SANDHIR FF: MY EQUATION OF TRUST (DARK+MATURE)LINK TO THREAD 2!! - Page 33

Moi loved it...

feelng really bad for sanyu.
she is so scared of rd.
rd is making hr lyf lyk hell.
awsome update.
loved it.
wht hppnd to rd that makes him this much cruel.
poor sanyu.
thnk u so much for pm.
keep smiling.

i didnt xpct rd wil b dis jerk...

my heart goes out for sanyukta...& randhir arghhh😡...i know there has been a very strong reason for his behavior but this is insane & intolerable...by d way u write the situation amazingly...i'm liking this ff more & more day by day...eagerly waiting for next update...thnx for pm...

I soo love it please update soon :)))

lovely lovely update
update next part ASAP

Hey amazing update...
Arey sanyu has to in through so much yaar...
Poor her...
Plz show Rd's backstory soon...
Thnx for pm...
Love
Harshita

Woooshhh!!! I finally landed in this fiction.
*sigh* I'm really sorry for neither reading nor reviewing this fiction before as I was having my exams. I apologize again... Sowwyy!! *puppy eyes*
What?! 7 chapters already?? Woah!
Well, I'm off to read the fiction... Wait! Did I just read Dark?! God!!! I'm dying to read it now..

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There's a particular reason why I love this sadistic genre and this fiction has all the necessary elements in it to make it an awesome one. I, surely, am addicted to this one.
Characterization of Randhir as the dark intimidating yet emotional one and portrayal of Sanyukta as a vulnerable yet strong willed girl is at its best.
The plot, so far, seems precisely realistic and a mysterious one.
The pace of the story is wonderful while the description is splendid.
Uh! Why is Randhir torturing Sanyukta so much and why is she welcoming it? I want the fight spirit in Sanyukta not the flight one. I hope to see that soonish.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading the chapters, they all exhibit some sort of message and the convey the pain that a woman has to endure in extermities.
I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
Do update it soonish!

Regards
Keya

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Ress


Unress


Omg omg omg
Cnt believe moi first 😃 😃

Faints out of happiness 🤢

See u made me stalker
I m stalking u for updated from past 15 mins
Finally my hrd work paid off
Phewww really hell tired
Kafi tiring hota h stalking 😛

really yaar rashi u r a hard worker moi impressed...😆

Now coming to the update
Moi kya kaho
I m speechless
U write flawless

The pain was so evident I can envision what sanyu going through

She's smiling in pain
She's giving herself pain

She's so scared n broken

Moi crying seeing her lyk this 😭

me too...😭😭😭

She's wrking lyk slaves

Rd feels guilty to harm her
Bt his hatred towards female alwz overpowers any other emtn in him

He's enjoying giving her pain
He enjoys when he saw her afraid face

Poor sanyu tolerating his torture

He's insulting her
Bt she's so scared

Rd smirking seeing her suffer

Sanyu cleaning his shoes
Really feeling horrible for her

haye bechari sanyu...😭😭

Rd not even letting her go in rum

She have to live now in hall
N sleep on floor
Really rite now I m hating him
I can understand he has bad past bt Wht he's doing is really too much

I know u have planned everything
Very soon I will strt liking him

ha vo bhi hai yaar...😆😆😆

Precap
Moi excited as alwz 😉

Update soon

Luv u darloo
Keep smiling 😊

Originally posted by: Sagl

Omg☢️☢️

You know you justify the title of ur ff

yeah always i try to do so...😉

Its actualky so dark ..that it scares the hell out of me ☢️

And u pen it beautifully 👏

Oh god hating rd right now 😲

And poor sanyu 😭😭

When will the day come when she will sleep on rd's bed 😳😳

Patience 😆

😆😆 u have such a naughty mind oh god 😆😆 but koi nahi mera dimaag bhi esa hi ahi...😛😉😆

Dying to know rds past but its ok take ur time 😆

And keep giving us awsm updates and quick too

Update soon

Thnx fr pm'ing 😃