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Posted: 10 years ago
NIceee...

Thank you my love for indulging me with an early update... you da the bestest!!! 🤗


Hayeee... kya update tha I can feel the emotions emanating from Arnav as it played in front of my eyes. How I love him! My heart was going dhak dhak dhak... written so well. This was my favorite scene, since your words put me there in the midst of the crowd. The chemistry and attraction between these two is mind blowing, and I can't wait to see it further explored.

The shopping scene... wah... so Khushi Kumari Gupta in her element but not so much for Arnav Singh Raizada... this is where their differences scream out at you. And poor Anjali in the middle. Loved it!

And the green saree, executed so well. How sweet of him to gift it to her, and the fact that she wore it closes the deal. It signifies that they are ready to move forward...

Lil sis, I have said this to you already, but I am so proud of writing this story so differently than anything you have written before. The emotions you continue to write out is what stands out for me to making this one perfect epic story! 👏

Love you,

Di



Edited by Chokri_ASR - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you my darling Choti for this deliciously unexpected surprise ❤️
A teaser may titillate but the update uplifts the mood, and for that shukriya 🤗


It's interesting how they started out with different ideas of what to buy and then zeroed in on the same thing. Is that a glimpse of what their future holds?

Khushi clearly belongs to this determined tireless breed of shopper who leave me exhausted just seeing them in action. But in this instance I wouldn't have minded trading places with Anjali. I'm amazed how she was able to observe them, surreptitiously choosing sarees, without just melting into a boneless mass.

I love the way you've written Arnav observing Khushi. His feelings as he watches her unwrap her present. The way he just watches her. His thoughts, his desires, his intense awareness of her every movement. How the humdrum and tiresome chore is elevated just by her being there.

And then his sighting of her ethereal beauty wrapped up in his present. Your writing makes their magnetic allurement towards each other practically tangible! 👏
Edited by Arshi67 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
A lazy rainy morning...


Imagine, just close your eyes and imagine
Oh phoe, not now but after reading this imagine


Imagine it is raining quite heavily
Imagine it is chilled very pleasantly
Imagine you are sitting there silently
Imagine being one with the rain finally


Imagine, just block the outside out and imagine
Yeah, use your wild imagination and just imagine


Imagine a plate of pakora, hot & delicious
Imagine you munching this threat so fabulous
Imagine garama garam chai too, flavors
Imagine you sipping this in all harmonious


Imagine, just close out all noises and imagine
Well, right about now a good time to imagine


Imagine that cosy feeling the rain evoke
Imagine the senses the food awoke
Imagine now this writing, a masterstroke
Imagine all the emotions that it convoke


Imagine, just bear with me a minute and imagine
Come on, this once come with me and imagine


Imagine this Arnav slowly thawing
Imagine this Khushi furiously blushing
Imagine the request to forgiveness with stammering
Imagine the actual forgiveness with smirking


Imagine, humm... do we really need to imagine?
No, I guess with this kind of writing, no need to imagine

Edited by Heavens_Flower - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update 👏
Loved mind-blowing chemistry between Arnav and Khushi in this update
Loved whole shopping part. Loved how Arnav and Khushi liked different ornaments but zeroed on the same. The saree choosing part for Khushi ... haaye kya andaz tha
Loved the way you wrote Arnav's thoughts noticing Khushi's every movements, his feelings and his desires brilliantly.👏
Loved how Anju notices them.😃
Loved the way Arnav gifted Khushi the green saree and loved his feelings when he watches her unwrap the gift. Hiding Arnav ko Anjali pakadliya 😆
Loved what way Arnav wanted Khushi to apologise him and the way you beautifully wrote Arnav's feelings seeing Khushi in his gifted saree.
So Anjali got to know that they both are attracted to each other.

Loved these lines

He was growing increasingly attracted to the bubbly, optimistic Khushi, and it was becoming more and more difficult to restrain his feelings.

she was beautiful. His hands itched to undo her hair, straighten out the waves with his fingers. He wanted to watch her tremble when he brushed his fingers against her stomach, hear the intake of breath and watch her eyes flutter shut.

Anjali watched her brother and Khushi with interest, glancing back and forth between the two. They clearly thought they didn't have any observers, assuming that they were being subtle.


It was such a contrast from a couple of months ago, from the cold ice between them.

Instead, there was a slow, burning attraction, a flame that both of them were trying to smother.


Arnav felt his heart swell at the glimmer of excitement in her eyes, the amazement that the sari was there. He felt his own lips pull up into a smile as he watched her finger the fabric, draping it over herself as she looked in the mirror.

He didn't have the time to adjust his expression into the carefully collected mask he usually wore, and she was stunned by the satsified smile that played on his lips.

Arnav Singh Raizada had bought her a sari.


He hated the nervousness in her eyes, the carefully placed wall that was there to protect herself from... him.

"If you really want to apologize, wear the green sari tonight."

He was about to turn away when a slim figure caught his eye. His breath caught in his throat when he saw her, her dark hair streaming down her back in loose waves, a small, tentative smile on her face


"Apology accepted, Khushi. I think... I should ask you to apologize more often."

Anjali watched the couple out of the corner of her eye, smiling slightly. She had seen the dumbstruck expression on his face when she walked in, the way his eyes had lingered over her figure. She hadn't missed the hidden smile of satisfaction that she had worn it, or the way Khushi was trying to ignore the dark eyes that never strayed.




Edited by sudhareddy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
baklawa wala unres:

Loved the update Choti. Indeed their journey from instant hate for each other to developing a kind of nice camaraderie and finally getting attracted to each other was very nice and it felt beautiful.

The scene at the saree shop was quite cute. Anjali's head must have been oscillating from one side to another looking at these two like when one watches a tennis match 😆. And surely my mind was oscillating too thinking of the color of the saree she would select. So she went for a green saree and not red???

And OMG, maar dala, then engagement scene was just ufff!!!😳

Yeh Kiski Hai Aahat Yeh Kiska Hai Saaya
Huvi Dil Mein Dastak Yahan Kaun Aaya

Hum Par Yeh Kisne Hara Rang Dala
Khushi Ne Hamari Hame Maar Dala
Maar Dala Maar Dala Maar Dala


I could so totally imagine this scene and compare it to the diwali scene in IPKKND. The intense look of Arnav and Khushi turning and looking at him now and then.
Things are getting too hot to handle!!!!!😉

Edited by canapoem - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Green is the new red indeed!

Absolutely adored their budding relationship! The scene in the beginning shows that even though they might be different, if they try and learn one another, they can complement each other. Also adored how protective Arnav is of Anjali. Even though things aren't as they were before he left, he is still her big brother, and as such it is his duty to make sure she doesn't get hurt.

Their scenes! So cute. Loved that she took his opinion into account while selecting sarees, all the time not letting his opinion be the deciding factor. See? They can make it work!

Arnav babua is starting to feel the stirrings of love, is he? I liked the way you expressed his nervousness about gifting it to her, and his reaction after she saw the gift was adorable!

Arnav...you can ask me for an apology anytime! 😉😆 That was another cute scene, and this scene shows her budding feelings. Can't wait to see how they resist each other...and then give in.


Edited by BlueMystique - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Green is the new red ?? More later
Edited by DDC1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Updated here- I hope you enjoy it!
Edited by chotidesi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Me me me
Lo, I was so proud of myself.

I m on the next page. 😕🤢

I'll be back later, my dearset Choti.

Let me lick my wounds and then I'll be back.

Loved your take on the saree selection sequence.
It was cute.
And now Anjali knows that these two are attracted to each other.
That will make things interesting.
The chemistry is heating up and the readers are beginning to sweat!😉
Will be waiting for friday.
Thanks for the early update!
Edited by 1chilly - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 1chilly

Me me me

Lo, I was so proud of myself.

I m on the next page. 😕🤢

I'll be back later, my dearset Choti.

Let me lick my wounds and then I'll be back.


You're right after Choti on this page na. Technically, still the first spot. 😆

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