Ragna family- Ragna ff-ZINDGIDILSE-DESTINIED (ZDSD)- Note - Pg - 72 - Page 26

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: appyK

Finally first leap😛

Baadme padhke comment karti hu..😉


Unres..

To start with.. I'm feeling I'm watching ema season 2 which is the corrected version of the disastrous season 1..

*Reading... Reading..*

*Awwing... Laughing all of sudden..*

Vithal-Kalpi-Pakya sooo cute!!!!😃😃

*Mouth open in Hawhhh*
*Rubbing eyes and reading again*

OMG!!!! now that's some kamla.. Is she really Kamla??!!!!
Loved it how she said but after dropping you at your school.. Guess by the time you complete this ff I'm gonna become kamla pujaari .. Lol...😆

*Reading*

Hero ne maari entry aur mere dil mein ghanti.. 😳😳

This is for kalpi..

Tere dhiyaan kidhar yeh tera hero idhar hai..

*Reading *

Lol..neetu and her dreams.. Dus hazaar crore!!!

Can't use rofl smiley.. Uss par sirf tera haq hai😆

*Reading *

Aww bachpan ka care.. And then jawaani ka pyaar...

*Frowning as the update ends*

Guess so I have another ff to read which will never let me feel that ema ended ... And on a horrible note...

Hope so you aren't going back to your reader mode coz I love ms.rofl in writer mode..

Ab bada aur colourful smileys waala bribe diya toh we better get next update asap..😉😈

wow multiname...what a feedback...i just love it...it was felling like i m looking you while you are reading the update...😃
glad u like father and kids relation.

well this is appreciable for the time being but in part 8b to 8d you will gonna hate her. specially in part 8d. and your dream will shattered into pieces for loving kamla ...but there is a remedy for you and that is by the end of the ff you will love kamla.😉

@ bold...it is nice...this song is for ragna...
hum hai rahi pyarr ke...hum hai rahi pyaar ke.😆

neetu's daydreaming🤣...bingo...you know multiname, i wanted to use this smiley in the udate too but thought that i will use it in the comment if a special mention of rofl will come as a comment for neetu's daydreaming...coz i was laughing when i was writing her daydreaming. And you gave me that chance to use my COPYRIGHT,TRADEMARK ,PATENT ETC...nad that is this rofl smile🤣

@ purple bold: thanks for this compliment...its a huge compliment for me.


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

THANK YOU KIARA
well its good to see that i m able to show the bonding btw father and kids😉...when i was writing the bonding part my mind was saying is it upto the mark or not that i wanted to show coz as a reader of other ff/ss of other writers, it is easy for me to feel the emotion that a writer want to show but when it comes to my story, there is only one problem with me and i.e, will the readers catch the exact moment or not that i want to show. AND i get the answers from the comments that u guys love the bonding part which gives me a satisfaction that i m going into right direction of the story.

well i was also scared for funny sequence coz writing fun sequence is toughest job for me and i m happy for it also that i m receiving comment in favour of their prank.
kiara , you notice the same about the fun that i want to show and i.e, vitthal kept on calling him kumbhkaran again and again.
@ bold...my one more attempt successful
i am very happy dear.
thanks for the lovely comment😃


Don't worry Ritu! You are doing good. 👏 I loved the bonding part as I was also close to my dad. Dad is and will always remain a girl's first hero. Thank you 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update
Kalpi bond with her father and brother is amazing
I like that they were having fun
And as usual Pakhi the spoil brat and her cheater parents are always scheming
Raghav answering back sahil and setting him straight about his name was awesome
As for greedy Neetu all she can see is money and more money 🤢
I hate the way she talk about Kalpi
Poor girl is scared, but now that Raghav is back I feel that things will be different :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Wonderful update
Kalpi bond with her father and brother is amazing
I like that they were having fun
And as usual Pakhi the spoil brat and her cheater parents are always scheming
Raghav answering back sahil and setting him straight about his name was awesome
As for greedy Neetu all she can see is money and more money 🤢
I hate the way she talk about Kalpi
Poor girl is scared, but now that Raghav is back I feel that things will be different :)

thanks natasha
yup, raghav is with kalpi .
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Posted: 10 years ago
plzzz update dear ...plz update prt 8b nd 9 plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

plzzz update dear ...plz update prt 8b nd 9 plzzz

tiwari ji...😆
i m writing down the update...some ortion is left to typ...so i will update it today.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

tiwari ji...😆
i m writing down the update...some ortion is left to typ...so i will update it today.😉

thanku dear nd yes long update plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
Good story update soon...n pm me when u update.
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful upate dear..
loved u..you described the emotion so well..
hate neetu here to much and ganuppa is to good..and kalpi is so sweet..
raghav feel happy bcoz kalpi is happy..awwo so cute..waitimg for more
upate next part soon

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