OS:-Yeh Raina..Aur Tum

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OS:-Yeh Raina..Aur Tum


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"Mom stop it mom. just stop it" Zain slapped his file on the table.
Surriya was sshocked by his reaction.
"I won't bring barkat back" he declared.
"But why zain,why??..she is ur sister, plz bring her back.. I pormise you,Woh kabhi tumhare samne nhi ayegi" surriya said between her sob.
"I am not going to bring back brakat from mental asylum, b'cuz of her " he paused, and added "I lost my dad"
"It was jus an accident zain, dont blame her..she is innocent" surriya said loudly.
"I dont care"
"How can u be so heartless zain? Woh tumhe booj lagti hai, isliye tum usey waapis nhi lana chahte na?"
Zain looked at her mother ...how can she think like dat? barkat is his sister but he was helpless he wanted to say everything but he didn't ,he walked away from there.
Night 11:00pm :
Zain was walking in the garden
he sat on the bench near by.. he looked at the bench nd softly ran his fingers on the bench engraved "Bhaiyyu,Aloo nd barkat" A smile crept on his face.
But soon he smile got faded as surriya's words echoed in his ears.
He looked up in the sky" Dad where are you? I missing you!" tears brimming out from his eyes making his vision blur.
"It is not I blame bakbak for ur death or I hate her, its jus i was bakbak to come back home after her treatment.. Main khud bhi chata hoon meri bakbak..thik hokar ghar waapis a gaye ,But Mom... I can't say her anything.. wat should i do?Doctors ne saaf saaf boldiya k barkat ko mein ghar nhi le ja sakta,until she recovers.. I requested them, begged them, but they r not ready to do so.. I can't say barkat's horrible condition to mom, woh puri tarha se toot jeygi" Zain wiped his tears with his palms .
After few mintues he sat quietly looking at the surroundings , flowers, flies ect..,
then He did sudden double take nd mummerd "Not again" as he saw aliya coming towards him.
"Hey! Mr.Karela, itni raat ko yahan kya kar rahey ho?" She sat beside him so close thier bodies would touch each other.
" Koi girlfriend milne a rahi hai kya?" She asked and winked at him.
Zain stood up to strated walking, b'cuz he dosn't want to show dat he was crying , nd another reason which aliya knows but felt bad about it...He Ignores her, b'cuz she speaks alot nd popups at the wrong tym.
"Bolo na sadu, maine tumhe disturb tho nhi kiya" she asked him again walking beside him like a small kid.
Zain looked down at her and give her a stern look. then looked forward.
"As if, haan boldiya tho bhag jaogi" he mummred under his breathe.
"Kya bola?" She asked
he snorted nd walked on.
"bolo na!!!!" she jumped like a small kid..
"Kuch nahi" He replied in a rough tone.
"Impossible! abhi maine suna, tumne kuch bola,itna tho mujhe bhi samhaj ata hai" Aliya grins .
Zain glares at her. Aliya closed her mouth nd kept walking with him silently..
"Zain!!!" she screamed and zain looked at her with concern "wat happen?"
"woh dekho ballons" she pointed towards a boy with ballons.
Zain looked at the ballons nd then at aliya nd within seconds his concern look changed into an angry-beast-look.
Aliya looked at him nd gulp down "me..mein abhi ayi" nd ran away from there.
Zain shook hius head in annoyance nd sat down on the bench, aliya came back running with a ballon in her hand nd sat beside him.
zaAin looked at her, nd again turned his face.
"pakdo" she orderd him.Zain looked at her.
"pakdo!!!!" she cried.
"Aliya..please stop your nonsense, Fir se tumhare bewakoof kaam nhi karne wala, peechle baar tumne Stupis se roses mere haath thama diya tha kaha 5 din tak apne room mein rakhne aur 5 din the woh mere room mein rhekar sad gaye"
"Sad gaye?" she looked at him in shock "Dekha,kerala jsiey surat dekh kar tho roses bhi murjha gaye..isliye kheti hoon apna kadwapan thoda sa kaam karo"
" iss baar main tumhari koi baat nhi mane wala, isko mein apne ghar nhi le ja raha"
"Ahaan! is baar alag hai" she said while searching something in her bag.
He ran a hand over eyes in irritation.
Aliya took out a sketch pen from her bag nd give it to zain "Iss ballon par kuch likho" nd gestured him to write.
"Main aisa waisa kuch nhi karne wala" Said zain while gritting his teeth.
"Pleaseee!!!" she said while shaking his arm.
Zain chuckled and said "Mental hospital mein barkat ko nhi..tumhe rhena chaiye tha " He looked at her ..she was silently mouthing the same words.
"Badimaag hiader" said zain to annoy her.
She made a fake angry face nd said "Thik hai thik hai , ab likho"
"Par likhna kya hai?"
"Kuch bhi jo, tum kisiko nhi kheta but khena chaitey ho"
"Aur isey kya hoga?"
"Areey likho baba, baad mein bolti hoon"
Zain shook his head nd wrote something on the ballon.
As soon as he finished writing aliya said "ab isko uada do"
Zain looked at her in confusion.
"Udao!" aliya said nd opened her eyes widely .
Zain left the string of the ballon from his hands while looking at aliya.
Her twinkling eyes were fixed on the ballon she was smiling brightly, zain couldn't take his eyes off her. he just looked at her nd njoyed the view.
"Kaisa lag rah ahai ab ?" She asked with a grin.
"Matlab?" looking at her with a frown.
"Accha lag raha hai na?..mujhe pata tha, mera idea kabhi fail nhi hota" she said while patting herself in pride.
"Isey mujhe koi farq nhi pada"
"Pada hai pada hai, mujhe sab nazaar ata hai" she said confidently
He looked at her said "Stupid!" nd burst out laughing.
She open her mouth nd leaned forward"Kya bola?"
"Stupid" he repeated
"main ja rahi hoon yahan se" she announced in anger nd hits him with her bag.
"Bye..g..go" waved his hand while laughing.
"Huh!!!" she marched towrds the gate and looked back at him ,who was trying to control his laugh nd smiles "Tumhe aisey haasta hua dekh kar khushi hoti hai, chaiye mere ballon aur roses kuch a kar sake but meri tamnna hai ki tum haar dukh ko bhul jao aur khul kar hasso" nd walks away from there leaving him behind laughing.
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Jisne jisne yeh OS romantic hogi soncho...usko meri tarfse bada sa SORRY 😛

And Agar OS Boring laga tho chappal jhootey plz na pheka😳

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Uniquely...me thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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🤣...DUDE you just killed me...🤣
Barkat ke naam se itni nafrat...😆...Lagta hai kal KI saari FKU is mein likh DIYA...
Mental hospital...love the psycho effect here...😆...
And the zaya part was the sweetest ever...I was expecting a different ending by the start but I loved the ending...😳

Love the MR KARELA as well...overall...damn killing hilarious...🤣

You are AWESOME my behna...🤗


RUHANIKAA thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
it was so cute!!!😳
loved it❤️
oriyu24 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Aww that was sweet os..
Barkat se itna hate...
Lol..
Loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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haye rula hi daala tune toh 😭
very very cute ❤️
nd barkat 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was cute + hilarious
Kitna hate hai yaar barkath ke liye...but i hate her the same u do too...
But really enjoyed reading dis os...loved it
Make a torture os on rehan too...if you can
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It is so nyc os ...
Lol barkat se u have beintehaa nafrat ...
Plz write more on zaya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful os
Cute and lovely
But main toh chappals juutey zaroor phenkungi🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
Hayee Rida 🤗
That was super cute..
And Barkat se itna nafrat🤣
Btw lovely OS dear
Keep writing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS Rids 😉
Barkat in mental asylum, too good 🤣

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