ArHi SS: One Winter#1. Link for Th 2 on Pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 53

Awesome story...

Just came across this story, its absolutely brilliant

Api waiting for update

Scratch all that I said in the last update...

Now that you speak of hidden motives and Arnav's intentions... it scares me... but nevertheless Arnav is really really very cute... I would have pulled his cheeks for this high air that he has around himself all the time...

Me too like some of the members would love to just enjoy this story with cup of hot steaming coffee, rather than guesstimating...

Aranv and Khushi there is really something special about this romance at this age... They make me feel why I did not go to some co-ed school to find my own Aranv-ji 😆

Aakash he such a good big bro... giving this small tid-bits of Khushi's behaviour unknowingly to Arnav 😊 Arnav really has his eyes and ears open in case of Khushi... Sigh

When there is love in the air (too early for that but...) it cannot be hidden... and clearly Manorama has caught on to it... I'll too wish like Mahinder for everyhting to turn out for the best...

I am so glad that I finally got a chance to read your writing. I had heard so much about your FFs that I had always regretted the fact that I hadn't joined IF on time to read your writing. Finally now that I am reading your writing all I can say is that I am blown away by your narrative style, your eye for details and the way you develop your characters. I love the way you have let your reader feel the suppressed passion and desire of Arnav and Khushi for each other. Seriously reading Arnav and Khushi's interactions with each other amidst the backdrop of Nainital really reminded me of Emily Bronte's Wuthering Heights. In short, you are THAT GOOD in involving a reader so completely (emotionally and mentally) in your story. 🤗 I absolutely loved the way you have written so far. It has truly been a treat reading your writing. You are as BRILLIANT as I always thought you would be. 😃

i m late ;P



am i really late 😆 ?


previous update k last cmnt turned latest update s first comment 🤣 ...

.. hayee .. i was missing cmnting here ..


pehly konsy chapter p cmnt kru 😳


waisy mai ny pehly chpter 5 parha baad main 4 😆


Chapter 4 😃

your note 😳 ... yes ... yes that is a song .. but idk frm wch movie 😆 ..
why sorry .. no need to sorry waisy .. actually cmnt kr k thandak mujhy bhi milli .. :-P ..but ... kalejy ko nahi ..pait ko :-P .. kuky jab bi i read update i think of so many things to cmnt on .. n agr na kr pau tou "comment constipation" hojata hai 😆 ..

haww 😲 why did yu say " lets not talk abt my sister"... ..

matlab i was right .. yu are " jailus "😉 tells tells sp ..yu hv feelings fr me 😛

o acha ..matlab dadi ji is actually nani ji .. chalo theek hai ..

ha ha .. welcmz :-P ;-)

... nice banner ...

o god !! saiyu ... how much can you write on kiss 😆 ... khushi s never ending thoughts on tissie 😆 .. uff shame on me :P arshi are almost my age and thy hv done SO MUCH in life 😛

Aman seems nice ... arnav ko kya masla hai iss sy ? ... Amol ...? . makhan 😆 ?..

ye kya ho ra hai ... i m confused :P but jo bhi hora hai acha hi hai .. 😆 ..
i m talking abt the car lift etc ..

waisy arnav teenager nai lgta :P ... look at wt he thinks n does .. :P

wait ... wts his age exactly ? ..he was dating since he was 16 ... sorry did i forget or maybe i got it wrong :P .. but still he dxnt do wt normally teen agers do :P ..

again ... wts wrong between him n aman ? ... and why does he hv sheetal around him ? ..

manorma .. ka kya chakkar hai ... pta lgaye ka pari ... :P

aaallooo puri 😆
@LOLWAsAalu tera special apearance hai update mai 🤣


arnav ..nautanki !!!!!! ... nani ko sorry bola srf

see saiyu here khushi addressed nani as nani and not as dadi ..like aksh does ...


brownies wth orange juice ... eewww .. chips wth orange juice cd hv been better .. :D ...

why does arnav not know khushi much ? ..

and one more thing .. if khushi dislikes him so much as he told akash that day then why does she sits in his car and goes around wth him ...
😉


chapter 5 ...


NK !!! ... you alive 😲

wah sp ..banners p banners ..

lol ..laal naak --> 🤡

why do you always use " hain" instead of hai .. ?


haha khushi is funny 😆 ... waisy i also wear almost two dozen clothes in winter 😆 ... but i dnt take offence .. per han .. i never click pics in winter clothes 😆

those boats 😆 .. lazy 😳 **dhak dhak** ...



to be continued 😆



continued in same post 😆 no need to scroll down :-P ...


that was beautiful evening walk and romantic talks ❤️ LOVED IT !!!! arnav had really made khushi s life hell , in childhood .. wonder how he fell in love wth her ... He is in love for sure ... such a posessive git he is 😛 ... why is he So So So much affected wnever it there z Aman s name ? ... and it all started after she had defeated him in a debate contest ? daal mai kala ya phir kaly mai daal ?

and wt was that ... silence during azan n covering head ... does khushi have some muslim family bg ..or she is a decent fellow only ? ...

and one quest ...arnav s respect funda .. he only cals his di as di n his bhai as bhai ... right ... but he respects khushi s family too ...

that bracelet was pretty <3 ... and yes ... he was so much concerned whn she only mentioned she wants to lose weight ... 😲


ahh behind that old oak tree ... grr akash wrong timing ... he inturrepted in show even ... after pyara hug n almost kiss ...remember ?

abhi bhi woi kya ...

i m sure akash has seen them

Awiii garima is cho queet :* she z very caring ...

hmm .. tou iss lye garima n shashi shyanjali ko ghr sy nikala ..hmm... ye tha wo twist tha ? wch u said k i had guessed in frst chapter ??




that phone call was sweet 😃 why did he ask her to come to window ...
and is he seriously worried abt aman s upcoming heart break ..? i thought he dislikes aman .. jo bhi ..
and i really think akash has seen thm thts why he z behaving odd wth arnav ..

ahh finally cmnted **phew** :D
update plz ...
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