeps u as usual amazing with ur characters...

i m loving lavvu :)...good to see concerned and caring friend here :)...and aman being her hubby...good change :)

khushi sms to her hubby ...very heartening..her flashback ..wedding day memories the tease all written beautifully :)..kahan hay hubby dammit...busy screwing or wt...poor girl 4 abortion already and now 5 months preg and still damn positive...awesome awesome

loved the trio friends convo...they for sure treat to read :)...hmmm very interesting character of arnav here...all free from work and three doctor friends in to each other...pulling leg and all :).i am loving his hotly side too ;) for a change ..excellent writing...

looking forward eagerly ...amazing and fab start.



Edited by lalarukh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

I would say this is amazing and very intriguing start. I am not really sure who is whose spouse and will wait for more story to unfold. I always love friendship and associated bond. Enjoyed reading Kushi n Lavanya's as well as Arnav, Arjun and Anjali's bond.

I just don't understand how people don't get time for the important person in their life even for text or call. It is beyond my brain. But as I said earlier I will wait for story to unfold before I take sides and start bashing on characters 😆.
Can't stop myself from making a guess though 😛. Will / Is Arnav Kushi's obstetrician?
Waiting for next update 😊.
Edited by jduke - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting start...
Waiting for the story 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow! Interesting.
Cannot comment on anything as of now. Love to read more about this.
I am ready for this roller coaster ride 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
I really wanted to comment in the first chapter.
La and Aman,couple with diff ideology.
Khushi,seeking happiness in everything..doing xtra effort to sustain relationship with husband(which i guess is not arnav)
Arnav strict yet casanova
I think this much is enough..is arnav also married ha..ha.. i am using my brain too much in it..
But all seems complicated..
Edited by ntmrjn - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting start so arnav is a doctor a Oby so who is Khushi unfaithfully husband who is screwing around with a pregnant wife at home on his anniversary and Khushi is living in a fantasy world where her disgusting husband is god damn woman can't wait to see where you going with this one well i don't like unfaithful partners so off the bat i already hate him thanks for the pm.Dammit I am an idiot you said her husband name not once
Edited by dumas - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow... nyc start... m already in love with
Khushi..!!! She is cute...
But her husband...And Arnav. ..
He is having a different shade of character...
R they both married...???
This is getting so intresting Di. ..
Wow...continue soon...
Ausm start... tc
Edited by sweety421 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I hate abla nari tolerating infidelity.already hate this asr.will wait for story to unfold before taking a final call
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ok this arnav is totally opposite of arnav from your other stories... I hate this kind of men... Lets see how it proceeds...( I am not able to digest that I have to change my mindset from TVK-FF arnav to this one... I need time..)

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