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Posted: 11 years ago
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This Life's Moments Series was suggested to my by Eccentrica and am thankful that she did. Since, all the other OSes' threads are closed, I am leaving a consolidated comment here 😊

You know what is most commendable? That you thought of the series when ArHi were not married, in fact far from it and when they were married it was a hate marriage, far far far away from marital bliss šŸ‘šŸ¼ You kept them so in character šŸ‘. Khushi was never a doormat and Arnav didnt turn into a love sick puppy. She was still a Sanka Devi in effect and he a Laad Governor. She was still a jaleibi bai and he a workaholic engaged to his laptop/ work 😃 Both bold in their own ways and both completely tuned to each others' joys and sorrows, going out of the way for one another. They simply reveled in their togetherness, nahi?

I also liked how you kept reminiscing the past in these OSes, like teej, like bringing up the calandar photo shoot, like the hospital hug. This made the connect to the IPK we know so much stronger 😊

The pregnancy/ parenthood OSes were what IPK should have delivered but never did. Sigh... In fact, the entire series was what I would have loved to see in the show but then sigh again...

But my favourite has to be 'Let's Go Shopping'... I couldnt help but contrast it to the early days in the show where he called her a gold digger and kept on hamming about her aukat. Here, he was literally desperate for her to spend his... or their money... But she didnt want to... Why didnt she all this time? A latent, unconscious bitterness? I hope this shopping spree healed that 😃

IPK family was one happy positive family (sans one guy of course). It was great to see all of them happy together. Such is a happily ever after

Awesome series. Thanks for sharing these pieces 😊 ā¤ļø

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww awww this so damn cute n adorable!!ā¤ļø
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Such a wonderful beautiful OS...šŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
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same here..she isn't updating her stories in the other forum too..she moved all her ongoing stories there

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