Manan FF: ISHQ part 6 (page 5)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Some introduction : Manan are in couple but their family didn't know about it. Kavya are married for their child but aren't in love. Drulya are bestfriend, who are deeply in love but never propose. Mukti doesn't find her right boy still.

Part 1

Someone touches nandini's waist by behind.

Nandini yells : Leave me I have a boyfriend he will break all ur bones.

The man puts his hand on her mouth and comes in front of her.

It's Manik : How I break my own bones baby ?

Nandini : Manik tum ya haa ?

Manik : Yes my jaanu.

Nandini : What the hell Manik ? You know all my family is here. They don't know about us. But also Fab 4, Navya and Shahid wait. So please enter by the main door.

Manik : So who I am for u Nandini Moorty ?

Nandini : You are my love but go please before someone see u.

Manik : Its 3 years 60 days 15min and 41 secondes that we are a couple. And you are still not ready to announce our love to ur familly. It's soo hard for me Nandini to have a secret relation.

Nandini holds Manik's hand : I love you Manik and it's not enough for u. Ok after the ritual I will speak to my family.

Manik lets her. But she holds his hand : Gussa ho kya ?

Manik : Nai yaar likin toda sadness.

Nandini pecks his forehead. He smiles.

Nandini : Just wait some more time for me.

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Panditji is leaving.

Ammi : Nandini finished her study so I want that she marries someone and give me soon a grandchild.

Chachi : but why so hurry ?

Ammi : She has 22 years old and you know it's not good to keep a girl in her maternal house so long.

Nandini : But Ammi I want to say something.

Ammi approaches Nandini.
Amma : Bolo naa beti.

Nandini hesitantly : woh ammi , I want to marry but I am in...

She can't.

Ammi : so just let me find the right damaad.

Kabir : It's done.

Ammi turns herself in direction of Kabir.

Ammi : Oh Navya's husband chuppo jao and don't say nonsense.

Navya pinces Kabir and looks him in anger.

Nandini : he is right Ammi I find my true love he is here also.

Ammi sees every boy.

Ammi smiles : It's shahid naa.

Nandini and Shahid shouts : No !!!!

Ammi glares Manik : It's him ur worst ennemy.

Ammi comes near Manik and she starts to beat him.

Ammi : How dare you to torture my Nandini ? U are so bad !!! You break her pen.

Nandini grabs her Ammi's hand.

Manik : Yes ammi u are right. I hurt her so much and sincerely I regret it.

Ammi : So why you never said to her sorry ? Not only but all Fab5. I know that my Nandu is so nice so she never wait for a sorry. Always you make her cry with your team. How u can be so happy when you see someone sadness ? Yours families never teach u manners. Shame on u guys.

Alya is affected by her words : Yeah it's true they never tell about manners because it's difficult to communicate in heaven. I am an orphan.

Ammi has tears : I am sorry I don't want to hurt u.

She goes to her and wipes her tears.

Ammi : Never be sad Alya like for Nandini and Rishab I am ur mom also.

Alya hugs Ammi.

Mukti : Or mei, ammi you don't have a place for me.

Ammi : Oh I have a place for all of u. But please just don't make other suffer.

Kabir comes to Nandini : I am really sorry can u forgive me ?

Nandini : For what ?

Kabir : For all bad actions.

Nandini : I forget the past.

Kabir : please ?

Nandini caresses his cheek : Ya sure.

A small boy yells : Oh mummy dekho dad has tears.

Navya hugs her son of 2 years, Naveen.

Ammi approaches : Manik : I can't give you Nandini.

Manik : Kyu Ammi ?

Ammi : My Nandini never had mother or father in her crutial moment so I want that in her husband's house she finds this love.

Nandini : Ammi, Manik's parents doesn't live together.

Ammi : I know beta but they love their son naa. So I hope they will come together and ask for your hand.

Manik is shocked.

Navya : yes they will come.

Kabir : Kaise yaar ?

Navya : We will talk to them.

Manik : No, I can't go to him. He leaves my mom when I was so young. She never smile to me again. I just hate him.

He looks Nandini : Forget me and marry ur Ammi's choice. I can't give u a family.

He goes. Nandini cries in Kabir's shoulder.

Navya : I will talk to him.

Precap : Manik tells to Navya about his sadness. Manik knows the truth about his father. He is blasted.

Pls leave comments guys. Continue or not?
Edited by priyaarjun - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome...poor Manik feeling bad for him :(...plz continue it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww please continue soon dear. Can't see my Manik in pain.
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wow awsm start
poor manik😭
continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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😊awesome..
poor Manik feeling bad for him :(😭
plz continue soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2

Navya follows Manik after giving Naveen to kabir.

Nandini: I am afraid I can't loose him.

Naveen wipes her tears.

Naveen: Don't cry chichi.

She hugs him.

Nandini: I will not Naveen.

Kabir: Mere boy u console her. And Nandini believe in my wife she will arrange everything.

Mukti: Oh so cute you are in love or what?

Kabir: Shut up Mukti.

Kabir feels shy.

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Navya sits beside Manik.

Manik: I can't make my mom and dad together.

Navya: If u want u can share with me. What happened with ur dad?

Manik: he just left us when I was 6 years old. My mom never cry she just transform herself in business woman. In beginning I thought he left us because he has another woman in his life. But the most strange he didn't remarry. He just live alone without us.

Navya : We have to speak with Nyonika, come on.

She holds his hand and goes to his house.

Nyonika is sitting in hall with a coffee.

Manik: I have to speak u Nyonika.

Nyonika: Jaldi I haven't a lot of time.

Manik: Yes like always. What happened between u and dad?

Nyonika is stunned because Manik never question about his dad.

Nyonika: It's past.

Manik: Really so why u can't fall in love again. Why u hide a pic of his on ur cupboard? Why u are so alone?

Nyonika: Stop it Manik. It's my personal. Don't hurt me like ur dad.

Manik sits with her: You have to speak please.

Nyonika comes near window: I love him so much, our love started in college when I had ur age. He was so popular and I became from a small city. He has such beautiful voice like you. Our parents were againt our shaadi but we decide to marry. He was so in joy when I announced my pregnant he cares for like a mom. But after u have 2 years old. He was strange, he comes back very late. And one night I saw him in restaurant with a woman and u know the worst this day was our wedding anniversary. He blames me because I was a housewife. He preferred to marry a business woman. I gave him a lot of opportunities but he wanted a separation. So finally we live apart.

Manik just embraces his mom for that she stopped crying.

Nyonika: Believe me Manik maybe I was hard with u but u are my world.

Manik: Maa...

She touches his face.

Nyonika: After more 15 years I hear this world by ur mouth. I win everything now.

Manik: I need you and I am sorry I always thought it's because of ur arrogance M. Malhotra leave us but it's because of him I lost to see a smile in my mom face. Navya come with we have to deal with him.

Nyonika : Leave it beta it's past.

Manik: No mom I need answer.

He comes out Nyonika catches Navya's hand.

Navya: I will handle him Madam.

She follows him. He waits for her in the car.

They enter in his father house.

A guard tries to stop them. Manik holds his collar.

Manik: I have to meet him.

Guard: You can't without permission.

Someone stops the guard.

Malhotra: What happened Manik leave him?

Manik: Oh wow the richest man in this world come naa. So how I have to earn to become a eligible heir.

Malhotra: What are you saying Manik?

Manik: Just be far.

Malhotra: What are u doing here? It's not our meeting day.

Manik: sorry sorry don't want to disturb you. Who is the bitch haan bolo?

A lady comes out.

Lady: Kon hai?

Malhotra: Mere beta.

Manik: So she is your secret love. I don't what she has more than my mom but I swear u will regret all your mistake. I am ashamed to have a dad like u. I will be happy if never met you in my life

Malhotra: It will more simple naa.

Manik: U know what I really hate you. How u can torture my mother while u have a second wife.

Lady: You mistaken I am not hiw wife.

Manik: I don't care who are u?

Navya: tries to calm Manik.

Manik: I will never come to ur last rites.

Manik is about to step out when

Lady: M. Malhotra look at me .

Navya: Ur father fainted.

Manik: I don't care just let go.

Lady: stop it, tum kaise beta hoo? Haan? You want to know why u left ur mom and u? Because he is not well.

Manik: Don't create a story.

Lady: Why I have to create story? For ur information he has bipolarity. When u had two he learnt about it. His last wish it was to protect his family about him. Issliye he was so harsh with your mother. Last week he felt better so he stopped his antidepressants. We hope he will ask sorry to his wife I mean ur mom. But now I am afraid on his condition.

Nyonika hears everything: My god why u are so cruel. I want my husband back.

Manik runs to her: I hide everything for us. He loves us so much. But I was always so angry to meet him.

Navya calls the ambulance.

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All are ready to leave for the hospital.

Manik: Don't say anything to Nandini she will be afraid.

Navya: Too late she knew.

Manik: Shit.

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All enter in hospital where Nandini and Fab 5 are waiting.

Doctor takes his dad in ICU.

Nandini comes to Manik: Why u want to hide ur feelings? Just take out ur sadness.

Manik breaks down. He sits in the ground.

Manik: I ever thought my parents never love me. While they were always protect me. How I can be so evil?

All are in tears. For the first time all see Manik's sadness and it can't bear.

Nandini: It's not your fault; u just interpreted what they want to show u.

Manik: But Nandini when I said u I really hatred them it's so true.

Nandini: Manik dekho you have still ur parents alive so pray for ur daddy. But it's not the same for me I lost them forever and believe me I prefer be in ur place that u in mine.

Nyonika: It's for u naa?

Nandini: Kya mam?

Nyonika: That suddenly Manik wanted to know about his parents.

Nandini: Woh mom.

Nyonika: Just come here Nandini .

Before going she signs Mukti to come near Manik.

Nyonika for the first time hugs someone and it's Nandini.

Nyonika: Thank u if u aren't here today Manik or me will never know about him. Because of u I learn about my husband.

Nandini just stay silent.

Nyonika: He loves you naa?

Kabir: How do know?

Nyonika: Because I am his mom, u think that I don't understand about my son happiness. Haan? It's wrong every mom even if she is bitch love their children.

Precap: Patch up between Nyonika and her husband. Ammi accepts Manik like her son.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awwwiiieee dat was sooo good...
Like seriously it was really amazing...
Keep writing dear...
Waiting for the next update... :) 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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tooo emotional!!!loved it
continue soon precap is intresting nd dont finish this story soon
write more parts😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😊 awsome update...😊👏⭐️loved it...😊
u penned it perfectly😊
waiting for ur next update...😊
please continue soon...😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely chap
aww poor manik
continue soon

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