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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: JJKKL




Preggy,

I reached the same conclusion after reading the article.




Yayy! Atleast someone agrees 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: DiyaS

@rithu ... very true ... I always feel that's when the story started to go downhill ... Tejawat's complete confession ... he was a master villain, he wouldn't have confessed his crimes without making sure Paro could not escape him, the way he killed Bindi ... and then Paro's sudden transformation from hate to love.

Her repentance about her mistake in misjudging Rudra was acceptable, but her suddenly tumbling into love with him was not ... that was where the makers went completely wrong. Instead they should have made Paro make up for her mistakes by helping Rudra trace Tejawat and the missing girls ... and slowly fall in love with him along the way. The only reason it made any sense was because of Paro's background, a barely educated devout village girl. They did the same thing with Myrah, made her fall in love with Rudra overnight ... and that was completely stupid.


So true. Paro should have found out about Tejawat one on her own and then helped Rudra prove his case. Tejawat needn't have admitted it. The pre-mela Paro was very shrewd even if barely educated. Paro should have gone from hate to respect to admiration to affection to love very slowly. And Paro's background didn't help because most village girls are shy and reserved and don't talk to men unnecessarily. So that hestitance due to her upbringing must have been shown before they made her this bold girl who was ready to propose in front of so many people.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
This is indeed a wonderful discussion. Thank you Deepa for opening this post. Though there is no way that we can find out the original story of RR atleast this way we can know about others thoughts and connect the dots somehow. To me the list can go on and on and on, such a fabulous story and script butchered In every possible way.
1. ST's separation from his partner is the first setback and I believe they must have changed the entire plot of RR here due to budget constraints.
2. The story was never really bound to just revolve around the haveli all the time may be again budget issues.
3. VK Singh and other officers giving Rudra 4 days to prove the success of the mission - how come this question didn't cross the officers mind that if it was a real baraat who came from saradpar then how the hell did they had all that guns when Rudra and other officers stopped them to cross the border after paro's wedding.
4. Tejawat is the prime villain of this story and he confessing all his crimes to Paro is sheer stupidity instead I thought the weeding will happen during shivarathri mela but Paro will go with Tejawat leaving Rudra again not trustworthy for beautiful women.
5. I think after shivarathri mela they were pretty much re-writing the entire script again on weekly basis based on the Weekly TRP's.( like Paro proposing Rudra, their forced wedding and social workers track).
6. Mala's track was handled so disgustingly - I thought Mohini had a major hand in mala eloping with Tejawat (this way she can own the haveli all by herself) and also I thought Mala and Tejawat were in love even before Mala got married to Dilsher also I think Mohini was supposed to be getting married to Dilsher but maybe Dilsher was attracted to Mala and somehow ended up marrying her.
So many tracks left unjustified and so many unanswered questions.( like Laila, Tejawat , Nandini etc...)
They shouldn't have killed Bindi (Paros friend) so early in the story instead they could have shown her escaping somehow and later revealing Tejawat's truth to Paro and Mala.

May be there is lot of seriousness and tension in the story all the time thus failed to attract Indian audience for sure. They should have added some humour and fun element from the beginning. Whatever it may be I'm still missing Sanish like hell my day doesn't end without watching one episode atleast. I missing them more whenever i see beautiful VM's and collages made by others and read all the FF and OS as these stories are the lifeline right now (thanks a million to all the VM makers and writers as I'm reliving all the Parud's wonderful moments once again). I still feel like smacking colors and ST for ruining such an incredible show and CV's for rushing the script all the time and missing out on so much of possible romance and sweet moments between Parud. Ooh god can't somebody just cast these two in any other show again?





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Posted: 11 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: rithureuben


I don't think so. Her involvement in it directly is debatable but she knew what was going on. My reasons,
1. This scam has been going on for 17 years and she has been with him for 15. He wouldn't have been too careful in the beginning. So she would have noticed things.
2. A lot of work happened in a part of the Haveli where they lived, if you go by Paro's first wedding scenes. Unless she was stuck in her quarters all the time she would have seen guns around. Even her room had hidden weapons which Aman found. Its impossible to assume she didn't know.
3. She has been helping him organise the weddings to girls she has watched grow up and loved like her own, as per Paro at least. So she must know the people receiving the baraat sarhad par.
4. When Paro is teased, she speaks of a gentle, soft spoken young man who might be a poet and that is exactly what Varunsa acted like till he held a gun to her head.
5. When Bindi and Paro praise the BSD Officersa and Tejawat snaps, she looks down guiltily. Because she knows that the organisation that her devarsa belongs to are the good guys and her husband is lying about their atrocities.
As for why she left, Dilsher and Mohini are not pleasant people to live with ask Rudra or Maithili. My guess is she fell in love with Tejawat and eloped. That part is definitely changed to make a saint of her. Originally except for Paro, maybe Maithili and Sunheri, everyone else would have been a different shade of grey.



This is quite an observation Rithu...Even I think Mala definitely knows something about Teju's deeds after so many years of married life..Also as I mentioned in ur FF, I am more intrigued to see Teju's pure love for Mala..so he might have confided something to her..

I guess Mala had fallen in love with Teju before marriage itself but Dilsher who came to see Mohini saw Mala and married her...After marriage he might have known the truth from Mohini and hence starts torturing her making her run away...hmmm so many possibilities and yet CVs took the most absurd one..sighs...😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: SS88

This is an interesting thread. I always will wonder what exactly the story was. And maybe, just maybe, if they had persisted, the TRPs would stabilize. I don't think Paro and Rudra were supposed to get married so quickly in the original one. Neither was Teju's role supposed to be exposed so soon to Paro. I'm sure he left the show because they didn't deliver what they had promised to him.


Welcome to the discussion and thanks for your input buddy..😊..

Even I thought the same about marriage but Rithu's strong argument is making me rethink as it makes sense for Rudra's "beautiful woman syndrome"..

And I agree that Teju's confession is totally bland and out of place..thats when we came to know they have changed the story for TRP..Such strong characters and fabulous artists totally wasted..😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: DiyaS

I'm enjoying the discussions in this thread 😊

I also feel that Paro was not supposed to fall in love with Rudra so quickly ... the marriage was to happen, then she would have fled with Tejawat, making Rudra even more bitter about Khubsoorat Aurat. Paro would have been Tejawat's willing captive, and while in his haveli, she would have come to realise that Rudra was telling the truth all along. Rudra then would come to rescue her, found Mala and Paro on best of terms, and become even more angry. Or he would have kidnapped Mala, as Sadia said in one interview, and bargained with Tejawat for Paro in exchange for Mala.

There was an audition tape for Nandini, so they planned to bring that story in at some point, Rudra would have gone to rescue Nandini ... maybe Paro would have accompanied him ... I think it would have made more sense for her to fall in love with him slowly at that time ... rather than the overnight transformation from hate to love. I always felt that rushing the story of the FL's realisation was in part responsible for the downfall of the trps ... it made the audience stop connecting to Paro at that point, and if the women viewers can't connect to the FL, they won't watch the show.


Welcome to the discussion Diya😊..

Like Rithu you also think marriage would have happened..hmm..but for the syndrome, this sounds reasonable...Wow exchange Mala for Paro..interesting 😆😆...with Teju's everlasting love for Mala as they showed in initial episodes this might have been quite an eyesight with two hot hunks dashing against each other for their beautiful wives respectively😉..

Audition tape for Nandhini?!😲..can you share it here if you can please..this is news for me..so indeed nandhini character was there..Don't even start about FL characterization Diya..it pains to think how the writers in this forum had to explain Paro after every single episode..CVs made a mockery of her characterization after that shivrathri drama..


The girl was uneducated and naive and innocent, but

who made a vegetable cutter from a sewing machine for her maamisa
who was smart enough to fool Rudra and Aman when she was followed behind
who challenged Rudra in his own house in his own room
who was determined to burn her hands to avoid putting his name
who was mature enough to not believe Mohini and took Rudra side

should have never shown as a dumb, senseless and immature character afterwards and how the hell they expected TRPs..😡


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Posted: 11 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: rithureuben


So true. Paro should have found out about Tejawat one on her own and then helped Rudra prove his case. Tejawat needn't have admitted it. The pre-mela Paro was very shrewd even if barely educated. Paro should have gone from hate to respect to admiration to affection to love very slowly. And Paro's background didn't help because most village girls are shy and reserved and don't talk to men unnecessarily. So that hestitance due to her upbringing must have been shown before they made her this bold girl who was ready to propose in front of so many people.



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepsel


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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">This is quite an observation Rithu...Even I think Mala definitely knows something about Teju's deeds after so many years of married life..Also as I mentioned in ur FF, I am more intrigued to see Teju's pure love for Mala..so he might have confided something to her..</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">I guess Mala had fallen in love with Teju before marriage itself but Dilsher who came to see Mohini saw Mala and married her...After marriage he might have known the truth from Mohini and hence starts torturing her making her run away...hmmm so many possibilities and yet CVs took the most absurd one..sighs...😕</font>


Teju loved Mala. It is so evident in the beginning of the show. I don't think he would have tortured her and held her hostage. Mohini is older so definitely Dilsher's family would have intended for him to marry her but he chose Mala instead. Whether she loved Teju before she got married is debatable though your point is interesting. If she loved another man he won't be kind to her inspite of choosing her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Iluvashish30

This is indeed a wonderful discussion. Thank you Deepa for opening this post. Though there is no way that we can find out the original story of RR atleast this way we can know about others thoughts and connect the dots somehow. To me the list can go on and on and on, such a fabulous story and script butchered In every possible way.

1. ST's separation from his partner is the first setback and I believe they must have changed the entire plot of RR here due to budget constraints.
2. The story was never really bound to just revolve around the haveli all the time may be again budget issues.
3. VK Singh and other officers giving Rudra 4 days to prove the success of the mission - how come this question didn't cross the officers mind that if it was a real baraat who came from saradpar then how the hell did they had all that guns when Rudra and other officers stopped them to cross the border after paro's wedding.
4. Tejawat is the prime villain of this story and he confessing all his crimes to Paro is sheer stupidity instead I thought the weeding will happen during shivarathri mela but Paro will go with Tejawat leaving Rudra again not trustworthy for beautiful women.
5. I think after shivarathri mela they were pretty much re-writing the entire script again on weekly basis based on the Weekly TRP's.( like Paro proposing Rudra, their forced wedding and social workers track).
6. Mala's track was handled so disgustingly - I thought Mohini had a major hand in mala eloping with Tejawat (this way she can own the haveli all by herself) and also I thought Mala and Tejawat were in love even before Mala got married to Dilsher also I think Mohini was supposed to be getting married to Dilsher but maybe Dilsher was attracted to Mala and somehow ended up marrying her.
So many tracks left unjustified and so many unanswered questions.( like Laila, Tejawat , Nandini etc...)
They shouldn't have killed Bindi (Paros friend) so early in the story instead they could have shown her escaping somehow and later revealing Tejawat's truth to Paro and Mala.

May be there is lot of seriousness and tension in the story all the time thus failed to attract Indian audience for sure. They should have added some humour and fun element from the beginning. Whatever it may be I'm still missing Sanish like hell my day doesn't end without watching one episode atleast. I missing them more whenever i see beautiful VM's and collages made by others and read all the FF and OS as these stories are the lifeline right now (thanks a million to all the VM makers and writers as I'm reliving all the Parud's wonderful moments once again). I still feel like smacking colors and ST for ruining such an incredible show and CV's for rushing the script all the time and missing out on so much of possible romance and sweet moments between Parud. Ooh god can't somebody just cast these two in any other show again?


First of all thanks for your wonderful inputs and welcome to the discussion buddy 😊..Well I cannot take the credit alone for this thread as the idea was JJ's too😳..

All the points you have mentioned above are very valid..
I like to add my thoughts about point 3 why the 4 day deadline can be justified..

Rudra killed all whole baraat except Paro who had no idea about the weapons and hence no one knows for sure that the weapons were indeed seized from baraat..Though V.K.Singh knows, they need proof and thats where Paro comes..(of course they all know Tejawat is dealing with arms but needed just proof to catch him redhanded)..

Also Teju might have some influence with higher officials to prove that BSD is trying to frame him without any proof..So I think the action from V.K.Singh is justified though it was cliched..

LOL..u r not alone in smacking colors and ST ..trust me 😆😆



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