Manan OS - I Love You Nandu

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello Everyone 😊 thank you for the response on my very first OS on the forum.Some of you guys wanted me to continue it, so here it goes.This is basically a continuation of my first OS - Its Love Dude ..Link Below.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4221045

OS - I Love You Nandu


Manik drove the car in maniac speed all the while thinking about Cabir's words in the hospital room.The more he thought about it, the more he realized what a fool he had been to think he can sacrifice his love. 'LOVE' the emotion wedged deep inside his heart making it clench with the need to hold her, to apologize, for all the hurt and pain he inflicted on her.He accepted to himself what he had been avoiding to think about all along.That he truly and irrevocably in love with Nandini.His 'Star".

In her room, Nandini was clutching the empty jar which once held her adorable fire flies and sobbed her heart out.The pain was too much to bear.She hiccuped another sob when she thought back to all the painful words he said to her before the musicana performance.

She looked up and cried "Iyappa why does it hurt so bad? If this is what love and heart break feels like, then i dont want to feel like this ever again! After mom and dad passed away, i thought i could not feel such heart wrenching pain again but i was wrong. And Manik--Manik is right am a fool.How could i be so stupid to fall for monster Manik and his cruel plot to take revenge at me?" her shoulders hunched as fresh tears began falling.

The sudden shrill of her phone ringing nearby made her jerk her head up.She frowned and wiped her tears in one hand as she searched for her phone in her bag thinking it could be Navya checking up on her.

But her heart gave a painful thud when she saw that the reason for her unhappiness is calling her.She disconnected the phone angrily and spoke bitterly glancing at the screen "Monster Manik why are you calling me now? Why can't you leave me alone? "

Almost immediately it began ringing again.Nandini rolled her eyes in anger and disconnected it.Just when she was about to switch off the phone, She heard loud car horn from outside in intervals.With a feeling of dread & De-javu she came near the windows and moved the curtains away to peep outside.

There like a dark knight,he stood in black against his equally black car.The street lights illuminated his face which was directly looking at her as if he waiting for her to open the curtains.With an angry glare at him,she pushed the curtains back in place and stormed back to her bed.Once again, her phone began its insistent ringing.She scolded herself for not switching it off the last time.

But before she could switch it off , it began ringing yet again.With an irritated sigh she answered " What do want now Manik? Why can't you leave me alone?Stop calling me and just leave " she shouted with all the anger she had it in herself.

" Nandini pls.I just want to talk to you for few mins.I promise i will go away after that.Just come down pls " something in his strained voice struck a strange cord in her but nevertheless she disconnected the phone and this time switched it off.

Angrily she lay down on the bed and tried to close her eyes and sleep.She had'nt slept a wink ever since the night of the opening night gala of Musicaana where she shared her first kiss with Manik under the beautiful lit backyard.What had been a fairy tale night, had just turned into a rotten nightmare in less than 24 hrs.She squeezed her eyes tightly shut against the memory.

Although she tossed and turned for good one hour,against her own protests she couldnt stop herself from going back to the window again to check one last time.She stifled a gasp when her eyes connected with a pair of dark chocolate brown staring straight at her.

She quickly turned her back and looked upward " Iyappa he is still here.What does he want with me now? What if someone sees him standing there? " Before she could change her mind, she slowly crept her way out.

The minute he heard the front door open, Manik quickly straightened himself breathing a sigh of relief.He was hoping desperately for the past hour for her to make an appearance.Although he would have probably stayed right here all night until he talked to her.

"Manik Malhotra what the hell do you want? What are you doing here at this time of night?Why can't you leave me alone ! " Nandini yelled as soon she reached him.

"Nandini pl listen to me.I came here to explain.There is a reason ---"before he could complete Nandini interrupted angrily "Reason? Reason for what ? Breaking my heart? ruining my performance ? You already explained you revenge plan clearly enough Mr.Manik Malhotra i dont need to hear any more from you "

She turned to leave then turned right back " Everything was a game to you na? you lied to me from the beginning ! You never broke up with Alia did you? It was you who spiked my drink that night.Neither you are scared of darkness nor you are fond of stars.Everything was a neatly planned lie ! God am such an idiot.I fell for every one of your well rehearsed words ! "

Manik closed his eyes in pain and when he reopened them she was starting to leave again.He quickly grabbed her hand " Nandini wait.Pl listen to me "

"Dont you dare touch me ! " She pulled her hands free from his and glared at him."Haven't you said enough?Just go away Manik.Leave "

She turned to go yet again but this time was stopped by his voice which was a strained whisper in the night. "None of it was a lie.I did broke up with Alia.It was long before--long before i got close to you " he gulped at that and continued in a near raspy voice which sounded almost painful "I dint spike your drink Nandini i would never do that.It was Harshad.I - I dont like darkness and yes i like stars very much "

He looked at her with tear filled eyes and said honestly " Not everything i told you was a lie Nandu.Yes i accept i lied to you but only about it being a revenge.You were never a mission to me Nandu.It wasn't that all " His adam apple bobbed as he forced himself to continue again "I - I did it for Dhruv " he said in a mere whisper.

"Dhruv? " Nandini repeated astonished " What does this got to do with Dhruv?He is the most sweetest guy i've ever met.I can't even understand how he is even a part of Fab 5.He has always been my guardian angel while the rest of Fab 5 hurt and bullied me ! So don't you dare try to blame your vengence act on Dhruv "

Manik closed his eyes in frustration as her words not only lodged a deep wedge in his already bleeding heart but he was shocked to realize he is also feeling a stab of jealousy.He took a deep breath.This might be his only chance, and he can't ruin it.

"Nandu that's not what am trying to do at all.God ! Pls just pls listen to me.I will tell you everything " This time when he took her hands in his, she let him.She seemed to be mesmerised by the sudden tears in his eyes.It could all be an act she reminded herself but couldnt bring herself to leave without giving him a chance to explain.There is something about his eyes and voice that called to heart.Pleading it to listen.

"You have 5 mins Mr.Manik Malhotra.Just tell me what you have to and leave.I dont want anyone finding you here especially my chacha chachi " she said looking straight at his eyes which seemed to hold her against her own will.

"That night when you left after promising me that you will always be my star.Dhruv came there carrying a bouquet of white flowers.He - He said he has fallen in love with you " At Nandini's shocked gasp, he nodded " Its true.When i heard it, it was as if my entire world collapsed around me.I just din't know what to do.Dhruv is not just my best friend.He is like my own brother.I can't hurt him Nandini.I just can't.He had gone through so much pain that i dint want to be the reason to cause him any more pain.That is when i decided i should let you go "

Too shocked to react, she stared at him unblinkingly while he continued all the while silent tears falling from his eyes "Although i decided to let you go, i could'nt bring myself to leave you.I came to see you last night for one last time before i went far away from you.But- " he choked.

"Last night was good bye " she whispered as her mind began thinking about the way he kept looking at her face last night and the way he hugged her tightly before leaving.In a moment's time everything became clear to her.She dint even think it could be another plot or lie to humiliate her.She knew he is telling the truth.From the realization came anger.

"So you did all this deliberately for Dhruv?So that i will hate you and go with Dhruv? Whom do you think of yourself Mr.Manik Malhotra? God ? Who are you to decide my life.Am not a barbie doll whom you decided to pass along to your friend to play.Am a woman with heart and feelings ! You played with it and me" she pushed at his chest angrily.Tears falling freely from her cheeks now.

Manik held her hands again " Nandini am sorry. So so sorry.I was a fool to do what i did.I accept i dint even think what it would do to you.All i thought about that time is Dhruv and his happiness.And that He - He could make you happy.He was the one who always made you smile.I always hurt you.You both had a bond long before we both even started behaving civilly to each other.But although i decided to sacrifice i couldnt go through with it"

He cupped her cheeks and looked into her tearful eyes that reflected his own pain and longing "I want to remain in your prayers always.

I Love you Nandu.I know sorry will not cut it for whatever hell i put you through.But i need you by my side Nandu.You are and always be my star.Pls shine for me.Although i broke your trust, i would do anything to get it back.Anything.But believe me when i say I Love You "

"No " With a determined look Nandini removed the hands that cupped her cheek.She ignored the devasted look that crossed his face and concentrated on her own pain " No Manik.This is not love.If you had loved me you wouldn't have hurt me.Do u remember your promise to me that you will never hurt me? Well you did and i will not forgive you this time ever ! I can't take it anymore Manik.Just go and pl leave me alone ! " with that she ran back inside wiping the tears vigorously.

Manik stood rooted to the spot staring at her retreating figure while his heart shattered into million pieces.Well he guessed he deserve it.He deserve this and more for hurting the love of his life.But he is also determined to not let her go.He could not.And so he will wait even if it takes years.In the stillness of the night he whispered " I Love You Nandu always "


😳 I really don't know what made me write this.Well sooner or later Manik will confess but i dint want Nandu to take it lightly and forgive him immediately😉 She is a tigress.Do share your views if you like this OS 😳

P.S - Not sure if there will be a continuation 😳 depends on the readers comments.Do add me for pms in case you want to be notified of next OS.

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kritu17krits thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww dats heart breaking
bt loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Believe me She won't..😆
Nandu will get evn wid him..am sure..😉

n Manik will hve to try harder i guess..😆
loved da OS 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice os...

eventhough heart breaking, i loved the way u have written it...

n the determination of Manik to win her ws d best
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kritu17krits

awww dats heart breaking
bt loved it

Thank u 😳 lol my intention was not to write a heartbreaking one.But given the situation i felt it shouldnt be easy on Manik 😈
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: TheBlueAngel

Believe me She won't..😆
Nandu will get evn wid him..am sure..😉

n Manik will hve to try harder i guess..😆
loved da OS 😃

Thank u 😃
😆 He deserves it 😉 And ya that's what i like abt Nandini's character portrayal.Not your usual damsel in distress.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viji.Chandran

nice os...

eventhough heart breaking, i loved the way u have written it...

n the determination of Manik to win her ws d best

Thank u dear 😊 glad u like my writing 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chocomaniac
Im a newcomer to this forum n couldnt resist commenting on your thread.
Luvd your ending, even tho its heartbreaking i too feel manik was too casual when he let her go. Luv is not easy n he shouldnt have been so reckless. He has hurt nandu beyond words. Hope they show this in the show n If at all they get back together i seriously want a proper redemption from manik,s side.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -bharti-

Chocomaniac

Im a newcomer to this forum n couldnt resist commenting on your thread.
Luvd your ending, even tho its heartbreaking i too feel manik was too casual when he let her go. Luv is not easy n he shouldnt have been so reckless. He has hurt nandu beyond words. Hope they show this in the show n If at all they get back together i seriously want a proper redemption from manik,s side.

Thank u Bharti 😊 am fairly new here as well. yes you are right.I too would like to see a proper redemption track before all this gets over.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh god such a beautiful piece of writing. I m happy that nabdu didnt melt so easily. Now plz cont it and bring manan closer slowly. Thank u so much for d pm. update soon.

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