MG FF -Tum Mille......THREAD 2 LINK ON PG 1 APR 12 - Page 19

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part
super dadi...kya planning kar rahi hai👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
kya chalupanti dikhayi hamari pyari dadima ne...
and maan was affected by geet's presence so he wanted her stay away from him..
now geet gonna stay with dadi and she gonna take care of dadi
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Posted: 10 years ago
maan thinks geet left but he can sense her near him
both r ready 2 argue any time
lolz..dadi n her melo drama..maan will catch her so she chose geet
n poor girl fall in trap
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part dear...dadi is such a drama queen...lolzzz..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update..Super dadi's drama is super cool..Poor Geet is tensed for Dadi..Waiting for next..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Excellent Update
Maan is affected by Geet's presence and wants Geet to leave KM
But Daadima cannot have that so she does her drama with the help of doctor and Geet is convinced
now I wonder what will Maan do

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice ... Liked it...
Thanks for updating..
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
chalo dadi ne apna chal chal diye...dekhte hai age kya hota hai...

superb update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago

wow lovely cute superb update..te way my maaneet in km, my maan dont know still his geet leaving in km and they interaction , geet ki taunting making him fume omg, maan u r prefect mate is ur geet, making ur life hell was lovely cute...maan one more is added in ur nautanki dadi, geet..te way dadi ki drama to make geet stay with her and faking ill and using dr was lovely..i love te update so much
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 18

Later that evening Maan comes and finds everyone missing...

He then goes to Dadi's room and finds Geet there with a worried face...

Maan knows what's going on just by looking into Dadi's eyes, Maan immediately understands Dadi's devilish plans to fool Geet...

Maan: dadima, ye sab kya hai? Geet, tum ne packing shuru bhi kiya hai ya nahi?

Geet: Dadima achanak behosh ho gaye

Geet tries to tell him what's wrong with dadi...but Maan ignores her story...

He looks at Dadi...

Maan: Dadi, kya hua?

Dadi: woh phir se hummare palpitations raise ho gaye aur humme chakkar aagaya tha

Maan: Dadi, jab se ye Geet aayi hai aap ne chain hi kho diya hai, kal ye chale jayegi toh sab kuch teek hojayega, aap fikar mat kijiye, meinne sara intrezaam kardhi

Dadi pretends to be in pain...

Geet: kya?

Maan: ye sab tummare wajhe se hi hua hai

Dadi: aaise nahi hai bte, ab toh humme Geet ki sakht zaroorat hai, aaise waqt mein humme akhele rehne se bahut dar lagthi hai

Geet: Dadi, aap kyun darthe ho? mein aapko chodkke kahin nahi jaanewali hoon

Geet keeps staring Maan...she is not afraid...dadi is with her...

Maan: kya? tum kya bakwaas batein kar rahi ho? Dadi bilkul teek hai

Dadi: par Maan bte, aajkal hummare BP control hi nahi hothi, aur lagtha hai ab Geet ko hi iss Dadi ko sambalna padega, haina Geet?

Geet: ji dadi, mein hoona aapke paas

Maan: usski koi zaroorat nahi hai Dadi, mein hoona?

Dadi: aap?

Maan: haan, aapka ladla potha MSK aapke paas rahega

Dadi: par Maan bte, aapke paas iss budde Dadi ke liye waqt hi kahan hotha, jab chahe aap kaam kaam karthe rehthe ho

Maan: ab aaisa nahi hoga, mujhe bhi apne Dadi ki fikar hai, sab se zyada

Maan stares Geet...

Dadi: lekhin Maan bte, ek aurat ki dard ko aurat hi samaj sakthi, aap hummare pareshaaniyon ko nahi jaanthe

Maan: mein sab jaantha hoon dadima

Dadi: jaanthe toh iss umar mein apne Dadi ko itne pareshaan nahi karthe

Geet looks at Maan and she is angry that Maan is never concerned about Dadi's health and is only worried about himself...so selfish...

Dadi pretends to faint...

Dadi: Geeet Geeet bte

She closes her eyes and sits on the bed...

Geet holds her and supports her...

Geet: dadima, aakhen kholiye, aapko kya ho gaya hai?

Maan: kuch nahi hua hai, tum pehle jao

Geet gets angry...

Geet: aaap aap hatjao, dadima, dadima

Dadi slowly opens her eyes...

Geet gives her water to drink...

Maan keeps staring Geet...

Dadi: Geet bte, aap hummare paas hi rahiye, humme bahut dar lagtha hai

Dadi holds Geet's hands tight...

Maan: mein doctor ko bhulatha hoon, Dr.Sharma, cardiologist

Dadi: usski koi zaroorat nahi

Dadi immediately stops him...

Geet: doctor subhe hi aagaye

Maan: doctor? Kaunsa Dr?

Dadi: woh Dr.sinha

Maan: mein koi Dr.Sinha ko nahi jaantha

Geet: aapko Dadi ki parwa hothi toh aap Dadi ki Dr ko jaanthe

Maan: what?

Dadi: Maan bte, ab Geet humme sambalenge, humme koi Dr ki zaroorat nahi hai

Maan: haan haan, ye bahut badi Dr haina? Sab kuch jaanthi hai

Geet: aap thode dher chup nahi reh sakthe, Dr sab ne kaha ki Dadi ko aaram ki zaroorat hai, unko thoda shanthi se sone do, aap pls jao yahan se

Maan: ye meri Dadi hai

Geet: aapki dadi ho ya meri? Ab unko aaram karna hai, aap jao

Maan feels insulted and he leaves...

Geet decides not to go to munshiji's place leaving poor Dadi alone with MSK...

That night...

Geet is with dadi...Maan comes to see dadi...

Geet's colloge starts from tomorrow...she has to pack her things and get ready to leave...

Maan: dadi, ab aap kaise ho?

Dadi: pehle se behther hai bte, par abhi bhi bahut takleef hothi hai

Maan looks at Geet...she is looking tired and sleepy...

Maan: Geet, tum jao, jaake sojao

Geet: nahi, mujhe needh nahi aathi

Maan: tumne sara samaan pack kardhiya haina?

Geet: kyun?

Maan: hare, kal pehle din hai, pehle din hi late jayegi kya? mein tumme munshiji ka ghar chod detha hoon, tum Pinky ke saath chale jao

Geet: nahi, mujhe kahin nahi jaana hai, meinne Pinky se kehdiya, kal subha Pinky yahan aayegi aur hum donno saath college chale jayenge

Maan: kya? aaise kaise ho saktha? Meinne toh Munshiji se saaf saaf bathaya tha ki tumme unke yahan rahegi Pinky ke saath, tummare Teji veerji ne bhi yahi kaha tha, bhool gayi tum?

Geet: par dadi

Maan: kya Dadi Dadi? Dadi ko toh mein sambal loonga, itne din hum akhele hi the, humme kissi ki zaroorat nahi, samjhi tum?

Geet looks at dadi...

Maan is confused...

Maan: Geet, ye kya chal raha hai? Dadi ne ab kya kiya?

Dadi: Maan bete, hum toh bimar hai, hum kya kar sakthe?

Maan: Geet, chalo, mein tummra madat kartha hoon, jaldhi se packing ho jayega

Geet: lekhin Dadi ne sab kuch badal diya, ab mein yahi se college jaaongi

Maan: what? tummara dimag karab ho gaya hai kya? tum yahan kaise reh sakthi?

Geet: jaise itne din rehthi thi

Dadi quietly listens to their conversation...

Maan looks at dadi...

Maan: Dadi, ye kya keh rahi hai?

Geet: sach hi toh keh rahi hoon, haina Dadi?

Maan: dadima, iss ladhki mere saath ek hi ghar mein nahi reh sakthi, samjhe aap?

Geet: aapko yahan rehne se itna takleef hothi toh aap chale jao, kissi hostel, mein kahin nahi jaane wali hoon

Dadi: well said Geet, aapko iss ghar mein rehne ki pura haq hai

Maan loses his temper and shouts...: dadima, ye teek nahi hai

Geet: kyun chilathe ho? dhere nahi bol sakthe?

Maan: mujhe toh tumme Amritsar mein hi chodke aana chahiye thi

Geet: shadhi kiya haina? Toh sehlo

Maan: shadhi shadhi shadhi, kaise shadhi?

Geet: aap apne hi shadhi ko itne jaldhi kaise bhool skathe ho?

Geet looks at dadi and winks...she is so happy to see Maan in trouble...

Maan: OMG!! Ye ladhki toh mujhe pagal kardegi

Maan wahan se chale jaatha...Dadi is happy that Geet is staying with her now...

Next morning...at breakfast...

Geet is having her roti in a hurry...it's getting late and Geet is awaiting Pinky arrival...

Ye Pinky ab tak kyun nahi aayi? Shayad mujhe bhoolke chale gayi?

Geet bahut pareshaan hai...aaj pehla din hai aur Geet akhele bhi nahi jaa sakthi...

She is still not familiar with the places...

Maan too comes for breakfast...

He is still angry, he avoids looking at Geet...

Geet expects him to wish her as it is her first day of college...

But Maan doesn't even bothers to look in her direction...

Geet is annoyed by this behavior...but Dadi is used to Maan's attitude...

Dadi: Maan bte, aaj Geet college jaa rahi hai

Maan: mujhe patha hai

Dadi: Best of Luck Geet bte

Dadi looks at Maan for his reaction...but Maan sits like a statue...

Geet too ignores him...who wants his wishes? Haina babaji?

Though she hates him she can't tolerate his neglect...

Maybe he will wish her later...

Pinky comes...

Pinky: Geeet Geeet

She just stops seeing Maan...

Maan: Dadi, mein chaltha hoon

Geet keeps looking at him till he leaves...

But there is no response from Maan...he just leaves...

Geet feels very bad...a small wish is not going to cost him anything...kadoos Khurana...

Geet: Pinky, tumne itna dher kyun kardhi?

Pinky: woh papaji ne khana banane mein bahut dher kardhi

Dadi: Pinky, aayiye, aap bhi kuch khayiye hummare saath

Pinky: ji dadi, mujhe toh bahut bhook lagthi hai

Geet: pinky, humme jaana hai

Pinky: ek minute Geet

Pinky starts eating...

Geet: jaldhi kar Pinky

Pinky: hare, aathi hoon baba

Pinky stuffs her mouth full and leaves...

Geet: bye Dadi

They leave in a hurry...they have to catch the bus...

Poor girls they don't have the luxury of a car with a driver, like MSK...

Maan's car just passes beside them...

Geet stares him till he leaves...

Part19

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago

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