FF: Kismat COnnection, ch1 on pg 4(2nd Dec))

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello guys... I know many of u want me to start "The unknown" but the prologue of that FF is taking a little longer time and I may start that FF directly without giving a prologues or character intro..

Neways here i am with another FF "Kismat Connection".. The story of two sisters and their interconnected destinies. The story is full of supernaturals.. m hoping u will like it. N those who wants me to complete my previous FFs... I promise u to give updates of them soon. As i am free today, u might get one or two updates.

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"Is there no other way??" He asked her with tears in his eyes... The pain of separation was clearly visible on his face.. Her pain was not different from his but she was not allowed to cry.. Not at least today.. From tomorrow she will be living the life which she always wanted to.. but at what cost??

"No... For our babies sake we have to do this... If u want u can step back.. After all they are not ur..." The guilt dint let her complete the sentence.. She doesn't want to hurt him more.. His tears were making her weak.. The same tears which were dwelling in her heart but dint flow from her eyes..

"They are a part of mine... they are my daughters and for them I am ready to take any pain..." He cupped her face while saying so... "I can feel ur pain.. And I know u will wait for me... I promise I will love ur daughter more than my life.. " He added.

"Our daughter..." She said proudly.

"Yes... our daughter... I will never let her feel alone and will give all the happiness we wanted to give her... She will have best father on the earth. When u will meet... U will be proud of her and my upbringing." He said while picking one of the kids in his arms.

She nods her head in agreement... Departing from her husband and one of her daughter wasn't easy for her.. For the last time she looks at the kid in his hands and kisses her forehead... caresses her cheeks..

"I am sorry my child... It was all my mistake.. I am responsible for spoiling our family and ur life... I wish I could go back and undo what all I did but that is not possible... It's my punishment to stay away from u and ur dad... But ur mother loves u a lot... Someday we will meet for sure and I hope u will forgive me that day... "

"18 years will pass like 18 seconds and then we will meet... u will look as beautiful as u r looking today.. N I am sure my daughter will look just like u... " He said while pointing towards the other baby.

She smiles when the clouds thunder and sky becomes dark.. The light flashes on one of the tree... She looks at that side as if talking to someone... He was unable to understand the conversation but realizes that the time for separation has come... For the last time he too looks at the child lying in the cradle.. He takes out the locket he was wearing in his neck and keeps it beside her...She looks at him doing so with pain in her eyes... Without turning back he leaves with the child in his hand while she was left behind with another child by her side...

The thundering of clouds increased.. It started raining heavily... She folds her hands and starts rotating at her place.. different colors of light beams falls on her... She starts feeling weak and dizzy but keeps rotating... Finally tears fall down from her eyes and with a great push she falls on the floor hurting herself but she was too weak mentally to feel any physical pain.. She keeps looking at the direction her husband and baby has gone with her hands stretched as if calling them back but without turning back he disappears from his eyes leaving her all alone.


Plz buddy the below id to get pms as sending pms from my original id is becoming tough for me...

P,S. : Please give opinion about it and whether I should continue it or not..

Regards
Vish
Edited by fairylover - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plz Buddy this ID for pms... No pms for this or others FF will be sent to anyone from my above id.
Sorry If I am troubling u but I do not want to send my updates to the person who is uninterested or not from EMA forum. I have to send pms more than once as If has restriction of sending pm to 50 person at once and many members of my buddy list have either left the forum or are from BB8 or it's senseless for me to make extra efforts for them. Hope u will understand.



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Edited by Fairylover_FF - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yep ..u shud continue...it sounds gr8 !!😃😃
Edited by mariee - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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resh
omg so much painful n emotional.
At start there is seperation of siblings/parents/husband wife.😔
Amazing prologue, cntn sn.😳

P.s waiting for The Unknwn as well eagerly😊
Edited by Sh0Nali - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh my...😭
i have no words..
is tat Ragna separation...
continue soon dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ow...so interesting! 👏 Fabulous. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it seems wonderful...plz do cont.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing story..continue soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really interesting... Do continue soon... Will be waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yippee so today we get updates.

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