Ragna family- Ragna ff-ZINDGIDILSE-DESTINIED (ZDSD)- Note - Pg - 72 - Page 25

Finally first leap😛

Loved the update. Neetu is such a kameeni. Not fond of jam or her pak pak. Continue soon.

Lovely update dear. Pls pls pls pls pls update soon

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

so guys,give me the answer of my following questions:

1. Would u like to continue this ff,

2. I will write ff in english but sometime in hindi also..so tell me r u comfortable with hindi coz my englishis not that good..

3. I will not be able to update it soon means there can be delay in update new part..or parts..so r u comfortable with that..

2. Plez write ur ff in english...😃

3. Thats ok...😃

hey after so much wait finally u update..the wonderful update.raghav come to kapoor mension.i hate neetu and kamala also..

Lovely update Ritu! And yes, it's been so long! So a leap, eh? Loved the bonding between Vithal and kids. He's indeed a wonderful dad. He adores Kalpi. The teasing session of Pakya by Vithal and Kalpi was hilarious. How Vithal kept on calling him Kumbhkarnan was so funny.

Originally posted by: niru04

Finally u update tha stry dr.waiting long for ur update.u well writen the every line of the stry.its really amazing.dnt delay plz update soon

thanks niru
i will try not to delay in updates

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Too lovely update finally raghav is here n kalpi will not be alone now so sweet love the update kalpi n pakya prank

THANKS SWEETI

Originally posted by: lolor

I hate kamla...waiting for raghav & kalpis bonding...
nice update

thanks dear

Originally posted by: balarangarajann

My reader turned writer friend is back .Welcome.

Excellent update.

You have rewinded the old episodes of EMA.Kalpi's waiting for her aai,Neetu's taunt And Prem's

wild behaviour et al.

Though you wanted to give a detail account of Ragna's childhood bonding,it was mixing with all those moments where Kalpi was treated badly and taunted by the Kapoors.

Hence minimise the part of the Kapoors and give us the leap soon

thanks vijaya
yes i m back in writing mode

Originally posted by: sampa79

Nice update

thank you

Originally posted by: Anjinie

awesome, would like to see Paakhi's reaction when she sees Raghav, loved the bonding between Kalpi and Pakhaya

thanks dear
you would see pakhi reaction in next update

Originally posted by: eishe10

Wonderful!!!

thanks

Originally posted by: sunyy

Loved the update. Neetu is such a kameeni. Not fond of jam or her pak pak. Continue soon.

thanks sunny
this behaviour is in her blood so she is used to of it

Originally posted by: ovee

Lovely update dear. Pls pls pls pls pls update soon

thanks ovee

Originally posted by: ReezaFathi

1. Plez continue...plez dnt stop...😃

2. Plez write ur ff in english...😃

3. Thats ok...😃

thanks 😃

Originally posted by: Aru18

hey after so much wait finally u update..the wonderful update.raghav come to kapoor mension.i hate neetu and kamala also..

raghav is see kalpi's pain..awwo so sweet..continue soon

and answer of u r Q.

don't stop...

not problem with hindi

and late chalega.😃😃😃

thanks aruhi
glad you like it

Originally posted by: jiya007

Nice update ritu

thanks jiya

Originally posted by: sugandhii

Res😉

finally leap shall Unresss after reading...

Unres

Firstly Dhokhaaa 😲

u said leap n that's a carrot ritu.. 😭 no But I thought something else about d leap...😭

but it's ok I can understand childhood bond is important to make d relation stronger after leap perfect👏

Coming to update

Awesome Update Ritu 👏

I loved every bit of it specially d family tym..😃

Vithal's concern about his Rajkumari.. n d way he describes her sleeping habit.. Awwsh bcz of kamla.. vithal's pov amazing written...👏👏👏

N u r d reason of my smile Rajkumari awwieie superb😛

Seems lyk kalpi is different child she doesn't do any drama in d name of school...

Hmm pdhaakoo Bachii...😆 n then her eyes searching 4 her aai...

Then ata hai hmara "Kumbhkaran" pakya session haha haha hahah I enjoyed it alot... n d way kalpi wake him up n baba atleast u don't call me Kumbhkaran... Awwsh he is cute.. n Bro sis duo lovely... 😆😆🤣 Amazing..

or yaha hue kamla ki entry.. 😕

Kya ye wahi kamla h 😲aww she has so mch love n care for kalpi.. don't tell me u r going to change her image through this ff..😉

N kapur house...

Yr Neetu n her 10000 crores... 😡

N then Raghavendra entry... n his harsh tone to sahil n taunt to neetu.. hahah ladka best h..😆😆😆

N then his respect towards kamla maa is clearly visible in his eyes..😊

Ok my most fvrt in this one would be d last scene wen Raghav n kamla convo interuptted by kalpi.. gosh I just love this moment... AAI .. kalpi.. I thought pls stop that moment wen hero is going to see his heroine...😳😳 n then neetu ' s words I don't like her..

n Raghav's asking from kamla about what's going on clearly shoW's his concern towards her😳

Ok ritu u showed everything vry nycly relived of EMA moments in terms of kamla n kalpi.. I don't know y I remember dat chori ka ilzaam episode wen kamla hugs kalpi after neetu words😡

Looking frwd to raghav n kalpi bond..

Nyc update..👏👏

thank u sudhi ...
@bold; sudhi ,i think u did not read the precap of chapter 7...it said TEN YEARS LEAP not 20 YEARS...😆...BUT u will get another leap in chapter 9. so be happy my dear.
i m glad that u like family time..and vitthal's pov.. and besides this bro-sis funny sequence.(actually i was scared for the funny sequence that will it turn out to be funny or not😕. But i fell relax now that readers like the prank and specially mentioned it in their comments...I AM VERY BAD IN WRITING FUN SEQUENCE...emotional sequence writing is not tough for me but writing funny sequence...toughest job for me)

kamla's image in reader's eyes will completely change in next three updates and i m sure u guys will hate kamla in next update but if not in next update then till chapter 8d or specially in 8d, you readers will bound to write "i hate this kamla for the core of my heart".😉

yes raghavendra is best...and this is his beginning of khadoos and akdoo raghav...it was the 1st image of future raghav.

@ ITALIC BOLD: same reaction was of mine and i write that scene by imagining that "first meet of kalpi and raghav"
and about ur last paragraph, that sequence will not come in this ff coz situation in chori wala sequence will turn out in a different way in next to next updates.

once again thanks for liking it.

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Lovely update Ritu! And yes, it's been so long! So a leap, eh? Loved the bonding between Vithal and kids. He's indeed a wonderful dad. He adores Kalpi. The teasing session of Pakya by Vithal and Kalpi was hilarious. How Vithal kept on calling him Kumbhkarnan was so funny.

Kamala and Pakhi 's mutual admiration is so irritating. Pakhi is such a selfish child. Dumb Kamala, too blind in her live to see her true colours. Neetu hates her daughter's bond with the maid.

Raghav is finally back. Liked his no nonsense attitude. Neetu and her day dreaming 🤣

Poor Kalpi! Neetu scared her. Raghav has noticed the behaviour of Neetu towards Kalpi and is demanding to know what happened.

THANK YOU KIARA
well its good to see that i m able to show the bonding btw father and kids😉...when i was writing the bonding part my mind was saying is it upto the mark or not that i wanted to show coz as a reader of other ff/ss of other writers, it is easy for me to feel the emotion that a writer want to show but when it comes to my story, there is only one problem with me and i.e, will the readers catch the exact moment or not that i want to show. AND i get the answers from the comments that u guys love the bonding part which gives me a satisfaction that i m going into right direction of the story.

well i was also scared for funny sequence coz writing fun sequence is toughest job for me and i m happy for it also that i m receiving comment in favour of their prank.
kiara , you notice the same about the fun that i want to show and i.e, vitthal kept on calling him kumbhkaran again and again.
@ bold...my one more attempt successful
i am very happy dear.
thanks for the lovely comment😃