Arshi FF:- Cruel Fate - Chapter 16 (PG 135) Updated Mar 7-16

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Posted: 10 years ago

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8...

NIce romance update...

wow... ending ... new twist

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Posted: 10 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: yoga123
Beautiful chapter...thanks for the PM

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Originally posted by: seeta_naips
Hmmm at least they got to do the thing

Now time for Arnav to get back at Subhadra

Thanks for the comments seeta. :)

Originally posted by: ZANADI
BEAUTIFUL WRITTEN
I ENJOYED THEIR DISNEY MOMENTS
IT WAS LIKE I WAS WITH THEM😆

I WANT TO GO TO DISNEY TOO

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Thank you Zanadi, I am glad that you liked Disney World. :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Spoonai
Nice story so far :)

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Originally posted by: blue_rose1605
Nice update...awesome vacation..

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Originally posted by: pravalika9291
awesome update
sry for late comment

Parvaledhu pravallika, story chadivav, thats good.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: renusan.arshi
Awsome WELL WRITE 👍🏼

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Posted: 10 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: Linsie
nice start confuse...

so is khushi alive

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Both got separated... coz of that old lady...

i think she put the fire...

in the hospital to kill khushi...

will clarify that in future updates.

Originally posted by: Linsie
CS .. good so dadi is the main culprit

yea

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Posted: 10 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: Linsie
like the banner...

thank you

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Payal take care of aarav...

good arnav never let SM... to be part of it...

i like arshi babies cute...

Originally posted by: Linsie
like the banner...

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arshi meet not official...

but kids knows ... their parents...

nice update...

Originally posted by: Linsie

Originally posted by: Linsie
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Truth is out... arshi together... as a family...

hotness is still there

Originally posted by: Linsie
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payal an khushi meet...

sweet update...

so planning for Disneyland...

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very cute innocent fight...for love

now all vacation...

Originally posted by: Linsie
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Nice lavanya and NK... couple...

the kids very cute...

awesome update...

Originally posted by: Linsie
8...

NIce romance update...

wow... ending ... new twist

OMG, Thanks for commenting on every chapter. I was really surprised by the amount of comments when I opened this thread. Your comments are really encouraging to me.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Cruel Fate Chapter 9 Teaser.

I am posting teaser of Chapter 9 and I will update the full chapter by weekend. Happy Reading.

29 year old Dhruv Mallick was only son of Avinash Mallick, Arnav's Chachu. He was studying in Stanford when Arnav evicted his uncle out of Sheesh Mahal. He just landed in India after 8 years.

"Time to settle some old scores."

"Nani, do you have any Idea why Chote told us come to farmhouse?"

"No, Bitiya. He took off with Aarav bitwa to America without telling us and now I don't what will happen."

"Hello Hi bye, Sasuma, Why iz ebery one borried. Hamari Arnav Bitwa must have got Giftswa, that why he tell us to comewa herewa."

"Di, Nani, Mami". They heard familiar voice behind and turned around with their mouths open and eyes full of tears.

How is the trailor, Full movie coming soon.

Full Movie:- Chapter 9

Edited by Pinky.Raizada - 10 years ago