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So sorry for the delayed comments Vishy. Paarth ( my son) was not well and clinging to me all the time. Hence didn't come to the forum for a few days. Now replying to all pm s one by one.
That was an awesome update. I really don't have words to tell you but you do surprise me every time . Whatever you pen down , it's amazing. How do you do that ? Every story is so different from the other and all are equally fabulous. Have you thought of writing as a profession? If not, you should. I'm sure that your book will be on the best selling list for weeks to come!
Somewhat in continuation with the prologue( though it's a fairy thing ) the parents Vithal and Kamala have taken one kid each with them and are living separately. The two sisters are twins , born together , of the same parents, still in complete contrast with each other. One lives in a land of fairies , stuff toys and girlish with long hair whereas the other one is into wrestling and a complete tomboy.
Like the name Shina! Is it inspired by Shirina? Just curious, I guess. Loved your makeover for Kamala too. Our heroes looks dashing , which goes without saying. Once again I think you will portray Prem as an affable character, you always do.
Is Kalpi not aware of her mom ? Why she's not asking about her?
You have got me hooked on to yet another story of yours. This story has a special charm attached to it. It's like I'm enchanted with all this.
Love you my friend and I still stand by what I said. I will be always around as long as you write 🤗❤️
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