TH5:ARSHI FF:A Silent Roar...Chapters 23-29/COMPLETED

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thread1 CH 1-5

Thread 2 CH 6-10

Thread 3 CH 11-16

Thread 4 CH 17-22

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CHAPTER 23 ...PAGE 1...POST 1

CHAPTER 24 ...PAGE 1...POST 3

CHAPTER 25 ...PAGE 1...POST 4

TEASER 10 ...PAGE 1...POST 5

CHAPTER 26 ...PAGE 1...POST 6

CHAPTER 27... PAGE1...POST 7

CHAPTER 28 ... PAGE 1...POST 8

CHAPTER 29...PAGE 125...POST 1




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Posted: 10 years ago
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am I first after four threads???
Can't believe it,😊

I am back...

First loved the visuals👏

Present, you explained really good Khushi's state of mind spending night alone and those missing stars...very emotional part.She must be scared as hell.No one was there but Devi Miya is always there for her...She sent her a mother, Naniji who was so happy after years.Anjali hugs Khushi and makes her feel better.I wished that in real IPK but it didn't happen.

I really adore the part of Kitchen,😳 You have mixed couple of scenes together there,How cute is that.But he is ASR if she is Mrs Raizada...such a cute , light and lovely scene it is.I always wanted these things in our real IPK but nah.She surrenders after all she can't be angry so long with her Laad Governor.

Past , I think you took Teri keri to the next level.Uff , they danced alone 😳and she was ready to give in under his heated desires when Shyam😡 ruined it.I hate him , truly hated him at that moment.

Dhruv and Sneha's part is moving forward.

Really nice update👏
Edited by MehreenB - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread loved the update Asr trying to woo his wife who is so angry at him for putting his life in danger loved how the family made and excuse to be gone loved him teasing her in the kitchen and so cute how the fell and the past Khushi trying to avoid him and pretending to be angry to stay away loved the dace and snake jealous of their closeness awesome update thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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🥳 congratulations on new thread.. awesome update.. arnav is getting naughty hihi
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Congrats on the new thread
Loving the update
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Lovely update...
Can't wait for the next update...
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Waow... New thread... Congrats dear... It was an wonder ful update... Good to see that all their worries have ended now... Is there something more to it? Coz khushi was feeling sacred for something? Or was it just like that? Arnav wooing khushi in present and past both were cute... Felt so bad for sneha... That innocent girl had to in through so much trauma... They watching the stars was too beautifull... Who was that person? He had come to harm arnav khushi? Was it shyam? Update the next soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry sorry lakho sorry! I took sooo much time to finally read chapter 23!

Amazing update di! Loved it as always!

Present:
I was so confused as to whom I should support. Khushi or Arnav? But then decided neither. Both were wrong for hiding such important things from each other. I mean, yes, I agree Arnav did all that to save Khushi and vice versa, but at the end neither succeeded (according to me). Arnav got shot and Khushi ended up being upset from him...
Though I really liked how Arnav was trying to "win her back." That was very cute. Can't wait to read what happnes in the room. (Thank God I get to read this chapter and the next one on the same day. Nahi toh I wouldve been ranting like, "Di how can you end the present like that" blahblahblah 😆)

Past:
Khushi's state is a bit hard to understand. 😛 Like, she loves him but then acts so strange that it's just... like face palm moment for me. but I really like how Arnav is handeling all this. Thank-you for giving us the dance! Lived the gifs! 😳 Aww the pool side scene wz really heart touching! I have always loved their conversations about their moms, and this one was no less.
Oh teri, ye snakewa pirse agaya!? 😡 Pops in out of nowhere! 🤢
OMG poor Sneha! What scarry nightmares is she having! And there goes Dhruv to be on her side! He is soo cute! Love their pair! 😳

Thanx for the pm di! 🤗 Love you! ❤️

Edited by ProudArShian - 10 years ago
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Awesome update
Thanks for the pm😉
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Congratulations on the new thread and nice update

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