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Uday: princess...he was about to say something when his phone rang and he had to let go of manyata. And after a while he ended it

Manyata: what happened who was asking about us

Uday: it was mom she is downstairs and was asking where we r

Manyata: come lets go

Uday: hmmm. And both headed down

Vasu who was drinking water saw uday and manyata coming down and went to them

Vasu: uday I didn't know u took manyata for shopping... manveer frowned looking at each and then at vasu

Uday: mom I didn't take manyata for shopping

Vasu: if u didn't then what is this bag doing in manyata hand... manyata realised y vasu was saying about shopping

Manyata: actually ma uday didn't take me shopping but he got me this as a gift

Vasu: ohhh...that is so sweet... but have u both had lunch yet

Uday: haan mom we did as manyata had to take her tablets.

Manyata: k maa I will leave now... uday looked disappointed

Vasu: beta stay for a while

Manyata: actually I would love to but unnati told me that jagat will be coming to see me later that's y... vasu nodded and put one of her hand on manyata cheeks

Vasu: take care of urself... Uday beta drop manyata back to devgarh palace... uday nodded and manyata hugged vasu and soon manveer left uday took the bag from manyata hand and kept it in the car while the guards were standing there with the doors opened both sat in and the driver started the car and headed towards devgarh mansion... In the car uday looked at the driver who was paying attention on the road and leaned towards manyata

Uday: princess don't forget I will get my kiss by today so be prepared. He said in a way that only manyata could hear

Manyata: let's see... plus half of the day has gone so wonder when u will be able to take ur kiss. She said teasingly

Uday: princess I'm yuvraj udayveer Singh

Manyata: and I'm yuvrani manyata she said imitating uday... soon they reached to devgarh mansion and the driver came to open the door on manyata side while one of the guard opened the door for uday... Luckily the press wasn't outside the palace anymore. .. Manveer walked in and sia was still there with daksh but they also could see jai who was resting her head on sia shoulder while jagat was speaking to daksh. Manyata saw seema ji near the door and went to her.

Manyata: seema ji please keep this in my room. Manveer started to walk where the others were seated

Daksh: look here comes manyata and udayveer.

J: jiji where did u go... Vijay who was coming downstairs answered j

Vijay: love birds went to romance j bhai. Uday smirked

Manyata: Vijay Bhai she said give him dagger looks.

Vijay: what? I didn't say anything wrong u guys did go out to spend some time alone right which does mean romancing right? Uday banna u tell me am I wrong? He said trying to be innocent

Uday: of course not vijay banna ur absolutely right... manyata looked away from vijay when he was giving her a victory smile... jagat went towards manyata and gave her a side hug.

Jagat: how r u feeling sweetie

Manyata: im fine by the way I hope j was happy meeting u... thank god unnati mentioned about j cancelling to meet u otherwise I wouldn't have known.

Jagat: she was and im sorry that I was not able to come and see u when this happened to u... manyata went and sat next to j while uday and jagat sat down too

Manyata: omg now u also don't start... everyone was here with me and its not like u didn't come to see me on purpose...so its k

Vijay: k guys enough of this emotional moment. J bhai I need ur help.

J: what help vijay bhai... she asked and at the same time her focus was on removing the arm sling off manyata. Once she was done she turned to vijay

Vijay: well giriraj uncle birthday is coming up and vasu aunty wants me to organise it and till now whatever function or party has been held u have always helped me

J: cool that fine with me

Vijay: we need to start soon as the party will be held in two days.

Uday: and jagat ur invited also so please do come.

J: jagat I will let u know what time it will be held ok

Manyata: j not only jagat even we also know what time the party is going to be held she said teasingly

J: sure jiji.

Daksh: k we will leave now.

Manyata: stay for a while

Sia: manyata we have been here few hours and ma sa would be waiting for us at home so got to go.

Uday: sia, daksh I know u will be there at the party but please do bring ur whole family

Sia: will do... they said bye to everyone and left... manyata was making sure not to touch her left arm after taking her arm sling of

Manyata: j I want to change can u help me please

J: sure jiji come

Manyata: we will be back soon she said looking at the three boys and left... when manyata and j left vijay turned to uday

Vijay: so uday banna

Uday: so?

Vijay: come on just spill it out where did u take m bhai

Uday: as I said before vijay banna I took princess out

Vijay: even we know that but where

Uday: it's a secret

Vijay: jagat y don't u say something

Jagat: well I don't think he is going to say it so y waste energy.

Vijay: k so if u don't want to say where u went that at least u could tell us what u guys did.

Uday: spend time together vijay banna that's y I took manyata out... vijay laid back on the sofa giving up while uday smirked and jagat was trying to stop himself from laughing

Meanwhile in manyata room J: jiji what do u want to wear. She said looking at manyata clothes

Manyata: something casual in fact its already 16:30pm and I don't want to change again and again so take give me my shorts and tank top it will be easy to sleep in them to

J: okies here u go... come lets remove this anarkali of u... and with that j helped manyata change though it was a little bit hard as she had to be careful not to touch manyata left arm and had to lift it slowly to remove her clothes. And then helped her wear the tank top and shorts.

Manyata's tank top and shorts

j was looking at her face in the mirror while manyata took the saree box out of the bag and placed it in her wardrobe which j noticed

j: jiji what in that box... manyata turned towards j who was looking at her through the mirror

manyata: uday gave me a gift.

J: really what did he give u she asked, now turning around and looking at manyata

Manyata: he gave me a saree... and no u cannot see it right now I will show it to u when I actually wear it. J pouted

J: fine.

Manyata: by the way when r u and vijay bhai going to plan for the party

J: maybe tonight though the party is in 2 days but we have to make sure everything is planned and ready before that

Manyata: good luck... suddenly there was knock on manyata door and when manyata told the person to come in vijay popped his head in

Vijay: j bhai jagat is about to leave so I think u should say bye to him

J: k u go I'm coming.

Vijay: hurry up u don't want to keep the love of ur life waiting...I TELL U

J: shut up vijay bhai I'm coming she said walking towards the door...the three of them came down... jagat was taking blessing from komal when he saw three of them coming down. J went and hugged him. While uday who saw manyata in tank top and shorts was smirking seeing her like that and manyata noticed the naughty look in his eyes but she looked away when uday winked at her.

Jagat: take care and I will speak to u later. But yh do let me know the details about the party

J: yh I will don't worry. Mom I will be back she said going with jagat to his car

Vijay: sure j bhai go but don't take long to come he said... komal smiled and went away from there.

J: I so feel like strangling u. jagat went towards manyata and hugged her moving to uday and vijay and gave them a brotherly hug. And j went to drop jagat till outside

Vijay: well what am I doing here he said looking at manyata and uday and with that he went away... uday moved closer to manyata... and manyata who saw this started to walk towards her room quickly. She finally reached to her room thinking uday was left behind and was about to close the door when she saw uday keeping his foot between the door to stop it from closing

Uday: princess don't think u can get away he said coming inside and closing the door

Manyata: what r u talking about uday she said trying to be all innocent.

Uday: I'll tell u what im talking about princess he said walking towards her while manyata walked backwards slowly and this stopped when manyata bumped to the wardrobe.

uday who was near her placed his hands on either side of the wardrobe and leaned closer to manyata... while manyata lips was shivering and her eyes were moving from one corner to other looking at udays face who had this naughty smile on his face. Manyata closed her eyes when she felt his fingers on her lips making her entire body shudder. But this wasn't the end as udays fingers moved down her jaw line to her neck caressing it slowly. He smirked when he felt manyata folding the edge of his shirt tightly with her fingers... uday started to caress her right arm and he could feel her shaking under his small touch... He then stopped doing that when he place he lips on to the side of her neck and started placing wet kisses... manyata was breathing heavily now and she felt she could drop any second as her legs became like jelly when she felt udays arm holding her waist tightly.

Manyata: this is cheating. U said only one kiss but all ur doing is torturing me like this. She could feel uday smiling against her neck... when he lifted his face and looked at her with that smirk seeing her cheeks all red. Manyata slowly opened her eyes and looked at uday when he moved towards her ear and whispered making her feel ticklish

Uday: well it's a good torture ur getting princess...plus im not cheating this is what u will get when u make me wait for so long and on top of that u were trying to run away from me... by the way u look very hot in shorts and tank top and nibbled her ear. Making manyata blush

he then moved towards her lips brushing it slowly with his before capturing it fully... soon manyata got lost into the kiss that she kissed him back passionately... when both got out of breath both leaned their forehead against each other with their eyes closed... uday opened his eyes and looked at manyata and when she opened her eyes she could see the desires in his eyes making her shudder again and with that she hugged him both stayed like that when udays phone rang... manveer moved away from each other uday talked on the phone and was about to end it

uday: princess Im sorry but I have to go to the office now as I have an important client waiting for me.

Manyata: its k work is also important. Uday hugged manyata and opened the door to leave when he turned around leaning against the door

Uday: by the way princess I told u I will get my kiss by today and winked at her... manyata went up to uday and pushed him out of the room closing the door and smiled to herself.

After uday had left manyata was in her room reading a book for an hour when she realised it times to eat... she left her room and was going downstairs when she saw brij coming out of his room.

Brij: manyata beta how r u feeling now he said caressing her head and looking at her wound on her arm

Manyata: feeling better paa

Brij: good come lets go down to eat... manyata nodded brij put his arm around her shoulder and both walked down... komal who was instructing one of workers something when she saw brij and manyata walking down the stairs and brij was laughing as manyata was saying something to him.

J: god im so Hungary j said walking towards the dining table and sat down on her seat. Soon manyata went and sat next to j while brij went and sat on his usual seat... mrinalini mainka and vijay also came and sat down in the respective seats... all started eating their dinner. When mrinalini asked vijay

Mrinalini: vijay beta have u decided about the party yet

Vijay: actually ns (nani sa) me and j bhai were going to discuss about the party after dinner. Mrinalini nodded

Brij: by the way wt party r u all talking about. He said confusingly. (brij doesn't know as he was at the office when vasu came)

Komal: mahraj vasundra came today and she was saying that in two days giriraj bhai sa birthday is coming up and they have held a party on that evening but for the party she wants vijay to be in charge

Brij: oh I see...but im sure this party is going to be the best.

Meanwhile at the Singh mansion... uday and everyone were at the dining table and vasu was telling giriraj about the party

Giriraj: well that's good... vijay and j will be organising the party im sure it will be good

Unnati: dad is going to enjoy getting a year older.

Giriraj: who said im getting older I still look young... all laughed while uday was thinking about doing something in two days with his usual smirk.

After everyone finished dinner j and vijay were on the terrace sitting with note pads and pen discussing about the party when manyata joined them and sat next to them

Manyata: so what have u guys planned so far?

Vijay: we asked uday banna what type of theme giriraj uncle would prefer and we gave him these few option he said passing the note pad to manyata as she was reading the themes

Manyata: and what did uday say she said looking at vijay passing the note pad back to him

J: he said they all r good and giriraj uncle would like all of these but then he would like the Indian theme the most... Manyata smiled thinking that now she will have to wear the saree he gave her

Manyata: really when did he tell u guys though

Vijay: well when u and j bhai went to change earlier and me, jagat and uday were in the hall he told me to call him when I have few theme names ready for him

J: jiji wt r u going to be wearing

Vijay: j bhai if the theme is Indian obviously she is going to wear something traditional

J: u see vijay bhai u guys will probably wear sherwani or dhoti kurta but us girl have many option like saree, lengha choli, anarkali or the lengha style saree.

Manyata: guys we can decide about clothes later decide the other things

J: well food is sorted its going to be all Indian obviously

Vijay: decoration is also sorted

Manyata: and cake?

J: oh god how can we forget about the cake

Vijay: I will make sure to place the order of the cake tomorrow.

Manyata: but what type of cake r u planning to order? Vijay thought for a while when he got an idea

Vijay: m bhai we will order two cakes tomorrow and it will match with the theme as well

J: how?... vijay looked at manyata and j and picked up his iPad and started searching on their by going on the website of the cake shop

Vijay: planning to order these two cakes he said showing it manyata and j... one is Indian flag design... and the other one had an elephant design on it.

Indian flag cake

Elephant designed cake

Manyata: wow they look awesome vijay bhai I think u should make the order now so that it comes on time.

Vijay: yh I think it's good its 7:00 pm and luckily they close around 7:30... he called the cake shop and started placing the order giving his details and all and also told him what type of cakes he wanted when the person from the other end asked him if he wants any message on the cakes

Vijay: what message shall we have on the cake he said asking his two sister

Manyata: tell them to write janam din ki badhai (happy birthday) in hindi. vijay nodded and told the person

Vijay: k so now we need to think about the decoration. While the others bits r done

J: but what about the party location where is it going to be held and has vasu aunty talked about the guest list

Vijay: relax j bhai I asked vasu aunty and she said that the party is held at uday banna new hotel and also told them the time for the party.

J: k im tired now let's go and sleep three of them left to go to their respective room

The next day j and vijay were working very hard to make sure the party goes well and looking at everything personally at the hotel even uday was there however manyata couldn't go as dr uncle had to check her wound so she and unnati didn't go... unnati reached to the devgarh palace around 10... dr uncle came out of manyata room after checking her while unnati stayed back to do the dressing. He went up to ds, mainka and komal who were sitting in ds office

Mrinalini: dr saab how is manyata wound now.

Dr uncle: rajmata ji its slowly healing though she says it doesn't pain like before but she still has to be a bit careful.

Komal: I just pray to god that it heals soon and we also find out who did this

Ds: that day will also come soon komal she said seriously.

Later on j and vijay came back to the palace and they were extremely tired that they ate dinner quickly and went to sleep as now they only had one more day to make sure everyone is perfectly done. So on the next day they woke up early and went to udays hotel again. Whereas manyata was in her room when she got a call from uday

Uday: hi princess

Manyata: hi prince she said and started laughing

Uday: hayee it feels so nice to hear u call me prince by the way what r u doing

Manyata: nothing really remember doctor uncle told us that paa and papa (giriraj) wanted us to make notes on about what changes could be made for devgarh and jaighar so was writing few notes for that wt about u

Uday: me all im doing is missing u princess he said naughtily and manyata knew he probably had that smirk on his face

Manyata: shut up I will email u what I have done so far so u can see it

Uday: princess for now I want to see u

Manyata: well we r going to meet tomorrow at the party

Uday: party? Princess the party is at 7 and I want to see u before and I will make sure to see u before that by the way princess can I ask u something

Manyata: what do u want to ask she said closing her laptop... uday was quite for a second before he spoke

Uday: I will ask u tomorrow princess when I see u.

Manyata: uday what is it

Uday: I told u I will ask u tomorrow

Manyata: seriously I hate it when everyone does this y would u say something when u r not going to say it

Uday: I think someone is getting curious to know

Manyata: of course I am and now I will be thinking about this the whole day

Uday: well it's a good thing at least I will be in ur thoughts the whole day

Manyata: seriously if u were in front of me I would have hit u with something

Uday: I don't think so because im sure if I was there we would be doing something else he said passionately... manyata went completely red

Manyata: by the way I must say u made vijay bhai choose the Indian theme... no wonder y u told him to call u

Uday: ur so smart princess. after all u had to wear the saree I gifted u

Manyata: uday bua sa is calling me I will speak to u later k bye

Uday: bye princess and both cut the call and uday sat back on his chair thinking about the next day

At 6 pm vijay and j came back to the palace with a happy face

Mainka: what happened y r u guys so happy

J: bua sa the arrangements have been done for tomorrows party... the only thing that needs to come is the cake which will come around 7:00pm

Mainka: but beta the cake should come early right I mean the part starts at 7

Vijay: haan mom but its not like giriraj uncle is gone cut the cake at exact 7 plus all guest would be arriving at that time so it will take a while welcoming all the guest right

Mainka: yes that's also right

J: by the way bua sa what r u wearing tomorrow

Vijay: great j bhai starts again. I swear J bhai could go on talking about clothes without getting tired... I TELL U he mumbled

mainka: beta I will be wearing what I normally wear salwar kameez

J: nope bua sa not this time... in fact u r going be wearing a saree

Mainka: but beta it has been ages since I wore a saree

J: well u r going to now coz even me and jiji are... I will bring it to ur room in few minutes and with that she went to her room

Vijay: wow mom I will see u in a saree for the first time

Later on that night manyata, j, mrinalini, komal and mainka were sitting in the living area as j had bought down some Indian outfits for all of them ...as she told her designer to bring it urgently

Komal: manyata beta u haven't chosen anything.

J: yh jiji in fact I think u should wear this she said passing her a lengha

Manyata: actually no I already have my outfit ready

J: but when did u go to get something.

Manyata: actually uday gave me a saree to wear for the party

J: oh so u were going to wear that saree that uday jiju gifted u... now I understand y u didn't show it to me she said naughtily while the others smiled

Manyata: im going to sleep good night. She said running off while j started laughing seeing manyata get all shy

The next day at the jaighar mansion giriraj was sorting out his tie by looking in the mirror when vasu walked in

Vasu: janam din ki shubkamnaayein (happy birthday)

Giriraj: thank u vasu he said putting his arms around her shoulder and hugging her slightly... vasu helped giri sort out his tie when uday and unnati knocked on the door and came in

Unnati: happy birthday to the best dad in the world she said hugging him while giriraj kissed his forehead. Uday stood next to vasu with his hands around his mum shoulder both looking at giriraj and unnati

Giriraj: thank u beta

Unnati: ur welcome and here is ur gift she said placing it in his hand... giriraj took the gift and started unwrapping it finding a suit inside which he liked a lot

Giriraj: its beautiful thank u beta... uday then moved towards giri and hugged him

Uday: happy birthday dad

Giriraj: thank u beta... by the way where is my gift. Uday smiled and gave giriraj his gift who started to unwrap it to find a latest designed watch.

Vasu: now if the gift session is done shall we go down and have breakfast... all nodded and left to go down

Meanwhile brij was in his room calling his best friend... giri who was on the dining table having his breakfast saw brij calling him and answered the phone

Giri: hello brij how r u

Brij: I am fine how r u and yes happy birthday to the best friend of mine

Giri: thank u brij.

Brij: by the way what's the plan r u going work today

Giri: of course u know I would never miss a day of work by the way I expect u all to reach to the hotel before the party starts

Brij: sure will do ok im going to go down and have breakfast see u soon bye

Giri: bye


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Brij told everyone that giri wants all of them to reach there early... and also j called jagat to make sure he was coming... vasu made sure to call rithvik and his family who said they will reach on time for the party... the time flew by and brij came back to the palace around 5pm... while everyone was in their respective room getting ready... manyata came out after having a shower and was in her robe though it was a little hard to have a shower as she had to make sure she doesn't rub her left arm that much... She went to her wardrobe and took out the saree that uday gave her and placed it on the bed and walked to the dressing table and started blow drying her hair once she saw it was dry she was straightening it when suddenly uday called

Manyata: uday what happened y did u call me now

Uday: I wanted to see what u r doing

Manyata: well obviously I still need to get ready just finished having a shower

Uday: k princess see u in a bit and with that he cut the call while manyata was confused that he cut the phone all of a sudden

she shrugged it of and continued straightening her hair and when she finished she put the straightener down and thought of doing her make up first so she applied eye liner, mascara, a little bit of blusher and lip gloss but she made sure to do light make up... Once she was done she looked at herself in the mirror when she could see someone opening the door and coming in which was none other than uday... she turned around frowning

Manyata: uday what r u doing over here at this time shouldn't u be at the hotel... uday was dressed in his sherwani

Uday: princess here r the matching jewellery to go with the saree

Manyata: uday seriously what r u doing here,

Uday: princess remember yesterday I wanted to ask u something and I told u I will tell u when I come to see u before the party

Manyata: yh u did but what did u want to ask and that also this time... uday suddenly moved closer to manyata and whispered in her ears

Uday: I want to dress u myself he said intensely... Manyata shivered when he said that and looked at his face from the corner of her eyes when he slightly moved away from her

Manyata: wh...wha..what r... u...saying she said barely whispering

Uday: I want to get u ready myself princess he said and manyata could see he was looking passionately at her

Manyata: but

Uday: I promise I will close my eyes u can turn off the lights if u want but please manyata let me that's if u trust me but I won't force u if u don't want me... manyata was thoughtful for a second and moved away... uday thought she was not ready and was about to turn towards manyata when she closed his eyes with a blindfold

Uday: turn of the lights princess

Manyata: but I already put a blindfold on u

Uday: I know but still... I want u to feel comfortable... manyata did as he told and went towards the bed. And picked up the blouse and handed it today and turned the other way making her back face uday

Uday slowly moved his hands around her waist to find the belt of the robe and untied it slowly slightly brushing his lips on her ears... manyata closed her eyes and opened it slowly trying to breath normally. He slowly removed her robe and made her wear the blouse and tried to close the hooks on the blouse though it was hard as he couldn't see but he somehow managed it... he then traced his fingers upwards on her back to find the dori (string) making manyata shiver and then tied it together

Manyata: the inner skirt/petticoat (for saree) is on the bed next to u manyaat said slowly uday traced his hands on the bed and found it he then bent down and told manyata to step into the inner skirt and slowly pulled it up and tied it tightly and brushed his fingers on her stomach

Uday: is it too tight princess

Manyata: no its fine she said trying to speak normally but couldn't and uday smirked... but would u be able to dress me up I mean how would u know how to dress up someone in a saree

Uday: what r internet for princess... I did my research... manyata smiled

Uday then picked up the saree and started to dress manyata in it... but when he was wrapping it around her his fingers were slightly brushing manyata hips and uday could feel her move whenever his fingers touched her skin... then he started doing the pleats and manyata knew he had to tuck it in to inner skirt/ petticoat which means touching her navel and when uday tucked it in she took a long breath and held udays hand but then slowly let go as he started to drape the saree over her shoulder and he was standing close that manyata could feel his hot breath on her neck... once he finished he slowly removed the blindfold and went to switch on the lights and walked back to manyata who wasn't facing him... he turned her around and saw how beautiful she looked in the saree and then looked at her face to see her cheeks all red with her eyes closed

Uday: open ur eyes princess... manayat did as he said and opened her eyes slowly looking at him... uday held her hand and placed her in front of the dressing table and sorted out her hair... he opened the jewellery box and picked up the earing and placed it on both of her ears... he then picked up the necklace and placed it around her neck and moved her hair to her shoulder so he can close the pin at the back. Followed by the bangles and the maang tikka.

Manyata: thank u

Uday: for what

Manyata: for making me look beautiful and this saree its really pretty I must say u do have a good taste... uday then pulled manyata by her waist and looked towards her lips

Uday: well u look beautiful always but then I think I should get my reward for making u look even more beautiful and covered her lips with his, pulling her more closer having leaving no gap left between them and was stroking her waist whereas manyata had her arms around his neck... when all of a sudden komal knocked on manyata door making them break the kiss and looked towards the door

Komal: manyata beta open the door what is taking long

Uday: princess open the door... manyata looked at uday

Manyata: r u serious ma is outside what will she think when she sees u inside she said whispering

Komal: manyata beta whats taking u long... manyata turned around facing the door again

Manyata: ma im get ready she lied when all of a sudden she felt uday hugging her from the back and his hands were around her stomach and was rubbing his nose on her neck making her breathing go faster.

Komal: k if u need help do let someone know

Manyata: k manyata tried to whisper slowly. While uday was enjoying teasing her... manyata pulled herself away from uday turning to face him

Uday: what happened princess aunty komal left so I think we can continue what we were doing

Manyata: sorry yuvraj udayveer singh but I think u should leave before someone else comes

Uday: come on princess everyone knows we r going to get married soon so y should I go

Manyata: because if vijay bhai and j come then like usual we will be coming their topic and they wont stop teasing us, plus u would get away easily but I wont be able to.

Uday: k fine im going but manyata thank u for allowing me to dress u up.

Manyata: uday y all of a sudden u felt like doing this she said looking at him

Uday: because I wanted to dress u up myself and also wanted to be the first person to see u in this saree.

manyata smiled and hugged him

uday: what happened u don't want me to go now. He said teasingly while manyata smiled in his arms

manyata: go she said leaving him finally. Manyata turned towards the mirror and saw that lip her gloss had slightly faded so she decided to do it again and once she was ready she went to jai's room to see her sister looking beautiful in a saree

Manyata saree

Jai saree

unnati saree

manyata: j ur looking really beautiful in this saree... j who was putting her earing on turned towards manyata and smiled

j: thanks jiji and by the way same goes to u.. I must say uday jiju does have a good taste on how to choose a good looking saree.

Manyata: thank u by the way have u finished getting ready

J: yh just now let me grab my phone and with that both sisters left to go downstairs

vijay, mainka and ds were sitting in the hall when they saw manyata and j coming down and vijay blew a whistle at them,

vijay: my my m bhai and j bhai u both r looking gorgeous

manyata: thank u vijay bhai... by the way bua sa saree really looks good on u y don't u wear it most of the time

mainka: beta sometimes I find it hard wearing saree tbh I don't know how ma sa and komal bhabi sa stay in it all day because im sure i cant do that.

J: by the way where is mom and dad

Vijay: yh it is a bit surprising that j bhai is down on time but there is no sign of mamu sa and mami sa otherwise we usually have to wait for j bhai. By the way j bhai did u tart getting ready early today

J: no and I think u should accept it that im not late all the time...by the time brij and komal came down and it was 17:50pm

Brij: sorry everyone we got a little late shall we leave... by the way surprised to j before us he said laughing while j pouted... and soon all left the elders were in one car while the youngster in another.

They reached to the hotel around 18:20pm and got out of their cars when they saw rithvik and his parents getting out of their car too. Vikram and brij hugged each other while rithvic mum janki (hehe finally thought of a name for rithvik mum) was talking to komal, mainka and ds. Rithvik hugged, j, vijay and manyata and three of them were talking... the press were trying to take pictures from outside the gates but only managed to get few as they were not allowed in

vijay: by the way rithvik where did u disappear because the last time we saw u was when we met u at the club

manyata: vijay bhai that was not a long ago ur acting like we r meeting him after so many years

rithvik: actually just been busy with work by the way manyata I'm sorry I was not able to come and see u because when u got attacked. I was too busy and was in pune that I didn't even have time to talk to anyone not even unnati

manyata: its k rithvik I understand... but looks like someone missed unnati a lot. She said teasingly

vijay: and im sure he cant wait to meet unnati... I TELL U

rithvik: no its nothing like that he said trying not to show his eagerness of seeing unnati he then looked at j who was busy looking towards the gate who was waiting for jagat. All of a sudden giriraj came out to see how both of his sambdhi brij and vikram were busy talking to each other and even his samdhan komal and janki he shook his head and went towards them

giriraj: by the way r u both going to stand here talking all night or come in... brij and vikram who were talking were surprised to see girij in front of them who was smiling

vikram: its not like that giriraj we were just catching up

brij: and we even came early

girij: but look at them he said pointing to ladies and youngster who were laughing and talking.

Brij: komal birthday man is here shall we go inside.

Giriraj: birthday boy u mean. He said with a proud smile... manyata went up to him followed by rithvik, j and vijay and all wished him a happy birthday... when vasu came out to check what is taking giriraj so long

Vasu: mahraj what r u doing outsi... but she stopped midway when she saw the devgarh and raighar family members outside

Girir: vasu over here we were thinking that y hasn't brij and vikrams family arrived but they have been out here for a long time talking to each other. Vasu laughed slowly

Vasu: please come inside she and took them to the hall where the party was going to be held ... it was 18:40pm and there was still time for the party to start... all went in and the waiters came to give some water and juice... everyone saw how vijay organised the hall in a traditional way and loved it.

Ds: vijay beta u really did a good job she said scanning the hall.

Vijay: thank u ns... soon unnati and uday came out of a room and saw the others. She went and took vikram and janki blessing and stood beside rithvik and both were smiling looking at each other. they did want to have a little moment to them self but couldn't.

Soon sia came with daksh and her mother-in-law and father-in-law followed by jagat and his family and all greeted each other and also wished giriraj.

By then it was 19:00pm and guest slowly started to arrive one by arm... vijay told one of the waiters to stand outside as the cake was going to come and bring it when he is told.

Manyata was standing with Mainka and was talking to her when she casually turned to see uday who was with the boys looking at her with a smirk and winked after a moment, but she quickly turned away and still could feel him looking in her direction. Since the guest had arrived rithvik and unnati disappeared and nobody noticed while sia was sitting down so that she doesn't get tired by standing in this condition

Manika: manyata beta y has ur cheeks gone red r u feeling k... she said getting worried

Manyata: haan bua sa im fine

Mainka: u sure

Manyata: yh I am. Soon all the guest had arrived and everyone was busy talking when unnati and uday went on the stage and both took the mike. Uday looked at manyata who smiled at him in return

Uday: hello everyone, im very thankful that all of u came to celebrate our dad's birthday it really means a lot.

Unnati: we hope u r having a good time but right now its time for u to come up here dad and cut the cake... vijay signalled the waiter to bring the cake and soon two waiter came carrying both the cakes... giri was surprised by seeing the cake as he didn't expect it to be like that... he then blew the cake and everyone started singing happy birthday... giriraj cut the cake and went to vasu, unnati and uday and fed them... while everyone clapped.

Unnati: everyone please enjoy the party and yes there will be some special dancer coming here to dance on some Bollywood numbers so don't miss it.

It had been an hour since the party started and everyone was enjoying some were eating while some were watching the dance performance

Vijay, j and unnati were standing together and talking... when vijay realised something

Vijay; oh gosh how can I forget look at m bhai... unnati and j were confused

Unnati: what about manyata vijay banna

Vijay: guys she is still here

J: whats the big deal vijay bhai

Vijay: j bhai u seriously r forgetful... look at our m bhai who normally runs away from party and usually stay till 15 min is still here

J: well m jiji has started to attend parties without making a fuss. E.g. rithviks party, plus when we went to clubs and I think we should say thanks to uday jiju for this

Vijay: so true...I TELL U... guys don't u think we should do a prank on m bhai...

J: no way don't involve me

Unnati: yh not even me. Im not doing any pranks. Vijay rolled his eyes and was thinking of what to do.

meanwhile nandu (who had shot manyata) was there dressed as waiter and had beard on so his real identity is not revealed and was looking at everyone keenly and was going around giving drinks to them he also had a hidden camera which looked like a button... he located manyata with sia and noticed he had to do his bit by giving manyata the drink he had spiked by adding a strong alcohol which would make manyata drunk. He went up to her and gave her the juice unfortunately she took it as she was feeling thirsty... nandu went away and slowly put the tray down and slightly turned to see manyata taking a sip he then headed back into the kitchen which had an exit door and left from there... manyata was taking small sip from her drink but she didn't taste any alcohol as her juice was strong flavoured and sweet she couldn't taste the alcohol... vijay went to manyata and whispered that uday wants to meet her in room 101. Manyata said k and asked one of the waitress where the room was who told her and she went up... she went inside the room and was looking for uday but didn't find him

Manyata to herself: vijay bhai told me uday wants to meet me... I will probably wait for him over here she said sitting on the bed and continued having her drink. She placed the glass down which did have a little bit juice left... manyata was suddenly feeling odd and went towards the balcony...

Uday who was with rithvik noticed manyata was not around and was looking for her but he couldn't see her anywhere... he tried to call her when she answered

Uday: princess where r u

Manyata: udayyy... u r very bad for keeping me waiting she said childishly and started laughing making him frown

Uday: princess what r u saying and where r u

Manyata: u r really forgetful u r the one who told vijay bhai u want to meet me and u forgot urself and with that she started laughing. Uday knew something was wrong

Uday: princess im coming wait... with that he cut the call and went to vijay and took him aside

Vijay; what happened uday banna

Uday: vijay banna did u tell manyata that I wanted to meet her

Vijay: oh that... u scared me for a second. Uday banna that was a prank. Don't tell me she is still waiting for u

Uday: she is and she seems to be sounding different he said seriously which vijay noticed

Vijay: what do u mean?

Uday: it feels like she was drunk

Vijay: uday how would manyata bhai get drunk because im sure she didn't have beer and plus when I went up to her she had juice in her hand

Uday: where did u tell her to meet me

Vijay: room 101... and both headed upstairs to see her when they saw her walking in the corridor talking to herself... both reached to her soon and took her inside 101 room as they saw someone coming

Manyata: uday I want to go out leave me she said trying to leave but uday held on to her tightly

Uday: shh princess sit here quietly and don't move. Manyata nodded making a baby face and sat down... while vijay was looking at the glass.

Vijay: m bhai what did u drink

Manyata: fruit juice she said all happily... I want some more she saw that there was some left in the glass and was about to take it when vijay took the glass

Vijay: I will get u some more ok this one has probably gone off. Manyata nodded... vijay looked at uday... Uday baana I think its best that manyata bhai doesn't come out of the room otherwise it will be a problem...till then I will go and keep this in a safe place and I will bring unnati up so she can check if manyata is k... uday nodded while vijay left the room and he looked at manyata who was in her own world

On the other side nandu called his boss

Nandu: hello boss the work is done I gave manyata the drink.

Boss: even I saw that u fool I didn't place a camera on ur shirt for the sake of it... but after u gave her the drink did she have it

Nandu: I saw her take few sip

Boss: great by now she would probably get drunk and would create a problem in the party because of the drink and then tomorrow it will be in the news about yuvrani manyata behaviour and poor devgarh and jaighar will have to answer question about manyata inappropriate behaviour

Nandu: ur too gd boss and with that nandu cut the call

Scene is back to manveer.

Uday had locked the door so manyata doesn't escape he went towards the couch which was on the other end and sat down. Still thinking about manyata drink knowing someone must have spiked it when all of a sudden he felt manyata sitting on his lap while uday placed his hands on her waist... manyata leaned forward

Manyata: uday u r so cuteee she said pulling his cheeks and then placed her arms around his neck

Uday: really? He said being amused though he was worried about manyata state but also was enjoying her behaviour towards him

Manyata: hmmm shall I tell u something else...uday nodded and she continued... I like it when u kiss me but it tickles sometimes she said laughing... especially when u do this.

with that she showed uday by tracing her fingers on his forehead, going down to his nose and then drawing around his lip and then slowly she moved her fingers away and kissed his forehead then both of his cheeks moving down to his jaw line and then finally placed her lips on to his kissing him slowly... uday was lost into manyata and was enjoying what she was doing and he knew if manyata was in her sense she would be too shy to do all this... but all his thoughts vanished the way she was kissing him... uday was moving his hands around her waist making her tingle... she soon broke the kiss and leaned her forehead on to his

manyata: this is how I feel she said with her closed eyes... I even liked it when u came today she said opening her eyes and looking at him while her fingers were fiddling with his sherwani collar she continued speaking...especially when u were dressing me up. she then moved back and placed her head on to his shoulder with her arms around his waist.

Uday: did u like it a lot

Manyata: hmmm... uday

Uday: hmmm

Manyata: I want to tell u another secret

Uday: what secret

Manyata: that I LOVE U but shhh don't tell anyone ... uday who was stroking manyata hair stopped midway as he was stunned

Uday: princess what did u say...but he didn't get any answer he pulled her away from his shoulder to see her eyes closed.

He picked her up and placed her on the bed and was looking at her remembering only one thing I LOVE U coming out from her mouth... suddenly there was a knock on the door

Uday: who is it?

Unnati: dada its me. Uday went to open the door and vijay and unnati entered in closing the door

Uday: did anyone ask about us.

Vijay: not yet.

Unnati: manyata is asleep now... dada I have sent the juice sample and soon we will find out what was in manyata drink

Vijay: but what if there was drugs in m bhai drink then it would be dangerous for her

Unnati: don't worry nothing like that will happen I will go to the hospital now and get the test results... unnati took manyata blood sample... But yes vijay banna I think u should take manyata home through the back door as the party is about to end.

Vijay: k but please tell j to go with the elders unnati plus nobody will tell anyone about this. Uday carried manyayta towards the back door while unnati was checking that nobody seems them... vijay had called the driver and told him to meet at the back of the hotel... uday placed manyata in the back seat while vijay sat in the driver seat and soon left. While unnati told vasu she had to leave and gave an excuse there was an emergency at the hospital. she even told j that vijay and manyata went back to devgarh place as manyata was feeling tired and wanted to rest and told the rest of the family not to worry.

The party had ended and uday was in his room lost in his thoughts when he received unnati call as he was thinking about who must have spiked her drink and also about mayata confession

Uday: haan choti what did u find out

Unnati: dada there was alcohol mixed in manyata drink and I got her blood test results there is no sign of drug I just informed vijay banna.

Uday: k choti thanks a lot... and with that he cut the call after 30 mins unnati walked in to the palace and she saw that her parents were still awake.

Unnati: mom, dad y r u all still awake

Vasu: just like that we were just going to sleep now. Giriraj and vasu went to their room while unnati walked to udays room knowing he would be awake and knocked on his door.

Precap: uday stops manyata and blocks her between the wall

Uday: tell me what u said last night princess he said nuzzling her cheeks

Manyata: I don't know what ur talking about uday she said trying to speak normally.

Phew I think this is the first time I have written a chapter this long it didn't allow me to post together so this update will be as part 52 and 53

Thank u to those people who pressed the like button for the previous part and also thanks to those who commented... I have replied back to ur comments they really mean a lot. I really appreciate u all taking some time out to read my ff

I hope u like this part and im really nervous on how u guys will respond...

Also do read my sister roshini101 ff destined to be please do give it a try. Do leave ur comments for her the link is below.

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Sorry for any spelling or grammar mistake
Edited by preya_radev - 10 years ago
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First again😃
Coming to the chapters, they were really nice. Loved reading them and they were long! So even better😃😳
Great job👏
Update soon please😳
Would love to see what happens next and whether Manyata remembers her confession or not😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
as usual tremendous.. Very Very Awesome :).
Update next Part Plzzz :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg double update
superb nice updates
uday manyta scene ws so romantic
love it
but who ws the person who do this???? n why??
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Hey hope your alright😊
Double treat Wow soo happy
Awesome update...
Loved it to the core..
Love the way vijay teases manyata and how the brother-sisters bond very well..
Vijay surely knows how to organise parties amazingly along with j
J teasing manyata about the sari and she being all shy was funny😃
Manveer parts were awesome as always loved them loads!!!
He gifted her a sari and also personally helped her get dressed WOW the whole thing was prefectly described...
Shit someone spiked manyata's drink but thank god vijay and uday reached on time..
I wonder why some one wants to harm manyata all the time..
OMG manyata confessed she loves him wowww yayyy... Uday is left speechless😆
Can't wait for the next update..
Do continue asap
Thanks for the pm😊
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Sonali, thank u so much for updating today ... I had an awful day, and this really cheered me up. I read chapter 52 and this comment is only for that part (I have a feeling something bad is going to occur in 53, I'm probably wrong, but I don't want to risk ruining my mood ... will read and comment for the next part tomorrow)
Fabulous update! Needless to say - I enjoyed Uday's parts the most; I love how naughty u made him😎.
Can imagine that smirk on his face and that entire scene in the bedroom was very hot!☺️ (Manyata is 1 lucky girl😉- I tell u 😆)
Awww - the Indian Flag cake looked so yummy, I suddenly wish it was my birthday today 😳.
Jai and Brijraj are so sweet here ... wish that they showed half that warmth to Manyata in the show .
Anyways ...
I thoroughly enjoyed the chapter, very well written 👍🏼!!!
See u tomorrow 🤗 .
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Dont worry, i'll edit it soon. Have to read the update again and then i'll comment 😊
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OMG OMG OMG. What a brilliant update.
I have no words to describe how fabulous the update was.
I cant tell you how much i love you for the double updates 😳
Seriously it was simply amazing. 👏
LOVED IT TO THE CORE.
This update of yours worths alot of appreciation.
It was my most fav chapter. Haha actually every chapter is my fav 😆
I say that everytime though. 😃
The scene of vasu and manyata was very sweet. They make a lovely duo. Great mother and daughter in law.
Coming to the car scene, uday is sooo naughty and romantic.
Theres always one thing on his mind 😆
I wish he was mine 😃
Jagat and manyata alsonshare a good bond which is really nice.
Vijay is sooo funny 😆
Always teasing manveer. But look at uday, all he ever does is SMIRK. 😆
Poor manyata is the one who gets embarrassed.
Really enjoyed this scene esp the part where vijay was asking uday where he took my manyata and uday was not giving straight answers 😆
Coming to jay and manyata, loved this scene.
The scene was simply adorable and cute.
The love they have for eachother is so pure (just like us 😆 )
Liked how jay teased manyata.
Ayeeinnn manyata was looking hot in shorts and a top.
Poor uday, he was probably getting naughty thoughts and it was very funny when he winked at her.
Hayeee manveer's romance scene was the bestbin chap 52.
It was sooo romantic
I was blushing over here. Loved it soo much. I read the specific part so many times.
And then even the other day when uday dressed manyata up.
That scene was also so passionate, instense and the best.
Uday is soo besharam. And romantic, and naughty and and and sexy 😃 😆
The party scene was good also. Everyone is really nice and loving.
Now coming back to my most fav part was the room 101 scene 😳
I loved a drunk manyata. That whole scene was marvelous.
I never wanted it to end. From the point on which manyata sat on udays lap, to her kisses and lastly confession, it was awesome.
She left uday shocked. One of the best scene.
I wonder who this person is and what he wants. Hes after manyata.
Idiot. I hope hes caught soon.
Now looking at the precap i cant wait for the next part. Uday isnt goingto leave her sooo easily 😃
I hope he confesses soon
Keep it up. Well done.
And thanks for the pm. You just update but im saying 'update soon' again 😆
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Hi there - I'm back! (as promised😉). I don't have words for the update ... seriously! It was THAT GOOD! 👏

I can't tell u how many times I smiled during reading, I even blushed once, I laughed at Manyata (her drunken antics), and finally I said "AWWW" out loud, when Manyata said "I love u" .
Brilliant chapter, thoroughly enjoyable, loved every single moment!
Uday coming to dress Manyata was so unexpected, but sweet!
When Vijay spoke about playing a prank on Manyata ... I was certain it'll go bad, but it became a blessing in disguise; as the villains never got what they wanted.
I'm guessing poor Nandu, is gonna be blasted in the next part (even though it was not his fault😆).
Anything I left out🤔... oh ya, the sarees were gorgeous! Superb choices 👍🏼.
I want to read more ...
do update as soon as u can 😳.
Thanks 4 the pm 🤗 .

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