Dramatic too but was excellent... You wrote it so beautifully...!
Sara and Laila.. huh such cheapos!!!
It was all nice... but i dint get a thing..where was Kria actually?
and the last part.. Kria wore her scarf and Ceil covered her..Dint get that actually..
i'm sorry if it was a silly question...
Rest all was awesome!
Keep writing more.. and do PM me! :)
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